Door bohot door humko hai jana....!! -Panna 2:Shayri-E-Dard

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«Reply #15 on: February 15, 2009, 09:47:32 AM »

Quote from: khwaish on February 13, 2009, 04:29:44 PM

Ek Koshish Meri Taraf Se...

Chaar Din Ki Fakat Zindagi Hai Apni,
Dekhte-Dekhte Waqt Ne Hai Guzar Jaana...
"Khwaish" Ke Chehre Par Muskaan Ko Dekh Kar,
Naa Samaj Ke asaan Hai,
Duniya Bhar Ke Gham ko Chupaana...

Hauslo Ka Chirag Hai Mujhe Aaj Bhi Jalaana
Door Bahut Door Ab Humko Hai Jaana....

Kuch Shikayate Thi Mujhe Bhi Mere Apno Se,
Par Unn Shikayato Se Kya Haasil,
Insaan Hoon Main, "Khwaish" Yaad Rakh,
Insaan Ko Aakhir Mein, Mitti Mein Hi Hai Mil Jaana...

Hauslo Ka Chirag Hai Mujhe Aaj Bhi Jalaana,
Door Bahut Door Ab Humko Hai Jaana....

Apne Dard Ki Dawa Dhoondhta Raha Main Zindagi Bhar,
Ab Dard Ko Dard Se Hai Sehlaana,
Aaj Mein Jeena Asaan Hai,
Mushkil Hai Beete Waqt Ki Yaadon Ko Mitaana....

Hauslo Ka Chirag Hai Mujhe Aaj Bhi Jalaana,
Door Bahut Door Ab Humko Hai Jaana.....

Bohot hi khoobsurat aur sachchi baat kah daali aapne Khwaish.....Bohot bohot Khoob Applause


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Re: Door bohot door humko hai jana....!!

«Reply #16 on: February 16, 2009, 03:19:47 AM »

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Poojaji,Rajeshji,Qadeer Bhai..
Aap Sab Ne Isse Padha Aur Saraha..Teh Dilse Shkarguzaar Hoon..


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Re: Door bohot door humko hai jana....!!

«Reply #17 on: February 16, 2009, 03:47:50 AM »

Quote from: Celmira on February 15, 2009, 09:45:09 AM

Bohot shukriya dost Khwaish.... Zindagi bhi kya kya rang dikhati hai...Main khush hoon ki Khuda ne meri madad ki un haalaat main. Thank you so much.

Talat,Zindagi Ke Har Kadam Par Khuda aapke Saath Ho..Yehi Dua Hai Iss Dost ki..


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Re: Door bohot door humko hai jana....!!

«Reply #18 on: February 16, 2009, 03:50:57 AM »

Quote from: Celmira on February 15, 2009, 09:47:32 AM

Bohot hi khoobsurat aur sachchi baat kah daali aapne Khwaish.....Bohot bohot Khoob Applause

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Talat..


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Re: Door bohot door humko hai jana....!!

«Reply #19 on: February 16, 2009, 08:10:18 PM »

Quote from: khwaish on February 16, 2009, 03:47:50 AM

Talat,Zindagi Ke Har Kadam Par Khuda aapke Saath Ho..Yehi Dua Hai Iss Dost ki..

Shukriya Dost Khwaish


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Re: Door bohot door humko hai jana....!!

«Reply #20 on: February 16, 2009, 08:22:42 PM »

Quote from: Celmira on February 13, 2009, 10:12:28 AM

Maine ye shayari theek 3 years pehle likhi thi....I wrote this on some true events, in very sad circumstances, in a sort of depressed state. That time I posted it in Critics and Review only Forum (where general comments are not allowed).

Door bohot door humko jaana hai !!!

A friend's poetry somehow reminded me my old lost poem..So, I am posting it here, once again...!!

WAH CELMIRA, BAHUT HI KHOOB LIKHA HAI AAP NEY

KATOH KA KAAM TOH HAI PHOOL KOH BACHANA
KAM HAI LOG JISNEY HAI YEH RAAJ JANA

DOSTOH MEH EK DOST KAATA JARUR BANANA
BACHAYEGA HAR MOAD PEH DOST YEH MASTANA

KATOH KA KAAM TOH HAI PHOOL KOH BACHANA
KAM HAI LOH JISNEY HAI YEH RAAJ JANA

JASBIR SINGH


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Re: Door bohot door humko hai jana....!!

«Reply #21 on: February 16, 2009, 08:38:51 PM »

Waah kya baat kahi hai...Bohot Khoob Jasbir Ji Clapping Smiley

...Bohot bohot shukriya..

Zamane bhar ki chahatain na maangenge,
Ek jo sachcha yaar hume mil jaaye

Masl-e-khaar jo nigehbaan ho humara,
Koi aisa dildaar hume mil jaaye !!

Yahan yaar, dildaar ka matlab dost se hai na ki mehboob se !


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Re: Door bohot door humko hai jana....!!

«Reply #22 on: February 16, 2009, 08:47:58 PM »

Quote from: Celmira on February 16, 2009, 08:38:51 PM

Waah kya baat kahi hai...Bohot Khoob Jasbir Ji Clapping Smiley

...Bohot bohot shukriya..

