dosh du kisko......

by Pooja on August 15, 2007, 03:18:14 AM
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Pooja
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Dosh du kisko
Apni hi soch ka dosh hai
Nahi wo pass mere
Mujhko nahi koi hosh hai

Pal pal wo pal yaad karu
Ansoo ka sirf sath hai
Hath main nahi wo hath
Kuch nahi mere pass hai

Tadap dil ki kaise main bayan karu
Mar hi na jaau kahin, kasie yah baat kahu
Tadap dil ki sulagati hi jaati hai
Raah koi is dil ko najar nahi aati hai

Nai subah ko kaise main salam du
Beetati nahi yah raat, kaise koi raah karu
Pal pal wo pal main yaad karu
Ansoo ka hai sirf sath
Aor ajj kaya baat karu…………………
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Roja
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«Reply #1 on: August 15, 2007, 04:10:54 AM »
Quote from: "Pooja"
Pal pal wo pal yaad karu
Ansoo ka sirf sath hai
Hath main nahi wo hath
Kuch nahi mere pass hai

Tadap dil ki kaise main bayan karu
Mar hi na jaau kahin, kasie yah baat kahu
Tadap dil ki sulagati hi jaati hai
Raah koi is dil ko najar nahi aati hai



Dil ko chua aapka yeh kalam didi..

Ek dil tha vo bhi toot gaya
Ab toota dil kya sath dega?
Peche mudkar kya dekhti hai "Pooja"
Kaun hai tera jo tujhe awaz dega?..
Sab kismat ka khel hai...
Jab kismat hi footi hai to kisse dosh doge yaara?[/color]
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Sahiba Zehra
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«Reply #2 on: August 16, 2007, 06:52:23 PM »
baten ?

pooja G bara pyara likha hai
ye line boht achi lagi

Nai subah ko kaise main salam du
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«Reply #3 on: August 17, 2007, 10:55:53 AM »
humesha ki trah behtreen. . .ab aapki tareef ke liye naye alfaz dhoondne padege
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«Reply #4 on: August 17, 2007, 01:39:23 PM »
bohot khoob Pooja didi...
roja ji...wonderful reply!!!

 :D
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Pooja
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«Reply #5 on: August 17, 2007, 01:43:48 PM »
sahiba, samnoj and meena bahoot bahoot shukria!!!

kuch app bhi likh jaate to acha lagta !!!
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«Reply #6 on: August 19, 2007, 06:22:16 AM »
Quote from: "Pooja"
Dosh du kisko
Apni hi soch ka dosh hai
Nahi wo pass mere
Mujhko nahi koi hosh hai

Pal pal wo pal yaad karu
Ansoo ka sirf sath hai
Hath main nahi wo hath
Kuch nahi mere pass hai

Tadap dil ki kaise main bayan karu
Mar hi na jaau kahin, kasie yah baat kahu
Tadap dil ki sulagati hi jaati hai
Raah koi is dil ko najar nahi aati hai

Nai subah ko kaise main salam du
Beetati nahi yah raat, kaise koi raah karu
Pal pal wo pal main yaad karu
Ansoo ka hai sirf sath
Aor ajj kaya baat karu…………………


Wah Wah.. ! Kya Baat Hai POOJA ji. Kamaal Kar diya Humesha Ki Tarah.. !
Maza aa gaya Padh kar.... Bahut Hi Pyaari Peshkash hai aapki.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

Vicky
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Pooja
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«Reply #7 on: August 27, 2007, 10:30:58 PM »
bahoot bahoot shukaria Vicky ji!!! 2 hi wah mile apse.. agali baar koshish hogi ki teeno wah le saku apse Usual Smile!!!
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smardia
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«Reply #8 on: September 02, 2009, 06:58:48 PM »
Achhi hai aapki ye kavita.... Applause Applause Applause

Dosh tou hamaara hai, ki hame hosh he nahi raha
Do saal pehle likhi,aur hum ab tak khamosh hain

Aaj bhale he tu nahi mere saath hai
Par aaj bhi tujh se milne ki aas hai
Zinda wahi tadap aur wahi pyaas hai
Tu aaj bhi mere liye utni he khaas hai


Quote from: Pooja on August 15, 2007, 03:18:14 AM
Dosh du kisko
Apni hi soch ka dosh hai
Nahi wo pass mere
Mujhko nahi koi hosh hai

Pal pal wo pal yaad karu
Ansoo ka sirf sath hai
Hath main nahi wo hath
Kuch nahi mere pass hai

Tadap dil ki kaise main bayan karu
Mar hi na jaau kahin, kasie yah baat kahu
Tadap dil ki sulagati hi jaati hai
Raah koi is dil ko najar nahi aati hai

