Doli-- Janaza- chala aaya~~~ Saahil

by salil2002 on June 17, 2009, 01:02:38 PM
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mujhe aaj bhi intzaar raha teri haan ka
tere mana karne k bavzood main chala aaya
chahta tha dekhna tujhe dulhan k jode main
isliye ashqon k bavjood main chala aaya

jaanta tha jab teri maang bhari jaayegi
mere armaano kii chita main aag di jaayegi
padenge phere tumhaare saat janmo k vachan lekar
har janam meri banne kii teri kasam bhi toot jaayegi
ruk gaya hoon aaj raat har rasm poori hote dekhoonga
kal kii kya kahoon meri zindgi toh aaj raat hi gujar jaayegi

kal vidaayi hai subah tu lipat k apne babul se royegi
main teri aankhon main apne hisse kii nami dekhne chala aaya
jaanta tha jab oothegi teri doli, toh oothega janaza mera
isliye sabke kehne k bavjood mein kafan lekar apna chala aaya
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«Reply #1 on: June 17, 2009, 01:04:49 PM »
Bohot Khoob Salil  Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: June 17, 2009, 01:08:56 PM »
bahoot umda salil..bahooooooot khooooooob
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«Reply #3 on: June 17, 2009, 05:20:57 PM »
Lovely... Bahut hi dard bhari poem hai... Poem nahi keh sakte bas har lafz dilko chhu jaaye aise saja ke rakha hai aapne...

Keep writing dear...
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«Reply #4 on: June 17, 2009, 07:16:38 PM »
 Applause Applause Nice one Sahil bhaijan...Aap hamesha hi behad acha likte hoo...Likte rahiyega...
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«Reply #5 on: June 18, 2009, 12:50:51 AM »
Very nice and beautiful creation Saahil ji. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: June 18, 2009, 12:57:49 AM »
   bahut achche saahil ji
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«Reply #7 on: June 18, 2009, 04:40:42 AM »
Behtreen Bhai... Bahut Dard Hai Is Poem Me..!! dil Ko Chhoo Gai aapki Yeh Rachna.. Bahut Bahut Khoooooooooob Bhai.. Applause Applause


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«Reply #8 on: June 18, 2009, 08:02:34 AM »
talat di,angel,rahim,vicky bhai, shabana,bekaraar.aur madhu dear aap sabka shukriya
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«Reply #9 on: June 18, 2009, 11:14:52 AM »
Strong sensitive creation Saahil Ji
bahut khoob
SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #10 on: June 20, 2009, 01:22:13 PM »
Quote from: -Saahil- on June 17, 2009, 01:02:38 PM
mujhe aaj bhi intzaar raha teri haan ka
tere mana karne k bavzood main chala aaya
chahta tha dekhna tujhe dulhan k jode main
isliye ashqon k bavjood main chala aaya

jaanta tha jab teri maang bhari jaayegi
mere armaano kii chita main aag di jaayegi
padenge phere tumhaare saat janmo k vachan lekar
har janam meri banne kii teri kasam bhi toot jaayegi
ruk gaya hoon aaj raat har rasm poori hote dekhoonga
kal kii kya kahoon meri zindgi toh aaj raat hi gujar jaayegi

kal vidaayi hai subah tu lipat k apne babul se royegi
main teri aankhon main apne hisse kii nami dekhne chala aaya
jaanta tha jab oothegi teri doli, toh oothega janaza mera
isliye sabke kehne k bavjood mein kafan lekar apna chala aaya



bahut khoob Salil ji
bahut dard hai aapki nazm mein... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: June 21, 2009, 02:25:38 PM »
thanks diya
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«Reply #12 on: August 25, 2009, 11:12:15 PM »
Good one Saahil Ji
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«Reply #13 on: August 26, 2009, 06:41:50 AM »
Itna Dard ? itni Tadap? Itni mohabbat ki kisi k liye anpi jaan nishaar kar dena... waah Saahil bahoot Bahoot Khoob !
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«Reply #14 on: August 26, 2009, 11:09:06 AM »
Quote from: -Saahil- on June 17, 2009, 01:02:38 PM
mujhe aaj bhi intzaar raha teri haan ka
tere mana karne k bavzood main chala aaya
chahta tha dekhna tujhe dulhan k jode main
isliye ashqon k bavjood main chala aaya

jaanta tha jab teri maang bhari jaayegi
mere armaano kii chita main aag di jaayegi
padenge phere tumhaare saat janmo k vachan lekar
har janam meri banne kii teri kasam bhi toot jaayegi
ruk gaya hoon aaj raat har rasm poori hote dekhoonga
kal kii kya kahoon meri zindgi toh aaj raat hi gujar jaayegi

kal vidaayi hai subah tu lipat k apne babul se royegi
main teri aankhon main apne hisse kii nami dekhne chala aaya
jaanta tha jab oothegi teri doli, toh oothega janaza mera
isliye sabke kehne k bavjood mein kafan lekar apna chala aaya



Good work saahil bhut hi khoob jazbaat ka tana baana daad hazir hai
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