Do Raahein Aur Do Musafir "Khwaish"

by khwaish on December 01, 2011, 01:42:06 PM
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«Reply #15 on: December 03, 2011, 11:14:14 PM »
BAUT HE ACHA LIKHTE HO KHWAISH BHAI
LIKHTE REHEIN SDA, HAI YEHI DUA
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«Reply #16 on: December 04, 2011, 08:01:19 AM »
Khwaish Ji
Aadaab,
mere net ne bahut pareshan kiya.. aur bahar bhi jana pada, ek din reply me kuch likha bhi tha lekin post karte 2 log-in time finish..aaj pahle aap se hi shuruaat ki hai..
Bahut hi behatrin peshkash hai..pooja, kasak, hasan ji no jo likha hai vahi mere bhi alphaaj hai..
bas sabke dilo.n tak aapki baat pahuch gai vahi saccha appreciation hai..
outstanding...
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«Reply #17 on: December 06, 2011, 03:27:11 PM »
bahut bahut khub khwaish bhai...

Shad o aabad rahiye...

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«Reply #18 on: December 07, 2011, 07:26:45 AM »
BAhut BAhut Khoob Khwaish Ji
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«Reply #19 on: December 07, 2011, 12:08:04 PM »
bht bht khoob khwaish ji....
sply 1st one...
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«Reply #20 on: December 09, 2011, 01:49:50 PM »
wah khwaishji...  Applause Applause Applause Applause

gahare ehsas aur gahara rishta dono saf dikhai de rahe hain.. mann kuch likhne ko prerit ho gaya




Aapka Bahut bahut Shukriya mannji...

Aapne Pasand faramaya, yeh jaankar mujhe behad khushi hui hai..

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«Reply #21 on: December 10, 2011, 09:41:37 AM »
Khwaish ji.Bahut khoobsurat pesh kash hai aur aap ke note ke saath parhne mein aur bhi dil ko chhoo gayi.Mubarak ho.HASAN

Aapka Teh Dil Se Shukriya hasan Ji...

Aapki Daad Mere Liye bahut maayne Rakhti Hai..Yuhi saath Dete rahiyega icon_flower
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«Reply #22 on: February 20, 2012, 09:52:11 AM »
BAUT HE ACHA LIKHTE HO KHWAISH BHAI
LIKHTE REHEIN SDA, HAI YEHI DUA
ASGHAR

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«Reply #23 on: February 20, 2012, 10:07:39 AM »
"Meri Khushi Ke Khaatir Khud Ko Sambhaal Rakhna
Usne Kaha Tha Mujhse "Khud Ka Khayal Rakhna"!!!!!!



Yeh Ghazal Ek khaas Soch par likhi Gayi..Milna-Bichadna To Har Ek Ke Naseeb Mein Likha Hota Hai Chaahe Woh Rishta Dosti Ka Ho, Mohabbat Ka Ho yaa Phir Koi Bhi Duniyavi Rishta ..Apno se Bichadne ka Dard Lafzon mein Bayaan Karna Asaan Nahi..Yahan iss Ghazal Mein Bichadna Unn Do Logon ka Hai Jo Ek Duje Se Be-panaah Mohabbat karte Hai..Par Unki Samajhdaari Hi Hai Jo Unhe Ek-Duje Se Door Karti hai..Maqte Ke Sher Ko Gaur Se Padhiyega To Hi Uski Gehrai Samaj Aayegi....Shukriya


Juda Hokar Bhi Tujhse Judaai Nahi Hai
yeh Kaisi Qaid Jisme Rihaai Nahi Hai Applause Applause Applause

Teri Har Majboori Mere Sar Aankhon Par..!!
Rutha Hoon Tujhse Par Kyon Ruswai Nahi hai Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Zaroori Nahi Ke Main Har Lamha Yaad Rahu Tujhe
Tu Mujhe BhoolJa Isme Meri Koi Manai Nahi hai Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Rishton Ko Kuch Naam Dena Aadat si Ban Gayi Hai..!!
Kya Bin Naam Ke Rishto Mein Koi Gehrai Nahi Hai?? Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP

Ashq Aankhon mein Reh-Rehkar Sookh gaye Hai..!!
Inn Aankhon Se Barsaat Ab Tak Kyon Aai Nahi Hai Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

"Khwaish" Do Raahein  Aur Do Musafir...!!!!
Ek Duje Ki Zindagi Mein Humne Aag Lagai Nahi Hai  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

               ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~



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«Reply #24 on: March 20, 2013, 11:00:25 PM »
Khwaish Ji
Aadaab,
mere net ne bahut pareshan kiya.. aur bahar bhi jana pada, ek din reply me kuch likha bhi tha lekin post karte 2 log-in time finish..aaj pahle aap se hi shuruaat ki hai..
Bahut hi behatrin peshkash hai..pooja, kasak, hasan ji no jo likha hai vahi mere bhi alphaaj hai..
bas sabke dilo.n tak aapki baat pahuch gai vahi saccha appreciation hai..
outstanding...



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«Reply #25 on: March 20, 2013, 11:39:29 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
buhot khoob,, khwaish  hello2 hello2
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«Reply #26 on: March 21, 2013, 02:47:01 AM »
"Meri Khushi Ke Khaatir Khud Ko Sambhaal Rakhna
Usne Kaha Tha Mujhse "Khud Ka Khayal Rakhna"!!!!!!



Yeh Ghazal Ek khaas Soch par likhi Gayi..Milna-Bichadna To Har Ek Ke Naseeb Mein Likha Hota Hai Chaahe Woh Rishta Dosti Ka Ho, Mohabbat Ka Ho yaa Phir Koi Bhi Duniyavi Rishta ..Apno se Bichadne ka Dard Lafzon mein Bayaan Karna Asaan Nahi..Yahan iss Ghazal Mein Bichadna Unn Do Logon ka Hai Jo Ek Duje Se Be-panaah Mohabbat karte Hai..Par Unki Samajhdaari Hi Hai Jo Unhe Ek-Duje Se Door Karti hai..Maqte Ke Sher Ko Gaur Se Padhiyega To Hi Uski Gehrai Samaj Aayegi....Shukriya


Juda Hokar Bhi Tujhse Judaai Nahi Hai
yeh Kaisi Qaid Jisme Rihaai Nahi Hai

Teri Har Majboori Mere Sar Aankhon Par..!!
Rutha Hoon Tujhse Par Kyon Ruswai Nahi hai

Zaroori Nahi Ke Main Har Lamha Yaad Rahu Tujhe
Tu Mujhe BhoolJa Isme Meri Koi Manai Nahi hai

Rishton Ko Kuch Naam Dena Aadat si Ban Gayi Hai..!!
Kya Bin Naam Ke Rishto Mein Koi Gehrai Nahi Hai??

Ashq Aankhon mein Reh-Rehkar Sookh gaye Hai..!!
Inn Aankhon Se Barsaat Ab Tak Kyon Aai Nahi Hai

"Khwaish" Do Raahein  Aur Do Musafir...!!!!
Ek Duje Ki Zindagi Mein Humne Aag Lagai Nahi Hai

               ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~



lajawab khyalat oomda ghazal ,....bohat c daad,...
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