door jane ke baad,,..........:Shayri-E-Dard

roshni246

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tumse doori ka ehsaas jab satane laga.
Tere saath guzra har lamha yaad ane lagga.
Jabhi tumhe bholne ki koshish ki.
tu dil ke aur bhi paas anne lagga


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tushar_4u_im

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Re: door jane ke baad,,..........

«Reply #1 on: November 17, 2005, 12:20:30 PM »

Quote from: "roshni246"

tumse doori ka ehsaas jab satane laga.
Tere saath guzra har lamha yaad ane lagga.
Jabhi tumhe bholne ki koshish ki.
tu dil ke aur bhi paas anne lagga

dil per jab tera wajud chane laga .....

her waqt her jagah tu hi tu nazar aane laga....

mai kerta raha koshish tujhe bhul jane ki ......

tu dil utna samane laga..........


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Meena

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door jane ke baad,,..........

«Reply #2 on: November 17, 2005, 04:43:35 PM »

nice roshni ji!

hum unhe kya bhoolenge jo sanson me rehte hai,
shayad issi ko log yaha deewanapna ya pyar kehte hai?

:D


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Delicate_Doll

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door jane ke baad,,..........

«Reply #3 on: November 18, 2005, 11:49:32 AM »

nice all...................!!!


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nirbhay

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door jane ke baad,,..........

«Reply #4 on: November 18, 2005, 11:58:13 AM »

Really nice all...

Quote from: "Meena"

hum unhe kya bhoolenge jo sanson me rehte hai,
shayad issi ko log yaha deewanapna ya pyar kehte hai?

Kiu taraptey dil ko deewanapan kahtey hai
Jabki muhabaat ke ehsaas sabhie kehtey hai
dard ke ehsaas ko jo dewaanapan kahtey hai
kaise khud ko wo log Pyar karney waale kehtey hai??


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Style_guru

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door jane ke baad,,..........

«Reply #5 on: November 18, 2005, 01:46:57 PM »

The Style Guru says:

Good work all........

And this 1 is 4 u Roshu....

Dhundli si ek tasveer jiski,
Ankhon mai samayi rehti hai.
Naam jiska hoonthon par basa hai mere,
Woh tum hi to ho, woh tum hi to ho.
Dhadkan main jo basti hai meri,
Saanso main basi hai khushboo jiski.
Ajnabi ankahi si paheli hai jo,
Woh tum hi to ho, woh tum hi to ho.
Jeevan ki mayusiyo main jalati,
Asha ki kiran hai jo,
Kadam kadam par mera hausla badhati,
Woh tum hi to ho, woh tum hi to ho.
Tanhayio main jo saath hoti hai mere,
Saaya ban hum safar ho jaati hai
Har kadam pe mera sahara jo hai,
Woh tum hi to ho, woh tum hi to ho.......


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Meena

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door jane ke baad,,..........

«Reply #6 on: November 18, 2005, 04:18:35 PM »

Quote from: "nirbhay"

Really nice all...

Quote from: "Meena"

hum unhe kya bhoolenge jo sanson me rehte hai,
shayad issi ko log yaha deewanapna ya pyar kehte hai?

Kiu taraptey dil ko deewanapan kahtey hai
Jabki muhabaat ke ehsaas sabhie kehtey hai
dard ke ehsaas ko jo dewaanapan kahtey hai
kaise khud ko wo log Pyar karney waale kehtey hai??

hmm gud one! :D

ishq me neend chain apne bas me nahin hote,
bas unki yaaadon se hi dil khud ko behelata hai,
had se badh jaye deewangi jab,
shayad wohi deewapan kehelata hai! :wink:


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nirbhay

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door jane ke baad,,..........

«Reply #7 on: November 19, 2005, 05:40:51 AM »

Hmm Nice reply too... Meena!!

Kiu Aasiq muhabaat ke, husn ke dewaaney ho jate hai
Na Thikaana kisi had ka, manzilon ke pyasey ho jate hai
Neend chain ki kya sunaou, ye to baas jaagtey sapney reh jatey hai
Ye bhi yaadon ka maara hai, warna kalam karney kiu aatey!!


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Pooja

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door jane ke baad,,..........

«Reply #8 on: November 19, 2005, 05:43:02 AM »

Nice nirbhay!!!


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nirbhay

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door jane ke baad,,..........

«Reply #9 on: November 19, 2005, 05:49:35 AM »

THnx sis!!


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roshni246

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door jane ke baad,,..........

«Reply #10 on: November 19, 2005, 01:53:20 PM »

thx guys for replying.....

Koi achi si saza do mujhko
Chalo aisa karo bhula do mujhko
Tum say bichroun tou moot aa jaye
Dil ki gharioun say dua do mujhko


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tushar_4u_im

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door jane ke baad,,..........

«Reply #11 on: November 19, 2005, 05:51:37 PM »

Quote from: "roshni246"

thx guys for replying.....

Koi achi si saza do mujhko
Chalo aisa karo bhula do mujhko
Tum say bichroun tou moot aa jaye
Dil ki gharioun say dua do mujhko

dil se tujhe hai chaha tujhe kaise bhulau mai ....

jiya hu tere liye humesha tere liye kaha se maut lau mai....

mujh se bichadrogi to bhi kya hoga ..........

jaha rahunga mai bus tera hi wajud mujh per havi hoga.....


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