Dohraya na jaye...... manjum

by manjum on April 07, 2011, 05:00:25 AM
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Kahin ham ko fir se sataya na jaye.
Ateet kahin fir se dohraya na jaye.

Ke fir har jayen na har ek bazi,
Kahin daon esa lagaya na jaye.

Kahin Toot jaye ne fir sare sapne,
Mere dil ko fir se dukhaya na jaye.

Ye soch kar hi chhalakte hain aansu,
Ke zar zar ham ko rulaya na jaye.

Kahin "mann" ka bachcha na fir chot khaye,
Naya zakhm koi lagaya na jaye.

manju "mann"
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Rainz
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«Reply #1 on: April 07, 2011, 05:03:25 AM »
cool poetry  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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manjum
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«Reply #2 on: April 07, 2011, 05:05:01 AM »
bahutbahut shukriya Rainzji...

sath rahie...
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nirala
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«Reply #3 on: April 07, 2011, 05:35:21 AM »
no cmnt dear…
actualy dis typ of poetry……
dil ka haal hoti h aur is par kya kah sakta he ye nadaan nir.
god bless u dear
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manjum
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«Reply #4 on: April 07, 2011, 05:46:43 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya niralaji..... comnt nahin karna bhi ye batata hai ki aapne mehsus kiya hamare dard ko hamare darr ko......

shukriya...

sath rahie....
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nirala
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«Reply #5 on: April 07, 2011, 06:34:01 AM »
ab kya kahu me…
ye ehsas hi h jiske karan mene ab aisi post par cmnt dena hi band kar did h.…
kuch sujta hi nai.
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manjum
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«Reply #6 on: April 07, 2011, 06:37:17 AM »
par cmnt dena chahie... jo baat dard ko bayan kar de ushe hi to acha likha kaha jata hai... acha likha matlab mazedar nahin hai... bat dil kat pahunchi to acha likha... kaha jata hai... esa ham sochte hain...
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«Reply #7 on: April 07, 2011, 06:52:26 AM »
han hum b yahi sochte he…
par jo bat dil tak pahuch jaye wo khud ki bat ho jati h. …
aur khud ko daad nai dia jata na
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manjum
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«Reply #8 on: April 07, 2011, 06:54:10 AM »
kya baat hai... badiya baat kahi aapne...
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«Reply #9 on: April 07, 2011, 06:58:41 AM »
Quote from: manjum on April 07, 2011, 05:00:25 AM
Kahin ham ko fir se sataya na jaye.
Ateet kahin fir se dohraya na jaye.

Ke fir har jayen na har ek bazi,
Kahin daon esa lagaya na jaye.

Kahin Toot jaye ne fir sare sapne,
Mere dil ko fir se dukhaya na jaye.

Ye soch kar hi chhalakte hain aansu,
Ke zar zar ham ko rulaya na jaye.

Kahin "mann" ka bachcha na fir chot khaye,
Naya zakhm koi lagaya na jaye.

manju "mann"



Bahut bahut Khoob Anju Ji..

Yakeenan Aap bahut Acha Likhte Ho..

Yuhi Likhte Rehna..

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«Reply #10 on: April 07, 2011, 06:58:49 AM »
islie thanx…
magr cmnt nai dunga to aisa lagega ki mera bhaw badh gaya:(sad5
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«Reply #11 on: April 07, 2011, 07:05:06 AM »
bhut bahut shukriya khwaishji... jo aap hamara likha pasand karte hain...

shukriya... sath rahie....
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«Reply #12 on: April 07, 2011, 07:14:31 AM »
manju dard bayaan karne ka tumhara andaaz bht achcha lagta hai mujhe.......bht mast likha hai yunhi apne dard ko humse share karte raho....
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«Reply #13 on: April 07, 2011, 07:27:37 AM »
bahutbahut shukriya kasakji...

mera dard aap tak pahunchta hai... acha laga jan kar... han dard share karte rahenge... wo kya hai ki baantnese kam hota hai na... esa suna hai...

sath rahie....
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«Reply #14 on: April 07, 2011, 08:42:55 AM »
accha likha he manju ji.but haqiqat me esa karna mat........keep trying ...hav a game sprit......good one and keep it up
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