******DIL-O-JAAN ******:Shayri-E-Dard

baadal102

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Banaya tha jo RISTA mil ke aap ne hum se,
POOJA tha hum ne bhi use DIL-O-JAAN se,

Sirf ye JANAM hi nahi maaga tha aap se,
Har JANAM maanga tha aap ka DIL-O-JAAN se,

Banaya tha jo AASHIYA saath mil ke aap se,
Use SAJAYA tha maine apne DIL-O-JAAN se,

Jo ZINDGEE laye the hum dunia mai milke aap se,
Use bhi hamesha PYAR kiya maine DIL-O-JAAN se,

Jo SAPNE poore kiye humne mil ke aap se,
Un sapno ko bhi SAHEJ ke rakha DIL-O-JAAN se,

Har AARMAN poore kiye mil ke aap se,
Unhe mala mai PIRO ke rakha DIL-O-JAAN se,

Humme THUKRAYA hai jo gairo ke milne se,
Use JAKHEM ko bhi sahej ke rakhunga mai DIL-O-JAAN se.....

Baadal

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punam

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Re: ******DIL-O-JAAN ******

«Reply #1 on: January 14, 2008, 09:18:52 AM »

wow Baadal ji kya baat hai..bahot khoob likha aapne..let me try..
aap jaise thora likhun.. hehehe..shayari nahi toh colour me hi sahi.. hehehe..

Unhe BHOOLANE ki koshish to karti rahi
Is se DARD aur jo badh gaya...yeh bataun kaise..

Dil ko SAMJHANE ki koshish to karti rahi
Aankhen jo BARSE toh chupaun kaise..

Jo APNA tha wo aaj apna na raha
Yaadon se use NIKALUN kaise..

Bhulne ki KOSHISH bhi karun toh kaise..
CHAHTI hun jo unhe DIL-O-JAAN se...


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honeyrose

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Re: ******DIL-O-JAAN ******

«Reply #2 on: January 14, 2008, 09:30:11 AM »

Baadal ji bohat acha hai shayari appka Usual Smile


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prmchawla

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Re: ******DIL-O-JAAN ******

«Reply #3 on: January 14, 2008, 10:25:38 AM »

baadal very nice
yaar yeh batao ki agar mai koi naya topic start karna chahta hu to kese karu. what is the proceadure.


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punam

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Re: ******DIL-O-JAAN ******

«Reply #4 on: January 14, 2008, 10:49:33 AM »

bas aap k topic k hisab se.. suppose aap ishq me likhna chahte ho..toh khumar-e-ishq me jao..wahan other language k niche aap ko..
left side pages dikhenge..right side..Mark as read...Notify..k baad aap
Submit New poetry/post jo hai uspe click karo...bas jo likhna hai likho..
thread ka naam jo lage aap ko woh subject me do..aur post kardo..
think aap samjh gaye ...


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baadal102

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Re: ******DIL-O-JAAN ******

«Reply #5 on: January 14, 2008, 11:02:51 AM »

thanx rose ji & chawla ji
chawla ji aap ne mujh se jo poocha
wo punam ji ne aap ko bata diya
fir bhi koi kaam ho to yaad karna

thanx again

Baadal


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prmchawla

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«Reply #6 on: January 14, 2008, 12:04:52 PM »

thank u very much punam and baadal.


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Roja

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Re: ******DIL-O-JAAN ******

«Reply #7 on: January 14, 2008, 04:18:27 PM »

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Jo SAPNE poore kiye humne mil ke aap se,
Un sapno ko bhi SAHEJ ke rakha DIL-O-JAAN se,

Har AARMAN poore kiye mil ke aap se,
Unhe mala mai PIRO ke rakha DIL-O-JAAN se,

Bahut khoob baadal ji... Bahut accha laga padkar.
Nice expression.


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Pooja

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Re: ******DIL-O-JAAN ******

«Reply #8 on: January 14, 2008, 04:21:38 PM »

wah kaya baat hai Badal ji!! ek ek line bahoot hi achi likhi hai...

dil-o-jaan se jinko apni jaan banaya tha
usne hume apni ankhon mai mahan banaya tha
torr kar sare sapne hum bewafa khud hi ban gaye
jinko badi wafa se humne apne dil mai sajaya tha...


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baadal102

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«Reply #9 on: January 14, 2008, 04:26:14 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on January 14, 2008, 04:21:38 PM

dil-o-jaan se jinko apni jaan banaya tha
usne hume apni ankhon mai mahan banaya tha
torr kar sare sapne hum bewafa khud hi ban gaye
jinko badi wafa se humne apne dil mai sajaya tha...

thanx roja ji & pooja ji
bahut aacha likha hai aap ne pooja ji
thanx

Baadal


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Pooja

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Re: ******DIL-O-JAAN ******

«Reply #10 on: January 14, 2008, 04:28:30 PM »

acha to nahi likha.. magar abhi ke liye jawab likha ki apko shikayat na ho..

apki is khoobsurat kavita ka jawab baad mai aram se deti hu...


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baadal102

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«Reply #11 on: January 14, 2008, 04:29:43 PM »

thik hai pooja ji i am waiting 4 ur reply.

Baadal


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baadal102

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Re: ******DIL-O-JAAN ******

«Reply #12 on: March 25, 2008, 08:52:11 AM »

pooja ji i am waiting 4 ur reply

Baadal


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Pooja

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«Reply #13 on: March 25, 2008, 07:09:21 PM »

baadal ji ajj bhi wo baat nahi bani jo apki kavita pard kar feel hoti hai aor likhne ka man hota hai... pata nahi kyun shabdo mai wo baat nahi la pa rahi hu.. maafi chahti hu.. phir bhi jo likha hai wo post kar rahi hu!!

Banaya tha jo RISHTA mil ke aap ne hum se,
Ajj khud hi torr kar kaise na jaane kis aor gaye

Mangein the saanto janam jisne humse
Wo issi janam mai rishta torr gaye

Dhoop hai, barsaat hai, ajj bhi wo thundi chaw hai
Phir kaise is ashiane se ajj apna munh morr gaye

Her mera sapna ban jaata that tera bhi khwab
Phir kaise ajj sare khwab torr gaye

Meri ek hansi per kahte the luta dooga apni jaan
Ajj kaise mere ankhon mai sirf ansoo chor gaye!!!!!


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harashmahajan

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Re: ******DIL-O-JAAN ******

«Reply #14 on: March 26, 2008, 03:40:29 AM »

Ahaa Baadal punamm roja puja...bai waah kya khoob rally hai...ab kya kaheiN....baadal ji aapki kavish ka jawaab nahiN...or punam ka us par jawaab..maash'allah......bahut khoob peshkash hai aapne....

Pooja ji ..Achhi kavish hai....insaaN ki koshish hi rang laati hai aapki koshish bhi Rang layii hai....is se purnoor our kya ho sakta hai.....Ek instant kavish par is nacheez ki mubarakbaad kabool FarmayeiN.....nazm bahut pasand aayii....aise tohfoN ka maziid bhii intezaar rahega....bahut-bahut shukriyaa janaab

Harash


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