Dil Yu Jala Mera Sari Raat...

by Ritesh Modi on September 23, 2012, 02:33:32 PM
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Dil yu jala mera sari raat ki dhuaN uthta raha iss dil se sari raat,
Khamosh ham rahe sari raat, tera naam badnam hone ki fikr mein sari raat,
Kya bayan karu kya biti mujh pe sari raat, apni hi barbadi pe hasee ham saari raat,
Phir jab subah hoyi toh maloom hua fizul hi ham roye sari raat,
Jiski thi itni chinta hamko, bade araam se soye wo sari raat......
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«Reply #1 on: September 23, 2012, 03:24:20 PM »
v nice...
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«Reply #2 on: September 23, 2012, 03:56:37 PM »
superb
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«Reply #3 on: September 23, 2012, 04:58:47 PM »
good one.. Applause  Applause  Applause  Applause
misunderstanding..
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«Reply #4 on: September 23, 2012, 05:13:48 PM »
vry nyc.. khaas kar ki last 2lines bahut achhi hai  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: September 23, 2012, 05:16:46 PM »
Quote from: gaytri gupta on September 23, 2012, 03:24:20 PM
v nice...
thank you gaytri ji...
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«Reply #6 on: September 23, 2012, 05:17:17 PM »
Quote from: aqsh on September 23, 2012, 03:56:37 PM
superb
thank you...
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«Reply #7 on: September 23, 2012, 05:18:07 PM »
Quote from: mkv on September 23, 2012, 04:58:47 PM
good one.. Applause  Applause  Applause  Applause
misunderstanding..
thank you lekin misunderstanding kis baat ke liye likha aap ne...
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«Reply #8 on: September 23, 2012, 05:18:58 PM »
Quote from: jazbaat on September 23, 2012, 05:13:48 PM
vry nyc.. khaas kar ki last 2lines bahut achhi hai  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
thank you Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: September 24, 2012, 12:42:49 AM »
good
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«Reply #10 on: September 24, 2012, 03:35:03 AM »
Quote from: nandbahu on September 24, 2012, 12:42:49 AM
good
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«Reply #11 on: September 24, 2012, 03:37:14 AM »
very niceeeee Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #12 on: September 24, 2012, 03:41:01 AM »
Quote from: soudagar on September 24, 2012, 03:37:14 AM
very niceeeee Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
thank you.....Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: September 24, 2012, 04:03:41 AM »
beautiful
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«Reply #14 on: September 24, 2012, 04:08:07 AM »
Quote from: sksaini4 on September 24, 2012, 04:03:41 AM
beautiful
thank you saini sahab....
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