Do Toote Taare Aasmaan Ke,.

by Jaanasheen on November 29, 2008, 09:07:14 AM
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«Reply #30 on: December 01, 2008, 06:17:21 AM »
Quote from: k.shael on December 01, 2008, 06:02:29 AM
NICE ONE AZEEM... Applause

KHUDA JAANE MERA QATAL KARNE KE BAAD MERA WO  QATIL ROYA KYUN,USNE KI THI MAN KI MARZI PHIR WO KHUD SE KHAFA HUA KYUN, MEIN TO MAR GAYYI PYAR KE LIYE YE MERI KHUSHNASIBI THI,
WO JEETE JI MAR GAYA AISA USKE SAATH HUA KYUN...

Yaar Yunhi Likhte Raho,.
Nice One,.

Tere Pyaar Ka Qatal Karke, Usne Bhi Kahaan Karaar Paaya,.
Tere Dil Ko Chot Pahoonchaakar, Usne hi Apna Chaain Gawaaya,.

Sach Hai Ye, Ki Sachchi Mohabbat Ek Din Asar Karti Hai "Shally",.
Tune Sachchi Mohabbat Ki Ye Main Jaan Gaya,
Karle Dil Tu Bhi Mohabbat Is Tarah, Apne Dil Ko Maine Samjhaaya,.

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«Reply #31 on: December 01, 2008, 06:32:18 AM »
Quote from: bekarar on December 01, 2008, 06:05:40 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahoot khoob kalpna hai azeem ...bahoot hi achcha likha aapne

 Applause Applause

bahoot umda reply shally

Shukriya Bekaraar Ji,.
Achcha Lagta Aap Bhi Kuch Likh Jaate,.
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«Reply #32 on: December 02, 2008, 06:10:17 AM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on December 01, 2008, 06:17:21 AM
Yaar Yunhi Likhte Raho,.
Nice One,.

Tere Pyaar Ka Qatal Karke, Usne Bhi Kahaan Karaar Paaya,.
Tere Dil Ko Chot Pahoonchaakar, Usne hi Apna Chaain Gawaaya,.

Sach Hai Ye, Ki Sachchi Mohabbat Ek Din Asar Karti Hai "Shally",.
Tune Sachchi Mohabbat Ki Ye Main Jaan Gaya,
Karle Dil Tu Bhi Mohabbat Is Tarah, Apne Dil Ko Maine Samjhaaya,.

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SHUKRIYA  notworthy  & BAHUT KHOOB  Applause

TUM MUJH JAISI MOHABBAT KARNE KA KHAWAAB MAT SAJANA,
U HI KISI KE LIYE KHUD KO MAT GAWAANA,

YAHA TO HAR ROZ BIKTE HAI KAYYI PYAAR KE DIWANE MUFFT ME
TUM KABHI NA ISS BAZAAR ME APNI KEEMAT LAGWAANA...
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«Reply #33 on: December 02, 2008, 06:11:00 AM »
bahoot khoob lil bro and shally
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«Reply #34 on: December 02, 2008, 06:12:21 AM »
Quote from: Pooja on December 02, 2008, 06:11:00 AM
bahoot khoob lil bro and shally


SHUKRIYA POOJA DIDI,
AAP BHI KUCH LIKHTI TO AACHA LAGTA,
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #35 on: December 02, 2008, 06:19:49 AM »
nikalte the hum jahan se,
log dekhte rah jaate the
baras jaati thi yah Fijaye
salami main baadal garj jaate the

choota hai sath ab kaya kahe
toote jaise do taare asmaan ke
dard ke saagar main doobein
zakham kai juban per aa ke sil jaate the

nikalte the hum jahan se.....
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«Reply #36 on: December 02, 2008, 06:24:47 AM »
Quote from: Pooja on December 02, 2008, 06:19:49 AM
nikalte the hum jahan se,
log dekhte rah jaate the
baras jaati thi yah Fijaye
salami main baadal garj jaate the

choota hai sath ab kaya kahe
toote jaise do taare asmaan ke
dard ke saagar main doobein
zakham kai juban per aa ke sil jaate the

nikalte the hum jahan se.....

JAB UNKI GALLI ME HAMARA JAANA HOTA THA,
DEKHTE THE WO AISE SAAMNE RUKKAR JAISE KOI
DEEWAANA HOTA THA,

WAQT GUJRA, BAATEIN BEETI WO PURAANI, AAJ GUJRTE
HAI JAB UNKE GHAR KE SAMNE SE TO MEHSOOS HOTA HAI
YE RASTA KABHI PEHCHAANA HOTA THA...
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«Reply #37 on: December 02, 2008, 09:46:25 AM »
Shukriya Pooja Didi,.
Aur Bohat Achcha Likha Hai Aap Dono Ne,.
Pooja Didi,.
Shally,.
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«Reply #38 on: December 02, 2008, 09:50:30 AM »
Khulaa Aasmaan Lagta Hai Saara,.
Dikhta Nahi Meri Kismat Ka Taara,.

