Do Raahein Aur Do Musafir "Khwaish"

by khwaish on December 01, 2011, 01:42:06 PM
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"Meri Khushi Ke Khaatir Khud Ko Sambhaal Rakhna
Usne Kaha Tha Mujhse "Khud Ka Khayal Rakhna"!!!!!!



Yeh Ghazal Ek khaas Soch par likhi Gayi..Milna-Bichadna To Har Ek Ke Naseeb Mein Likha Hota Hai Chaahe Woh Rishta Dosti Ka Ho, Mohabbat Ka Ho yaa Phir Koi Bhi Duniyavi Rishta ..Apno se Bichadne ka Dard Lafzon mein Bayaan Karna Asaan Nahi..Yahan iss Ghazal Mein Bichadna Unn Do Logon ka Hai Jo Ek Duje Se Be-panaah Mohabbat karte Hai..Par Unki Samajhdaari Hi Hai Jo Unhe Ek-Duje Se Door Karti hai..Maqte Ke Sher Ko Gaur Se Padhiyega To Hi Uski Gehrai Samaj Aayegi....Shukriya


Juda Hokar Bhi Tujhse Judaai Nahi Hai
yeh Kaisi Qaid Jisme Rihaai Nahi Hai

Teri Har Majboori Mere Sar Aankhon Par..!!
Rutha Hoon Tujhse Par Kyon Ruswai Nahi hai

Zaroori Nahi Ke Main Har Lamha Yaad Rahu Tujhe
Tu Mujhe BhoolJa Isme Meri Koi Manai Nahi hai

Rishton Ko Kuch Naam Dena Aadat si Ban Gayi Hai..!!
Kya Bin Naam Ke Rishto Mein Koi Gehrai Nahi Hai??

Ashq Aankhon mein Reh-Rehkar Sookh gaye Hai..!!
Inn Aankhon Se Barsaat Ab Tak Kyon Aai Nahi Hai

"Khwaish" Do Raahein  Aur Do Musafir...!!!!
Ek Duje Ki Zindagi Mein Humne Aag Lagai Nahi Hai

               ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


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«Reply #1 on: December 01, 2011, 03:12:48 PM »
jis rishte ka byaan aapne yha kiya hai wo rishta yakeenan hi bahut khoobsurat hoga...aur bahut gehra hoga ...aankhiri line rishte ki imaandari zaahir karti hai...
Rishton ko naam dena ek parampara hai duniya ki
Ye Rishton ki gehrayi ki nahi, maan-samaan ki baat hai
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«Reply #2 on: December 01, 2011, 03:20:55 PM »

yaad uski kuchh ish kadar hume aane lagi.,

jaise unki yaado se hi ye saans chalti hai..


bahut khoob farmaya khwaish bhai aapne...

dil ko unn baato ne fir se gher liya, par wakai.. bahut achhi peshkas..


 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

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«Reply #3 on: December 01, 2011, 04:05:07 PM »
"Kya bin naam kay rishton main gehrayi nahin hai?"
Wah Wah Wah..
Kya baat kehdi apne Khwaish dost..
Dil tak ponch gayi..
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Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #4 on: December 01, 2011, 04:59:46 PM »
Khawahish Jee Aadaab!

Janab kafi gehre aur dil ko chhute ahsaas O khayaal
rahe aapki kalaam ke.. Sabhi ashaar behad achche rahe..

HaaN sahiN farmayaa aapne ke dono ki samjhdaari hi dono
ko door hone ke bawjud baNdhe rakhti hai.. Usual Smile

Kalaam par dili daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye.. Aate rahiye.. Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile         

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«Reply #5 on: December 01, 2011, 05:25:36 PM »
khwaish ji....... notworthy notworthy

kya kahun iss peshkash k bare me main... bilkul shunya sa ho gaya hai mind ye padhke..... kuch rishte jo yunhi jud jate hain ... hum sab k sath.. jinka koi sahi naam nahin hota..lekin unki mithaas khun k aur samaaj k baandhe hue rishton se bhi mithi hoti hai.. unhi k liye dedicated hai aapki ye post....

