Do boond aansu ......

by Just_Hate_Love on March 11, 2007, 04:43:02 PM
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Do boond aansu bahake khudko begunaah saabit kar jaana,
Mehfil mein hame gunehgaar banane ke liye unki yeh ada bhi khoob rahi,

Phir jeena to hum chahte hi nahi the aur marne ki koshish bahut ki,
Par kya kare zinda rakhne ki saazish mein unse galti se hui dua bhi khoob rahi,

Na jaane kaise tootne ke baad bhi hamara dil saanse le raha tha,
Shayad meri saanso mein unse kishto se li hui hawa bhi khoob rahi ......
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Aryaan
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«Reply #1 on: March 12, 2007, 01:36:26 AM »
Bohat khoob JHL...
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #2 on: March 12, 2007, 06:29:43 AM »
well said JHl..
Nice one by u
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Pooja
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«Reply #3 on: March 13, 2007, 04:52:40 PM »
wah kaya baat hai.... last two lines bahoot hi achi lagi!!

Payaar ki barsaat. Kaise ansoo ki barsaat main badal gai
e-meri-zindagi, kab kaha kaise mujhse bichard gai
Sochati rahi ki wo ayye aor manaye mujko
Meri apni zid, na jaane kab do ansoo mai badal gai!!!
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husna parveen
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«Reply #4 on: March 13, 2007, 05:41:04 PM »
wah wah! kiya baat hain dear. nice lage raho. hmmm huuh.
LOVE:  easy to say, difficult to stay, beautiful to feel diificult to deal ,
DIFFICULT: is PART of LIFE but thts the reason WHY THE GRL FRND IS NEVER A WIFE...
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Meena is back
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«Reply #5 on: March 19, 2007, 12:54:49 PM »
wah wah JHL and pooja didi!!!

na woh mante te , na hum mane te,
jane kaise hogaye humare raste alag,
fasle hogaye itne darmiyan "Meena",
ke mith na paye woh abhi tak!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #6 on: March 19, 2007, 01:00:15 PM »
welcome back Meena!! Nice to see you after a long time..

bahoot acha likha hai!!

sath sath the, magar tanha tanha
tanha tanha the, magar socho main sath
ajeeb rishte hai, dil nahi raha ek
magar abhi bhi hai hatho main hath
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«Reply #7 on: March 19, 2007, 02:05:23 PM »
thank u didi!!! aab itna time nahin milta ane ko par mai try karti rehti hoon Usual Smile
bohot khoob likha apne!!!

woh pas mere baitha tha,
par phir bhi anjana tha,
rishta tha ussse koi aisa,
jo humne usse nibana tha!
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natural
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«Reply #8 on: March 20, 2007, 10:15:46 PM »
Nice one JHL.... Usual Smile
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #9 on: March 26, 2007, 06:16:23 PM »
Thanks a lot everyone for appreciation ...
After a long time i written anything ...
And i dint knew that it will be a good one ...
Thanks again ...
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Pooja
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«Reply #10 on: March 26, 2007, 07:07:25 PM »
app aye the to jawab to kuch likh jaate
humko likhne kokuch de jaate
intzaar app itna karwaate ho kayun
akar, bin likhe chale jaate ho kayun sad5
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Talat
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«Reply #11 on: March 27, 2007, 12:30:26 PM »
Bohot khoob JHL....bohot dino ke baad aap ko parhne ko mila....very nice !!

Nice ones Husna, Pooja and Meena !
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #12 on: April 08, 2007, 11:53:58 AM »
Thanks a lot Talat for appreciation ...
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«Reply #13 on: April 08, 2007, 12:05:22 PM »
Quote from: "Pooja"
app aye the to jawab to kuch likh jaate
humko likhne kokuch de jaate
intzaar app itna karwaate ho kayun
akar, bin likhe chale jaate ho kayun sad5



Intezaar hamari palke kar rahi thi ek deedar ko,
Gunaah ho gaya aur pata bhi na laga mujh gunehgaar ko,
Ab sazaa jo bhi milegi is naachiz ko manzoor hogi,
Bas thoda sa waqt hame dena mohabbat-e-izhaar ko ...
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