Do Toote Taare Aasmaan Ke,.

by Jaanasheen on November 29, 2008, 09:07:14 AM
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Do Toote Taare Aasmaan Se Girrke, Zameen Par Bikhar Gaye,.
Sochte Hain Neeche Aake,
Jo Hume Dekhaa Karte The, Wo Log Aaj Kidhar Gaye,.

Aarzoo Poori Karte Gaye, Tootkar Bhi Ye Logon Ki,.
Inhe To Kuch Mila Nahi, Tootte Hue Inhe Jo Dekha Wo Log To Sawar Gaye,.

Roshan Thi Saari Duniya, Taaron Ki Mehfil Se "Azeem",.
Kya Hua Aaj Do Taare, Roshan Karte Karte, Guzar Gaye,.

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«Reply #1 on: November 29, 2008, 09:28:36 AM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on November 29, 2008, 09:07:14 AM
Do Toote Taare Aasmaan Se Girrke, Zameen Par Bikhar Gaye,.
Sochte Hain Neeche Aake,
Jo Hume Dekhaa Karte The, Wo Log Aaj Kidhar Gaye,.

Aarzoo Poori Karte Gaye, Tootkar Bhi Ye Logon Ki,.
Inhe To Kuch Mila Nahi, Tootte Hue Inhe Jo Dekha Wo Log To Sawar Gaye,.

Roshan Thi Saari Duniya, Taaron Ki Mehfil Se "Azeem",.
Kya Hua Aaj Do Taare, Roshan Karte Karte, Guzar Gaye,.

_________________________________-Jaanasheen-




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Bahut KHoob Azeem ji,

KAASH KI INN TAARO KI MURAADE BHI POORI HO JAATI,
INHE BHI INKI MANZILEMIL JAATI,INHONE TOOT KAR DUNIYA
KO ROSHNA KIYA KAASH KI DUNIYA BHI INKE LIYE KUCH KAR
PAATI...
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«Reply #2 on: November 29, 2008, 09:36:02 AM »
Quote from: k.shael on November 29, 2008, 09:28:36 AM

 Applause   Applause  Applause
Bahut KHoob Azeem ji,

KAASH KI INN TAARO KI MURAADE BHI POORI HO JAATI,
INHE BHI INKI MANZILEMIL JAATI,INHONE TOOT KAR DUNIYA
KO ROSHNA KIYA KAASH KI DUNIYA BHI INKE LIYE KUCH KAR
PAATI...

Waah Mere Dost,.
Kya Khoob Kaha,.

Duniya Se Tum Kuch Paane Ki Umeed Na Rakho,.
Duniya Wo Deti Hai,
Jise Hum Khwaab Me Bhi Dekhaa Nahi Karte,.

Toot Gaye Jo Taare Khamoshi Se, Tum Bhi Toot Jaao,.
Mohabbat Ke Maare Kabhi, Shikwaa Nahi Karte,.

Taaron Ki Khoob Hai Toot Kar Muraad Poori Karna,.
Dekar Khushiyaan Logon Ko Ye, Charchaa Nahi Karte,.

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«Reply #3 on: November 29, 2008, 09:37:30 AM »
bohat khoob jaanasheen ji. Applause Applause

nice reply shael ji. Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: November 29, 2008, 09:39:04 AM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on November 29, 2008, 09:36:02 AM
Waah Mere Dost,.
Kya Khoob Kaha,.

Duniya Se Tum Kuch Paane Ki Umeed Na Rakho,.
Duniya Wo Deti Hai,
Jise Hum Khwaab Me Bhi Dekhaa Nahi Karte,.

Toot Gaye Jo Taare Khamoshi Se, Tum Bhi Toot Jaao,.
Mohabbat Ke Maare Kabhi, Shikwaa Nahi Karte,.

Taaron Ki Khoob Hai Toot Kar Muraad Poori Karna,.
Dekar Khushiyaan Logon Ko Ye, Cahrchaa Nahi Karte,.

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BAHUT KHOOB AZEEM JI,

YAHI TO KHATAA HAI MOHABBAT KARNE WALO KI,
WO SHIKWA KIYA NAHI KARTE,UNKE APNE BHI WO
JAATE HAI BEGAANE AUR WO BEGAANO KO BHI PARAYA
SAMJHA NAHI KARTE...
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«Reply #5 on: November 29, 2008, 09:40:42 AM »
Quote from: Tanha(Saurabh) on November 29, 2008, 09:37:30 AM
bohat khoob jaanasheen ji. Applause Applause

nice reply shael ji. Applause Applause

SHUKRIYA TANHA JI,
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #6 on: November 29, 2008, 09:44:12 AM »
Quote from: Tanha(Saurabh) on November 29, 2008, 09:37:30 AM
bohat khoob jaanasheen ji. Applause Applause

nice reply shael ji. Applause Applause

Shukriya Saurabh,.
Achcha Lagta Tum Bhi Kuch Likh Kar Jaate,.
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«Reply #7 on: November 29, 2008, 09:48:38 AM »
Quote from: k.shael on November 29, 2008, 09:39:04 AM


BAHUT KHOOB AZEEM JI,

YAHI TO KHATAA HAI MOHABBAT KARNE WALO KI,
WO SHIKWA KIYA NAHI KARTE,UNKE APNE BHI WO
JAATE HAI BEGAANE AUR WO BEGAANO KO BHI PARAYA
SAMJHA NAHI KARTE...