Aye Khuda Meri Soyi Kismat Jagaa De,.
Hain Jo Dard Dil Mein, Inhe Tu Mitaa De,.

Kab Tak Bhala Safar Kare Azeem Tanhaa Raahon Mein,.
Iska Saath Nibhaaya, Tu Aisa Hum Safar Banaa De,.

Tu Jaanta Hai, Kis Tarah Tardpaa Hai Ye,.
Ab To Iske Bechain Dil KO, Karaar Pahoonchaa De,.

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«Reply #39 on: December 02, 2008, 10:07:20 AM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on December 02, 2008, 09:50:30 AM
Khulaa Aasmaan Lagta Hai Saara,.
Dikhta Nahi Meri Kismat Ka Taara,.

Aye Khuda Meri Soyi Kismat Jagaa De,.
Hain Jo Dard Dil Mein, Inhe Tu Mitaa De,.

Kab Tak Bhala Safar Kare Azeem Tanhaa Raahon Mein,.
Iska Saath Nibhaaya, Tu Aisa Hum Safar Banaa De,.

Tu Jaanta Hai, Kis Tarah Tardpaa Hai Ye,.
Ab To Iske Bechain Dil KO, Karaar Pahoonchaa De,.

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«Reply #40 on: December 02, 2008, 10:10:58 AM »
Quote from: Rajesh Harish on December 02, 2008, 10:07:20 AM
Bahut Khoob Jaanasheen Ji

Shukriya Rajesh Ji,.
Aap Bhi Kuch LIkhte To Achcha Lagta,.

Oonchaai Ko Choona, Shayad Meri Kismat Mein Nahi,.
Isliye Ek Taara Bankar Toot Gaya, Aur Khaakh Mein Mil Gaya,.
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«Reply #41 on: December 02, 2008, 02:50:18 PM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on December 02, 2008, 01:49:24 PM
Taro se aage oochaiee sirf khuda ki hain
Tere sher ko galat kahu itni meri aukat nahi
Tara bankar ho tute aur koste ho kismat ko
Itna ucha soche GHAYEL ab aise bhi halaat nahi

                              -SG-

Tumhara sher muje galat laga ya shayed meri samaj me nahi aaya

Aapne Shayad Ise Theek Se Padha Nahi,.
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«Reply #42 on: December 02, 2008, 02:58:50 PM »
Oochaiee ko choona shayed meri kismat mein nahi

Well yaha shayer upset hain jis oochaiee pe woh pohachna chahta tha waha nahi pohach paya isiliye usne yeh line likhi yaha tak theek hain

Isiliye ek tara bankar tut gaya aur khaak me mil gaya

Yaha shayer apne aapki misal ek tare se de raha hain ab isse oocha kya hota hain muje to nahi pata

Dono line ek dusre ka sath nahi de rahi hain par jaisa tumne kaha maine shayed theek se pada nahi yeh bhi reason ho sakta hain main apne comments delete karta hu aur mafi mangta hu aainda aisi galti khwab me bhi nahi hogi.
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«Reply #43 on: December 02, 2008, 03:55:09 PM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on December 02, 2008, 02:58:50 PM
Oochaiee ko choona shayed meri kismat mein nahi

Well yaha shayer upset hain jis oochaiee pe woh pohachna chahta tha waha nahi pohach paya isiliye usne yeh line likhi yaha tak theek hain

Isiliye ek tara bankar tut gaya aur khaak me mil gaya

Yaha shayer apne aapki misal ek tare se de raha hain ab isse oocha kya hota hain muje to nahi pata

Dono line ek dusre ka sath nahi de rahi hain par jaisa tumne kaha maine shayed theek se pada nahi yeh bhi reason ho sakta hain main apne comments delete karta hu aur mafi mangta hu aainda aisi galti khwab me bhi nahi hogi.

Are Bhai,.
Maafi Kis Liye,.

Har Ek Baat Hazaar Matlaab Rakhti Hai,.
Faqat Sochne Waale Pe Jaata Hai, Wo Kya Matlab Nikaalta Hai,.
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«Reply #44 on: December 04, 2008, 01:13:03 PM »
Kismat Meri, Ab Meri Nahi, Har Baar Mujhse Bagaawat Karti Hai,.
Khwaab Dikhaati Hai Khushiyon Ki, Aur Ghamo Ki Ye Chahat Karti hai,.

Tu Hi Bataa Main Kya Karoon,.,.
Main Kismat Se Bagawat Ya Wafa Karoon,.

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