Do Toote Taare Aasmaan Ke,.

by Jaanasheen on November 29, 2008, 09:07:14 AM
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«Reply #45 on: December 04, 2008, 07:46:29 PM »
Quote from: Pooja on December 02, 2008, 06:19:49 AM
nikalte the hum jahan se,
log dekhte rah jaate the
baras jaati thi yah Fijaye
salami main baadal garj jaate the

choota hai sath ab kaya kahe
toote jaise do taare asmaan ke
dard ke saagar main doobein
zakham kai juban per aa ke sil jaate the

nikalte the hum jahan se.....


Pooja ji,
Khoob sher jamaay hien...

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«Reply #46 on: December 07, 2008, 10:54:28 AM »
Sajid Bhai Aap Likh Kar Jaate To Achcha Lagta,.
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«Reply #47 on: December 07, 2008, 11:02:36 AM »
Roya Karenge Aap Bhi Sitaaron Isi Tarah,.
Atka Kahin Jo Aap Ka Dil Bhi Meri Tarah,.

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«Reply #48 on: December 07, 2008, 11:27:51 AM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on December 07, 2008, 10:54:28 AM
Sajid Bhai Aap Likh Kar Jaate To Achcha Lagta,.

Lo Jaanasheen ji aap k nam

Door ufaq pay aik sitara baqi hay
Meray dil mien piar tumhara baqi hay

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«Reply #49 on: December 08, 2008, 09:24:57 AM »
Quote from: sjid hadayat on December 07, 2008, 11:27:51 AM
Lo Jaanasheen ji aap k nam

Door ufaq pay aik sitara baqi hay
Meray dil mien piar tumhara baqi hay

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«Reply #50 on: December 08, 2008, 09:25:42 AM »
pareshan raat sari hai sitaro tum to so jao
sukut-e-marg tari hai sitaro tum to so jao

hanson aur hanste-hanste dubte jao khalaon mein
hamein ye rat bhari hai sitaro tum to so jao

tumhen kya aj bhi koi agar milne nahin aya
ye bazi ham ne hari hai sitaro tum to so jao

kahe jate ho ro-ro k hamara hal duniya se
ye kaisi razdari hai sitaro tum to so ja

hamein to aj ki shab pau phate tak jagna hoga
yahi qismat hamari hai sitaro tum to so jao

hamein bhi nind a jayegi ham bhi so hi jayenge
abhi kuch beqarari hai sitaro tum to so jao

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«Reply #51 on: December 08, 2008, 10:47:03 AM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on December 08, 2008, 09:25:42 AM
pareshan raat sari hai sitaro tum to so jao
sukut-e-marg tari hai sitaro tum to so jao

hanson aur hanste-hanste dubte jao khalaon mein
hamein ye rat bhari hai sitaro tum to so jao

tumhen kya aj bhi koi agar milne nahin aya
ye bazi ham ne hari hai sitaro tum to so jao

kahe jate ho ro-ro k hamara hal duniya se
ye kaisi razdari hai sitaro tum to so ja

hamein to aj ki shab pau phate tak jagna hoga
yahi qismat hamari hai sitaro tum to so jao

hamein bhi nind a jayegi ham bhi so hi jayenge
abhi kuch beqarari hai sitaro tum to so jao

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NICE SHARING AZEEM,

HAME AABHI KARNA HOGA INTZAAR UNKE AANE KA,
RAAT GEHRI HO RAHI HAI SITAARO TUM TO SO JAO,

HAME LGEGA WAQT AABHI EK DUSRE KO SAMJHNE ME,
TUMKO TO HAI SAB KHABAR TUM TO SO JAO,

WO AAYAGA KAB MEIN HO ISI FIKAR ME BAITHI,
TUM TO HO HAR FIKAR SE BEPARWAH TUM TO SO JAO.
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«Reply #52 on: December 08, 2008, 11:09:20 AM »
Quote from: k.shael on December 08, 2008, 10:47:03 AM
NICE SHARING AZEEM,

HAME AABHI KARNA HOGA INTZAAR UNKE AANE KA,
RAAT GEHRI HO RAHI HAI SITAARO TUM TO SO JAO,

HAME LGEGA WAQT AABHI EK DUSRE KO SAMJHNE ME,
TUMKO TO HAI SAB KHABAR TUM TO SO JAO,

WO AAYAGA KAB MEIN HO ISI FIKAR ME BAITHI,
TUM TO HO HAR FIKAR SE BEPARWAH TUM TO SO JAO.

Waah Bohat Badhiya Likha Hai,.
Nice One,.

Mera Intezaar Karne Ki, Tumhe Zaroorat Nahi,.
Aajaoonga Paas Tumhare, Sitaare Doobne Se Pehle,.