Zamane bhar ki chahatain na maangenge,
Ek jo sachcha yaar hume mil jaaye

Masl-e-khaar jo nigehbaan ho humara,
Koi aisa dildaar hume mil jaaye !!

Yahan yaar, dildaar ka matlab dost se hai na ki mehboob se !

tHANKS CELMIRA AND kya sach baat kahi hai aap ney... bahut hi khoob kaha

DAR BADAR ISI KHOJ MEH TOH BHATAKTA HAI YEH DIL
KAHI KOI AISA SACCHA PYAR MIL JAYE
MILI HAI HAR MOAD PEH SIRF BEWAFI
KAHI TOH ISS DIL KA SAHIL MIL JAYE

Jasbir Singh


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Re: Door bohot door humko hai jana....!!

«Reply #23 on: February 16, 2009, 08:53:42 PM »

Shukriya Jasbir Ji..again a nice one.

Kehne ko duniya ki raunaqain hain jawaan,
Phir bhi is dil main tanhaayi si kyun hai

Humne to nibhaya tha har rishta imaan sa,
Ye duniya phir itni harjaayi si kyun hai !!


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Re: Door bohot door humko hai jana....!!

«Reply #24 on: February 16, 2009, 09:00:55 PM »

Quote from: Celmira on February 16, 2009, 08:53:42 PM

Shukriya Jasbir Ji..again a nice one.

Kehne ko duniya ki raunaqain hain jawaan,
Phir bhi is dil main tanhaayi si kyun hai

Humne to nibhaya tha har rishta imaan sa,
Ye duniya phir itni harjaayi si kyun hai !!

Thanks Celmira and very well said by you

MUSHKIL BAHUT HAI AAP KOH SAMJANA
AAP NEY KHWABOH KI MEHFIL SAJAYI SI HAI
DAGA MILTA HI HAI UNHI KOH YAHA
JINHONEY IMAAN SEY JINDAGI BITAYI SI HAI

JASBIR SINGH


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Re: Door bohot door humko hai jana....!!

«Reply #25 on: February 16, 2009, 09:06:57 PM »

Good one Jasbir Ji

Humne khwaabon ko sach samajhna chaaha,
Zindagi ka ehsaas dilaaya zamaane ne

Khwaab palkon ke uss paar hi hote hain
Zindagi ka aaeena dikhaya zamaane ne


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Re: Door bohot door humko hai jana....!!

«Reply #26 on: February 16, 2009, 09:18:56 PM »

Quote from: Celmira on February 16, 2009, 09:06:57 PM

Good one Jasbir Ji

Humne khwaabon ko sach samajhna chaaha,
Zindagi ka ehsaas dilaaya zamaane ne

Khwaab palkon ke uss paar hi hote hain
Zindagi ka aaeena dikhaya zamaane ne

Thanks Celmira

Wah wah wah Celmira, wah, bahut bahut sunder kaha aap neh

BEWAFA EK HAI, JAMANA NAHI
KU TUMHARA DIL YEH MANA NAHI

EK SEY JAMANEY KA NAZARIYA NA BANAO
EK BEWAFA SEY JINDAGI MEH NA GHABRAO

KHWAAB PALKOH PEH FIR SAJNEY LAGENGEY
AAYENEY KEY SAAMNEY DIN KATNEY LAGENGEY

EK BAAR DIL KA DARWAJA FIR SEY TOH KHOL JAO
EK BEWAFA SEY YU NA JINDAGI KOH MURJHAO

JASBIR SINGH


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Re: Door bohot door humko hai jana....!!

«Reply #27 on: February 16, 2009, 09:45:17 PM »

Thank You Jasbir Ji....Bohot khoobsurat likha hai aapne... Clapping Smiley

Jeena mujhko sikhaata hai wo !!
Hausla mera bandhata hai wo !!

Jin aankhon main neend ab nahin hai,
Un aankhon ko phir khwaab dikhata hai wo !!

Mer aansoo ko le kar apne poron par,
Mere saath saath muskurata hai wo !!


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Re: Door bohot door humko hai jana....!!

«Reply #28 on: February 16, 2009, 09:55:02 PM »

Quote from: Celmira on February 16, 2009, 09:45:17 PM

Thank You Jasbir Ji....Bohot khoobsurat likha hai aapne... Clapping Smiley

Thanks Celmira

wah wah yeh huyi naa baat Celmira … very beautifully written

MUSKURAHAT AAP KI YUHI SAJTI RAHEY
AANGAN MEH YEH KALIYA KHILTI RAHEY
MEHAKNEY SEY AAP KEY ROSHAN HOTA HAI JAHAAN
DUA HAI AAP KOH YEH KHUSHIYAA MILTI RAHEY

JASBIR SINGH


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Re: Door bohot door humko hai jana....!!

«Reply #29 on: February 18, 2009, 10:58:05 AM »

Bohot achcha likha aapne....bohot bohot shukriya Jasbir Ji


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