******DIL-O-JAAN ****** -Panna 2:Shayri-E-Dard

baadal102

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«Reply #15 on: March 26, 2008, 03:50:22 AM »

bahoot khoob pooja ji wahhhh

thanx a lot harsh ji

Baadal


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aarzoomehek

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Re: ******DIL-O-JAAN ******

«Reply #16 on: March 26, 2008, 04:03:19 AM »

bohot hi khoobsurat aur sache ehsaas...pehli baar parha hai aapko...bohot acha laga hai...keep writing n keep sharing.. Usual Smile


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baadal102

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«Reply #17 on: March 26, 2008, 04:34:28 AM »

Lutta ke khud ko SANWARA tha tumhe dil se,
Tari her AADA ko nikhara tha DIL-O-JAAN se,

Ruh to kya JISM ko bhi tera banaya tha dil se,
AANKHO mai sirf basaya tha tumhe DIL-O-JAAN se,

Ek tari HANSI ko jindgii banaya tha dil se,
Tare LABO pe aaye har baat ko maana tha DIL-o-JAAN se,

Tujhe hi SURAJ tujhe hi chand maana tha dil se,
Tari TAPISH or thandak ko apnaya tha DIL-O-JAAN se,

Har pal tera NAAM mare labo pe tha dil se,
Tare har NAAZ uthaye tha palko pe DIL-O-JAAN se,

Aansoo na dene ka WAADA tha dono ka dil se,
Tum NIBHAA na sake or use hum ne nibhaya DIL-O-JAAN se...........

Baadal tearyeyed


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honeyrose

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«Reply #18 on: March 26, 2008, 05:08:13 AM »

Baadal ji bohat acha likha hai ... Applause


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baadal102

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«Reply #19 on: March 26, 2008, 04:34:22 PM »

thanx a lot aarzoo ji & honey ji

Baadal


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Pooja

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«Reply #20 on: March 26, 2008, 04:40:53 PM »

wah bahoot khoob baadal ji!! bahoot hi dil se apne yah kavita likhi hai!!


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mistufer

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«Reply #21 on: March 28, 2008, 09:22:33 PM »

Quote from: baadal102 on January 14, 2008, 09:16:17 AM

Banaya tha jo RISTA mil ke aap ne hum se,
POOJA tha hum ne bhi use DIL-O-JAAN se,

Sirf ye JANAM hi nahi maaga tha aap se,
Har JANAM maanga tha aap ka DIL-O-JAAN se,

Banaya tha jo AASHIYA saath mil ke aap se,
Use SAJAYA tha maine apne DIL-O-JAAN se,

Jo ZINDGEE laye the hum dunia mai milke aap se,
Use bhi hamesha PYAR kiya maine DIL-O-JAAN se,

Jo SAPNE poore kiye humne mil ke aap se,
Un sapno ko bhi SAHEJ ke rakha DIL-O-JAAN se,

Har AARMAN poore kiye mil ke aap se,
Unhe mala mai PIRO ke rakha DIL-O-JAAN se,

Humme THUKRAYA hai jo gairo ke milne se,
Use JAKHEM ko bhi sahej ke rakhunga mai DIL-O-JAAN se.....

Baadal

Sorry for mistakes

badaal ji

bahut khub andaaz mein aapne dil ke jazbaat like hain.
yunhi likhte rahiye take care

nira


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baadal102

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«Reply #22 on: March 29, 2008, 07:44:40 AM »

thanx pooja ji lakin aap ka reply kaha hai

thanx nira ji thanx a lot,saayad nira ji aap ne poori post nahi dekhi.sirf 1st page hi dekha hai

Baadal


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mistufer

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«Reply #23 on: March 29, 2008, 02:14:14 PM »

Quote from: baadal102 on March 29, 2008, 07:44:40 AM

thanx pooja ji lakin aap ka reply kaha hai

thanx nira ji thanx a lot,saayad nira ji aap ne poori post nahi dekhi.sirf 1st page hi dekha hai

Baadal

i'm sryyyyyy badaal first page hi dekha tha, aaj baki ke dekhloongi


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baadal102

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«Reply #24 on: March 29, 2008, 02:42:45 PM »

nira ji is mai sorry wali koi baat nahi hai
its ok,waise itne lambhi sorryyyyy dekh ke
mai to ghabra hi gaya tha tongue3

Baadal


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mistufer

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«Reply #25 on: March 29, 2008, 02:47:07 PM »

Quote from: baadal102 on March 29, 2008, 02:42:45 PM

nira ji is mai sorry wali koi baat nahi hai
its ok,waise itne lambhi sorryyyyy dekh ke
mai to ghabra hi gaya tha tongue3

Baadal

nana ghabrao nahi choti si sry thi. , kaho toh wapas le leti hoon


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«Reply #26 on: March 29, 2008, 02:50:21 PM »

Quote from: baadal102 on March 26, 2008, 04:34:28 AM

KYA BAAT HAI!!! BAHUT KHOOB BAADALJI..
BAHUT ACHA LIKHA HAI DIL-O-JAAN SE Applause


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baadal102

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«Reply #27 on: November 28, 2008, 12:47:04 PM »

thanx a lot khwaish ji

Baadal


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