Raat Gehri Hai To Kya Hua, Dil Ki Tanhaai Se, Andhera Kardenge..
Hum Suraj Ko Bujhaa Denge, Sitaare Doobne Se Pehle,.

Tu Meri Hai "Shally" Poori Kaynaath Jaanti Hai,.
Tujhe Bhi Bataa Doonga Main, Sitaare Doobne Se Pehle,.

Tu Na Mili, To Kho Jaayenge, Sitaaron Ki Taraha,.
Bataa De Tu Meri Hai Ya Nahi, Sitaare Doobne Se Pehle,.

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«Reply #53 on: January 23, 2009, 08:26:57 AM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on December 08, 2008, 11:09:20 AM
Waah Bohat Badhiya Likha Hai,.
Nice One,.

Mera Intezaar Karne Ki, Tumhe Zaroorat Nahi,.
Aajaoonga Paas Tumhare, Sitaare Doobne Se Pehle,.

Raat Gehri Hai To Kya Hua, Dil Ki Tanhaai Se, Andhera Kardenge..
Hum Suraj Ko Bujhaa Denge, Sitaare Doobne Se Pehle,.

Tu Meri Hai "Shally" Poori Kaynaath Jaanti Hai,.
Tujhe Bhi Bataa Doonga Main, Sitaare Doobne Se Pehle,.

Tu Na Mili, To Kho Jaayenge, Sitaaron Ki Taraha,.
Bataa De Tu Meri Hai Ya Nahi, Sitaare Doobne Se Pehle,.

____________________________-Jaanasheen-


Khuda jaane kon kis ki kismat mein hota hai
ek taara toot.ta hai aasmaa to kisi ka khawab poora hota hai,

Ham to hai raahi bass hame chalte jaana hai,
Inn taaron ki tarah hi hame raat me chamakna aur subah doob jaana hai,

Inn taaroon ko bolo jara zaldi aaye hame sone jaana hai,
Hamare sone ke baad hi to sabko hamare liye rone aana hai.

Shally.
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«Reply #54 on: January 23, 2009, 12:34:52 PM »
Quote from: k.shael on January 23, 2009, 08:26:57 AM

Khuda jaane kon kis ki kismat mein hota hai
ek taara toot.ta hai aasmaa to kisi ka khawab poora hota hai,

Ham to hai raahi bass hame chalte jaana hai,
Inn taaron ki tarah hi hame raat me chamakna aur subah doob jaana hai,

Inn taaroon ko bolo jara zaldi aaye hame sone jaana hai,
Hamare sone ke baad hi to sabko hamare liye rone aana hai.

Shally.



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«Reply #55 on: January 24, 2009, 08:26:11 AM »
Bohat Achche Bhaijaan,.
Aap Aaise Mehfil Mein Aur bahaar Aa gayi,.
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«Reply #56 on: January 24, 2009, 11:03:42 PM »
woow gr8 meri jan
ilove it tht
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«Reply #57 on: January 25, 2009, 02:28:00 AM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on December 08, 2008, 11:09:20 AM
Waah Bohat Badhiya Likha Hai,.
Nice One,.

Mera Intezaar Karne Ki, Tumhe Zaroorat Nahi,.
Aajaoonga Paas Tumhare, Sitaare Doobne Se Pehle,.

Raat Gehri Hai To Kya Hua, Dil Ki Tanhaai Se, Andhera Kardenge..
Hum Suraj Ko Bujhaa Denge, Sitaare Doobne Se Pehle,.

Tu Meri Hai "Shally" Poori Kaynaath Jaanti Hai,.
Tujhe Bhi Bataa Doonga Main, Sitaare Doobne Se Pehle,.

Tu Na Mili, To Kho Jaayenge, Sitaaron Ki Taraha,.
Bataa De Tu Meri Hai Ya Nahi, Sitaare Doobne Se Pehle,.

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«Reply #58 on: January 25, 2009, 02:28:48 AM »
Quote from: k.shael on January 23, 2009, 08:26:57 AM

Khuda jaane kon kis ki kismat mein hota hai
ek taara toot.ta hai aasmaa to kisi ka khawab poora hota hai,

Ham to hai raahi bass hame chalte jaana hai,
Inn taaron ki tarah hi hame raat me chamakna aur subah doob jaana hai,

Inn taaroon ko bolo jara zaldi aaye hame sone jaana hai,
Hamare sone ke baad hi to sabko hamare liye rone aana hai.

Shally.


Equally Good response Shally Ji
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«Reply #59 on: January 27, 2009, 03:43:05 AM »
Quote from: Rajesh Harish on January 25, 2009, 02:28:48 AM
Equally Good response Shally Ji

Shukriya Rajesh ji,

Shally.
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