1 of ur bestest poems khwaish ji.......
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«Reply #6 on: December 02, 2011, 07:08:39 AM »
jis rishte ka byaan aapne yha kiya hai wo rishta yakeenan hi bahut khoobsurat hoga...aur bahut gehra hoga ...aankhiri line rishte ki imaandari zaahir karti hai...
Rishton ko naam dena ek parampara hai duniya ki
Ye Rishton ki gehrayi ki nahi, maan-samaan ki baat hai

Pooja Thanks a Million For Reading This..
Kuch Rishte Ghere,Khoobsurat,Aur Imaandaari se Bharpoor Rehte Hai
Par Unn Rishto Ko Naam Naa Do To Unn Rishton Ki Koi Buniyaad Hi Nahi..
Hmm Sahi Kaha Aapne Rishton Ko Naam Dena Maan-Samaan Ki Hi Baat Hai.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: December 02, 2011, 07:15:20 AM »
BAhut BAhut Khoob Khwaish Ji
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: December 02, 2011, 07:46:26 AM »

yaad uski kuchh ish kadar hume aane lagi.,

jaise unki yaado se hi ye saans chalti hai..


bahut khoob farmaya khwaish bhai aapne...

dil ko unn baato ne fir se gher liya, par wakai.. bahut achhi peshkas..


 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



Touhid Aapne Apna Waqt Diya..Aapka Bahut Bahut Shukriya..

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«Reply #9 on: December 02, 2011, 09:58:42 AM »
BAHUT HI NAYAAAB AASAAR RAHE HAIN ,,,DAAD HAZIR HAI  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: December 02, 2011, 11:20:31 AM »
"Kya bin naam kay rishton main gehrayi nahin hai?"
Wah Wah Wah..
Kya baat kehdi apne Khwaish dost..
Dil tak ponch gayi..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Khush rahiye..!

Aapka Tehhhh Dil Se Shukriya Dost Rahim...

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«Reply #11 on: December 02, 2011, 11:42:38 AM »
wah khwaishji...  Applause Applause Applause Applause

gahare ehsas aur gahara rishta dono saf dikhai de rahe hain.. mann kuch likhne ko prerit ho gaya

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«Reply #12 on: December 02, 2011, 12:37:55 PM »
Khawahish Jee Aadaab!

Janab kafi gehre aur dil ko chhute ahsaas O khayaal
rahe aapki kalaam ke.. Sabhi ashaar behad achche rahe..

HaaN sahiN farmayaa aapne ke dono ki samjhdaari hi dono
ko door hone ke bawjud baNdhe rakhti hai.. Usual Smile

Kalaam par dili daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye.. Aate rahiye.. Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile         




Aapka Bahuttttt Bahutttt Shukriya Parwaaz Ji..

Yuhi Humesha Saath dete Rahiyega.. icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #13 on: December 02, 2011, 01:44:26 PM »
Khwaish ji.Bahut khoobsurat pesh kash hai aur aap ke note ke saath parhne mein aur bhi dil ko chhoo gayi.Mubarak ho.HASAN
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«Reply #14 on: December 02, 2011, 02:51:17 PM »
khwaish ji....... notworthy notworthy

kya kahun iss peshkash k bare me main... bilkul shunya sa ho gaya hai mind ye padhke..... kuch rishte jo yunhi jud jate hain ... hum sab k sath.. jinka koi sahi naam nahin hota..lekin unki mithaas khun k aur samaaj k baandhe hue rishton se bhi mithi hoti hai.. unhi k liye dedicated hai aapki ye post....

1 of ur bestest poems khwaish ji.......
 love4 love4 love4 love4 love4 love4 love4 love4 love4


Ji Bilkul Sach Kaha Aapne...Kuch Rishte Aise Bhi Hote Hai Jo Zindagi bhar Aisi Mithaas De jaate Hai Jo Bane-banaye Rishte Bhi naa De Sake..

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