DOH KADAM ..............................(Jasbir Singh)

by jasbirsingh on January 13, 2009, 07:50:46 AM
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DOH KADAM HUM CHALTEY
DOH KADAM WOH CHALTEY
MIL JATA RASTA ISS JINDAGI KOH

DOH SHABD HUM KEHTEY
DOH SHABD WOH KEHTEY
MIL JATA PYAR ISS JINDAGI KOH

DOH GUM HUM SEHTEY
DOH GUM WOH SEHTEY
MIL JATA MUKADDAR ISS JINDAGI KOH

DOH PAL HUM JEETEY
DOH PAL WOH JEETEY
MIL JATA SAKOON ISS JINDAGI KOH

GAR HUM JHUK JATEY
GAR WOH JHUK JATEY
YEH DIL NA KABHI JUDA HO PATEY



JASBIR SINGH
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #1 on: January 13, 2009, 01:25:43 PM »
last sher achca laga jhukne wala bohat khoob Jasbire
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«Reply #2 on: January 13, 2009, 06:58:40 PM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on January 13, 2009, 01:25:43 PM
last sher achca laga jhukne wala bohat khoob Jasbire

Thanks GHAYEL ... hanji bilkul sahi baat hai .. agar hum jhuk jaye toh mumkin hai hum saath reh paye ... kabhi kabhi jhukna manjoor nahi hota, yahi sey problems shuru ho jati hai ...


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«Reply #3 on: January 13, 2009, 07:03:35 PM »
Good one Jasbir Ji
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«Reply #4 on: January 13, 2009, 07:04:37 PM »
Quote from: Rajesh Harish on January 13, 2009, 07:03:35 PM
Good one Jasbir Ji

Thanks rajesh

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«Reply #5 on: January 13, 2009, 07:30:42 PM »
Quote from: jasbirsingh on January 13, 2009, 07:50:46 AM

DOH KADAM HUM CHALTEY
DOH KADAM WOH CHALTEY
MIL JATA RASTA ISS JINDAGI KOH

DOH SHABD HUM KEHTEY
DOH SHABD WOH KEHTEY
MIL JATA PYAR ISS JINDAGI KOH

DOH GUM HUM SEHTEY
DOH GUM WOH SEHTEY
MIL JATA MUKADDAR ISS JINDAGI KOH

DOH PAL HUM JEETEY
DOH PAL WOH JEETEY
MIL JATA SAKOON ISS JINDAGI KOH

GAR HUM JHUK JATEY
GAR WOH JHUK JATEY
YEH DIL NA KABHI JUDA HO PATEY



JASBIR SINGH
hira_company@yahoo.com



Bahut Khoob Jasbir Paaji...Iss Poetry Ki Har Line Bahut Khoob Hai par Woh Aakhri Ke Do Line Lajawaab likhe hai aapne.. Applause Applause Applause

Main Sirf Itna Keh Sakta Hoon..
"Jo Jhukta Nahi,Woh Toot Jata Hai" Yehi Zindagi Ki Haqeeqat Hai..
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Pooja
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«Reply #6 on: January 13, 2009, 09:11:05 PM »
nice work Jas ji!!
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #7 on: January 14, 2009, 10:47:55 AM »
Quote from: khwaish on January 13, 2009, 07:30:42 PM
Bahut Khoob Jasbir Paaji...Iss Poetry Ki Har Line Bahut Khoob Hai par Woh Aakhri Ke Do Line Lajawaab likhe hai aapne.. Applause Applause Applause

Main Sirf Itna Keh Sakta Hoon..
"Jo Jhukta Nahi,Woh Toot Jata Hai" Yehi Zindagi Ki Haqeeqat Hai..

Thanks Khwaish and very nice words from you too

Jasbir Singh
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«Reply #8 on: January 14, 2009, 10:48:40 AM »
Quote from: Pooja on January 13, 2009, 09:11:05 PM
nice work Jas ji!!

Thanks JI

Jasbir Singh
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«Reply #9 on: January 26, 2009, 10:21:04 AM »
wow...awesum yet again
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Roja
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«Reply #10 on: January 26, 2009, 10:49:55 AM »
 Applause Applause

Superb creation Jas ji
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«Reply #11 on: January 26, 2009, 05:04:07 PM »
Quote from: afreen_madhu on January 26, 2009, 10:21:04 AM
wow...awesum yet again


THANKS MADHU
and welcome to yo india.


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«Reply #12 on: January 26, 2009, 05:04:28 PM »
Quote from: Roja on January 26, 2009, 10:49:55 AM
Applause Applause

Superb creation Jas ji

Thanks Roja

Jasbir Singh
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«Reply #13 on: January 26, 2009, 05:17:21 PM »
Amazing creation Jasbir jee and yes the last lines r so tru...well they say another name for relationship is compromise but sum dont agree and those r the ones that break as Khwahish jee said...so so true...


hum jhuke nahin toh hume chodd ke chali gayi,
hum galtiyan batane lage toh hum todke chali gayi,
arey yeh kaisa pyaar hai uska Rahim,
jab duniya pe nishan nishan chodne lage toh mita ke chali gayi...
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«Reply #14 on: January 26, 2009, 05:32:55 PM »
Quote from: dead heart on January 26, 2009, 05:17:21 PM
Amazing creation Jasbir jee and yes the last lines r so tru...well they say another name for relationship is compromise but sum dont agree and those r the ones that break as Khwahish jee said...so so true...


hum jhuke nahin toh hume chodd ke chali gayi,
hum galtiyan batane lage toh hum todke chali gayi,
arey yeh kaisa pyaar hai uska Rahim,
jab duniya pe nishan nishan chodne lage toh mita ke chali gayi...

WAH DH , WAHHHHHH.... kya khooob kaha hai aap ney

DOH KADAM CHALNEY KA TOH EK BAHANA THA
UNHEY TOH BUSS KUCH PAL DIL LAGANA THA
JINDAGI HAMARI INN DOH KADMOH MEH HI REH GAYI
USEY TOH PYAR MEH BHI KOI KADAM BADANA THA


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