Door bohot door humko hai jana....!!

by Talat on February 13, 2009, 10:12:28 AM
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Maine ye shayari theek 3 years pehle likhi thi....I wrote this on some true events, in very sad circumstances, in a sort of depressed state. That time I posted it in Critics and Review only Forum (where general comments are not allowed).

Door bohot door humko jaana hai !!!

A friend's poetry somehow reminded me my old lost poem..So, I am posting it here, once again...!!
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«Reply #1 on: February 13, 2009, 10:16:01 AM »
bahoot khoob celmire ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
True say...wat an creation!!!!
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«Reply #2 on: February 13, 2009, 10:36:31 AM »
wonderful creation celmira ji
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«Reply #3 on: February 13, 2009, 12:04:46 PM »
Bohat Achche Talat Behna, Allah paak Aage Tumhe Koi Pareshaani Koi Gham na De,.
Aameen,.
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«Reply #4 on: February 13, 2009, 04:29:44 PM »
Bahut Bahut Khoob Talat..Aap ne jis Halaat Mein Yeh Nazm Likhi Hai,Main Dil Se aapki Uss Himmat Ki daad Deta Hoon.. Applause Applause Applause Applause
Zindagi mein bahut kam log hote hai jo mushkil Halaat se Nikal Kar Phir muskuraane Ki Himmat Rakhte hai..Dard Mein rehkar bhi,aapke Hausle Buland  rahe..aapko salaam hai mera.. icon_salut

Ek Koshish Meri Taraf Se...

Chaar Din Ki Fakat Zindagi Hai Apni,
Dekhte-Dekhte Waqt Ne Hai Guzar Jaana...
"Khwaish" Ke Chehre Par Muskaan Ko Dekh Kar,
Naa Samaj Ke asaan Hai,
Duniya Bhar Ke Gham ko Chupaana...

Hauslo Ka Chirag Hai Mujhe Aaj Bhi Jalaana
Door Bahut Door Ab Humko Hai Jaana....

Kuch Shikayate Thi Mujhe Bhi Mere Apno Se,
Par Unn Shikayato Se Kya Haasil,
Insaan Hoon Main, "Khwaish" Yaad Rakh,
Insaan Ko Aakhir Mein, Mitti Mein Hi Hai Mil Jaana...

Hauslo Ka Chirag Hai Mujhe Aaj Bhi Jalaana,
Door Bahut Door Ab Humko Hai Jaana....

Apne Dard Ki Dawa Dhoondhta Raha Main Zindagi Bhar,
Ab Dard Ko Dard Se Hai Sehlaana,
Aaj Mein Jeena Asaan Hai,
Mushkil Hai Beete Waqt Ki Yaadon Ko Mitaana....

Hauslo Ka Chirag Hai Mujhe Aaj Bhi Jalaana,
Door Bahut Door Ab Humko Hai Jaana.....
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«Reply #5 on: February 13, 2009, 04:31:59 PM »
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

bahoot khoob Talat and Khwaish ji!!! Good work Both!!
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #6 on: February 13, 2009, 08:44:13 PM »
Nice one Celmira Ji
Aap ka bhi Jawab Nahi Khwaish Ji
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«Reply #7 on: February 14, 2009, 03:47:43 AM »
Bahoth Bahoth Qoob Talat Bahen !! Kya likha hai wah Wah Har Alfaz me ahesas ko paya hai maine !! Aur janab Kuwish sahab bahoth umda Likha hai janab apne bhi dil se dad qobool karen is nachiz ki !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #8 on: February 15, 2009, 09:38:37 AM »
Quote from: salma786 on February 13, 2009, 10:16:01 AM
bahoot khoob celmire ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
True say...wat an creation!!!!

Thank You Salma for appreciation.
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«Reply #9 on: February 15, 2009, 09:39:27 AM »
Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on February 13, 2009, 10:36:31 AM
wonderful creation celmira ji

Bohot shukriya Bhawna
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«Reply #10 on: February 15, 2009, 09:40:18 AM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on February 13, 2009, 12:04:46 PM
Bohat Achche Talat Behna, Allah paak Aage Tumhe Koi Pareshaani Koi Gham na De,.
Aameen,.

Shukriya Azeem..Allah aapko bhi humesha khush rakhe (Ameen).
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«Reply #11 on: February 15, 2009, 09:40:59 AM »
Quote from: abdulqadeer on February 14, 2009, 03:47:43 AM
Bahoth Bahoth Qoob Talat Bahen !! Kya likha hai wah Wah Har Alfaz me ahesas ko paya hai maine !! Aur janab Kuwish sahab bahoth umda Likha hai janab apne bhi dil se dad qobool karen is nachiz ki !!

Qadeer Toopchi

Bohot bohot shukriya
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«Reply #12 on: February 15, 2009, 09:41:33 AM »
Quote from: Rajesh Harish on February 13, 2009, 08:44:13 PM
Nice one Celmira Ji
Aap ka bhi Jawab Nahi Khwaish Ji

Thank You Rajesh Ji
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«Reply #13 on: February 15, 2009, 09:42:13 AM »
Quote from: Pooja on February 13, 2009, 04:31:59 PM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

bahoot khoob Talat and Khwaish ji!!! Good work Both!!

Bohot Shukriya Pooja
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«Reply #14 on: February 15, 2009, 09:45:09 AM »
Quote from: khwaish on February 13, 2009, 04:29:44 PM
Bahut Bahut Khoob Talat..Aap ne jis Halaat Mein Yeh Nazm Likhi Hai,Main Dil Se aapki Uss Himmat Ki daad Deta Hoon.. Applause Applause Applause Applause
Zindagi mein bahut kam log hote hai jo mushkil Halaat se Nikal Kar Phir muskuraane Ki Himmat Rakhte hai..Dard Mein rehkar bhi,aapke Hausle Buland  rahe..aapko salaam hai mera.. icon_salut




Bohot shukriya dost Khwaish.... Zindagi bhi kya kya rang dikhati hai...Main khush hoon ki Khuda ne meri madad ki un haalaat main. Thank you so much.
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