Thank U,.
And Very Nice,.

Kya Apna Kya Paraaya, Saaya Bhi Ab Mere Kareeb Nahi,.
Uski Chahat Kar Baithe, Jiska Milna Bhi Hume Naseeb Nahi,.

Door Rehkar Bhi Taare, Dikh Jaate Hain, Kahin Se,.
Sab Mere Door Hain Mujhse "Jaana" Koi Mere Nazdeek Nahi,.

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«Reply #8 on: November 29, 2008, 09:50:10 AM »
 Applause Applause
Bohat khoob Azeem bhai...
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«Reply #9 on: November 29, 2008, 10:08:23 AM »
Quote from: honeyrose on November 29, 2008, 09:50:10 AM
Applause Applause
Bohat khoob Azeem bhai...


Shukriya didi,.
Achcha Lagta Aap Bhi Kuch Likh Kar jaata,.
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«Reply #10 on: November 29, 2008, 10:09:32 AM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on November 29, 2008, 09:48:38 AM
Thank U,.
And Very Nice,.

Kya Apna Kya Paraaya, Saaya Bhi Ab Mere Kareeb Nahi,.
Uski Chahat Kar Baithe, Jiska Milna Bhi Hume Naseeb Nahi,.

Door Rehkar Bhi Taare, Dikh Jaate Hain, Kahin Se,.
Sab Mere Doot Hain Mujhse "Jaana" Koi Mere Nazdeek Nahi,.

____________________________________-Jaanasheen-


VER NICE AZEEM,  Applause

JAB SAB APNO NE SAATH CHODA TO SAAYA BHI
SAATH REHNE SE HICHKICHANE LAGA,
JISSE PAANE KI DUA ROZ MAANGTE RAHE WO
AUR DOOR JAANE LAGA,

TAARE THE JO TOOT KAR MERA KHAWAAB POORA
KARNA CHAHTE THE, PAR AAB AASMAAN BHI UNKO
HAMSE BAAT NA KARNE KO SAMJHAANE LAGA...
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«Reply #11 on: November 29, 2008, 10:28:41 AM »
Quote from: k.shael on November 29, 2008, 10:09:32 AM
VER NICE AZEEM,  Applause

JAB SAB APNO NE SAATH CHODA TO SAAYA BHI
SAATH REHNE SE HICHKICHANE LAGA,
JISSE PAANE KI DUA ROZ MAANGTE RAHE WO
AUR DOOR JAANE LAGA,

TAARE THE JO TOOT KAR MERA KHAWAAB POORA
KARNA CHAHTE THE, PAR AAB AASMAAN BHI UNKO
HAMSE BAAT NA KARNE KO SAMJHAANE LAGA...

Waah Waah,.
Kya Baat Kahi Hai,.

Aasmaan Bhi Deta Hai Salaah, Taaron Ko Ki Baatein Na Karein Humse,.
Shayad Darta Hai Wo, Ki Hamaari Taqdeer Ki Siyaahi, Use Aur Kalaa Na Karde,.

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«Reply #12 on: November 29, 2008, 10:33:10 AM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on November 29, 2008, 10:28:41 AM
Waah Waah,.
Kya Baat Kahi Hai,.

Aasmaan Bhi Deta Hai Salaah, Taaron Ko Ki Baatein Na Karein Humse,.
Shayad Darta Hai Wo, Ki Hamaari Taqdeer Ki Siyaahi, Use Aur Kalaa Na Karde,.

_________________________-Jaanasheen-

VERY NICE AZEEM,

TAARO KA KYA KASOOR WO TO MERE DARD KO DEKH TADAPH
RAHE THE, AUR KUCH AISE BHI NAMURAAD HAI ISS DUNIYAA
ME JO MERE GAMO PE BEHATASHA HASS RAHE THE...
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«Reply #13 on: November 29, 2008, 10:38:23 AM »
Quote from: k.shael on November 29, 2008, 10:33:10 AM
VERY NICE AZEEM,

TAARO KA KYA KASOOR WO TO MERE DARD KO DEKH TADAPH
RAHE THE, AUR KUCH AISE BHI NAMURAAD HAI ISS DUNIYAA
ME JO MERE GAMO PE BEHATASHA HASS RAHE THE...

Nice One Again,.

Jinke Labon Pe Hasi Thi, Dard Dil Mein Bhare The,.
Khushi Sirf Chehre Pe The, Zakham Magar Hare The,.

Sitaaron Timtimaati Roshni Gawaah Hai "Shally,.
Meri Dil Ki Tanhaai Dekh, Ye Kitne Dare The,.

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«Reply #14 on: November 29, 2008, 01:07:30 PM »
Bohat Khoob Azeem  Clapping Smiley

Toota hota to jod bhi lete shayed
Jo chur chur ho gaya us dil kya kare ghayel

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