Din ho kaise bhi......

by Just_Hate_Love on December 10, 2004, 05:28:07 AM
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Din ho kaise bhi lekin gujar jayenge,
Dil me yaadon ke jariye utar jayenge,
Aisi tirchhi najar se na dekho hame,
Varna bemaut jiteji mar jayenge,
Sari duniya padi hai tumhare liye,
Hum kaha jayenge-kithar jayenge,
Daag dil par lage hai wo mitenge nahi,
Jism ke ghaav mana ke bhar jayenge,
Usne to badnaam kiya hai hame,
Hum magar usko mashoor kar jayenge.
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Meena
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«Reply #1 on: December 10, 2004, 03:54:12 PM »
wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh bohot khub! very nice, keep writing!

 :D
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Pooja
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«Reply #2 on: December 10, 2004, 04:17:53 PM »
dil dharkata hai kahi uska naam na le du
wo ek shakas jo meri zindagi badal gaya!!!

dekar wade hajar, ek wada bhi jo nibha na saka
kayun us shakas ka naam duniya ko bataya na gaya!!!!
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Meena
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«Reply #3 on: December 10, 2004, 04:22:53 PM »
na le apne meheboob ka nam,
na kar uski hasti ko badnam,
ke jo hua so hua,
uski yaad me jeena hai aab tera kam.
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Pooja
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«Reply #4 on: December 10, 2004, 04:25:46 PM »
jeene ka matlab bataye koi
kaya hai zindagi muje bhi samjhaye koi
gum jo usne diya, samjh mai atta hai meri
bhir bhi mera hi dil, mujko sataye?
yah ajj samjhaye koi!!!!!
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #5 on: December 10, 2004, 04:31:48 PM »
Quote from: "Pooja"
jeene ka matlab bataye koi
kaya hai zindagi muje bhi samjhaye koi
gum jo usne diya, samjh mai atta hai meri
bhir bhi mera hi dil, mujko sataye?
yah ajj samjhaye koi!!!!!


wowowwow just_hate....pooja.....meena.....excellent....

ek umr mein na samjhe isko zameen wale
jo baat paa gaye hum thori si zindagi mein..............
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Pooja
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«Reply #6 on: December 10, 2004, 04:35:26 PM »
kash yah baat tab samjhi hoti jamane se
ab jamane mai koi bataye, hum kidher jai!!!!!
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #7 on: December 10, 2004, 04:38:39 PM »
Quote from: "Pooja"
kash yah baat tab samjhi hoti jamane se
ab jamane mai koi bataye, hum kidher jai!!!!!


wow pooja...........very touching words...............

Duniya Mein Abhi Naqsh Jamaana Hai Tujhe
Guftaar Ko Kirdaar Mein Lana Hai Tujhe
”Waheed”  Ke Ashaar Ko Padhne Waale
Har Shair Ko Tareekh Banana Hai Tujhe.............
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Pooja
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«Reply #8 on: December 10, 2004, 04:53:20 PM »
wah!!! bahoot khoob!!!!
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Meena
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«Reply #9 on: December 10, 2004, 04:54:04 PM »
wowwwwwwwwwww pooja and waheed ji!
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KaMaL
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«Reply #10 on: December 10, 2004, 04:58:28 PM »
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"

Din ho kaise bhi lekin gujar jayenge,
Dil me yaadon ke jariye utar jayenge,
Aisi tirchhi najar se na dekho hame,
Varna bemaut jiteji mar jayenge,
Sari duniya padi hai tumhare liye,
Hum kaha jayenge-kidhar jayenge,
Daag dil par lage hai wo mitenge nahi,
Jism ke ghaav mana ke bhar jayenge,
Usne to badnaam kiya hai hame,
Hum magar usko mashoor kar jayenge.



Bahut khoob...Just Hate love ji...

Har shai jo dilati hai, teri yaad mujhko
Waapas tujhe hum kar jaayenge

Oo meri zindigi tabah karne wale
Ziindigi tere naam hum kar jayenge
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Meena
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«Reply #11 on: December 10, 2004, 04:59:53 PM »
wahhhhhhhhhhh kamal ji bohot acha kaha, kuch lines me bohot kuch kehe diya!
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Nino
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«Reply #12 on: December 10, 2004, 05:00:02 PM »
Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
Duniya Mein Abhi Naqsh Jamaana Hai Tujhe
Guftaar Ko Kirdaar Mein Lana Hai Tujhe
”Waheed”  Ke Ashaar Ko Padhne Waale
Har Shair Ko Tareekh Banana Hai Tujhe.............



Waheed bhai too good .............meri ek choti si koshish


Tarikh to main banjaoon mager padega kaun
guftaar ko kirdaar mein leaaon mager dekhega kaun
tum baat karte ho naqsh jamaane ki Nino
ager main aaj khuda bhi ban jaoon to sajda karega kaun
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Pooja
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«Reply #13 on: December 10, 2004, 05:06:13 PM »
har baat ek Trikh ban kar rah gai
har umind ek yaad ban kar rah gai!!!!!

jab bhi murr kar kuch sochana chaha
her soch, ankho mai, kuch boonden ban kar rah gai!!!!
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #14 on: December 11, 2004, 08:33:35 AM »
Quote from: "Nino"
Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
Duniya Mein Abhi Naqsh Jamaana Hai Tujhe
Guftaar Ko Kirdaar Mein Lana Hai Tujhe
”Waheed”  Ke Ashaar Ko Padhne Waale
Har Shair Ko Tareekh Banana Hai Tujhe.............



Waheed bhai too good .............meri ek choti si koshish


Tarikh to main banjaoon mager padega kaun
guftaar ko kirdaar mein leaaon mager dekhega kaun
tum baat karte ho naqsh jamaane ki Nino
ager main aaj khuda bhi ban jaoon to sajda karega kaun


shukriya ..........nino...........wonderful nino......la-jawaab......
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