Nai subah ko kaise main salam du
Beetati nahi yah raat, kaise koi raah karu
Pal pal wo pal main yaad karu
Ansoo ka hai sirf sath
Aor ajj kaya baat karu…………………
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Pooja
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«Reply #9 on: September 02, 2009, 11:00:47 PM »
Quote from: smardia on September 02, 2009, 06:58:48 PM
Achhi hai aapki ye kavita.... Applause Applause Applause

Dosh tou hamaara hai, ki hame hosh he nahi raha
Do saal pehle likhi,aur hum ab tak khamosh hain

Aaj bhale he tu nahi mere saath hai
Par aaj bhi tujh se milne ki aas hai
Zinda wahi tadap aur wahi pyaas hai
Tu aaj bhi mere liye utni he khaas hai



bahoot bahoot shukaria smardia ji chaliye 2 saal baad he sahi najar to parri... I am sure bahoot se aise bhi hogi jin per shayad kabhi najar na parre..  DOH

jalad he kuch likhugi..
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khushi4pari
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«Reply #10 on: September 03, 2009, 12:45:52 AM »
Quote from: Pooja on August 15, 2007, 03:18:14 AM
Dosh du kisko
Apni hi soch ka dosh hai
Nahi wo pass mere
Mujhko nahi koi hosh hai

Pal pal wo pal yaad karu
Ansoo ka sirf sath hai
Hath main nahi wo hath
Kuch nahi mere pass hai

Tadap dil ki kaise main bayan karu
Mar hi na jaau kahin, kasie yah baat kahu
Tadap dil ki sulagati hi jaati hai
Raah koi is dil ko najar nahi aati hai

Nai subah ko kaise main salam du
Beetati nahi yah raat, kaise koi raah karu
Pal pal wo pal main yaad karu
Ansoo ka hai sirf sath
Aor ajj kaya baat karu…………………

Wah wah bohat ache Dii its very touchyyyyy Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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smardia
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«Reply #11 on: September 03, 2009, 05:41:15 PM »
Poojajee sahi kaha aapne aap ki saari rachnayen padh pana namumkin sa lagta hai... :sad11:Panch saalo main aapne itna kuchh likh dala hai ki un hazaro panno ko kholna bhi herculian task se kam nahi hai !!! DOH
Ye tou achanak he nazar pad jaati hai andheron mai bhi chamakte huye aap k nagmo par..... sunny icon_flower

Quote from: Pooja on September 02, 2009, 11:00:47 PM
bahoot bahoot shukaria smardia ji chaliye 2 saal baad he sahi najar to parri... I am sure bahoot se aise bhi hogi jin per shayad kabhi najar na parre..  DOH

jalad he kuch likhugi..
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #12 on: September 03, 2009, 05:52:56 PM »
Quote from: Pooja on August 15, 2007, 03:18:14 AM
Dosh du kisko
Apni hi soch ka dosh hai
Nahi wo pass mere
Mujhko nahi koi hosh hai

Pal pal wo pal yaad karu
Ansoo ka sirf sath hai
Hath main nahi wo hath
Kuch nahi mere pass hai

Tadap dil ki kaise main bayan karu
Mar hi na jaau kahin, kasie yah baat kahu
Tadap dil ki sulagati hi jaati hai
Raah koi is dil ko najar nahi aati hai

Nai subah ko kaise main salam du
Beetati nahi yah raat, kaise koi raah karu
Pal pal wo pal main yaad karu
Ansoo ka hai sirf sath
Aor ajj kaya baat karu…………………

bahut hi khoob pooja ji

jasbir singh
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #13 on: September 03, 2009, 05:53:35 PM »
Quote from: Roja on August 15, 2007, 04:10:54 AM


Dil ko chua aapka yeh kalam didi..

Ek dil tha vo bhi toot gaya
Ab toota dil kya sath dega?
Peche mudkar kya dekhti hai "Pooja"
Kaun hai tera jo tujhe awaz dega?..
Sab kismat ka khel hai...
Jab kismat hi footi hai to kisse dosh doge yaara?[/color]

very nice roja ji

jasbir singh
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #14 on: September 03, 2009, 06:03:54 PM »
Quote from: smardia on September 02, 2009, 06:58:48 PM
Achhi hai aapki ye kavita.... Applause Applause Applause

Dosh tou hamaara hai, ki hame hosh he nahi raha
Do saal pehle likhi,aur hum ab tak khamosh hain

Aaj bhale he tu nahi mere saath hai
Par aaj bhi tujh se milne ki aas hai
Zinda wahi tadap aur wahi pyaas hai
Tu aaj bhi mere liye utni he khaas hai


Quote from: smardia on September 02, 2009, 06:58:48 PM
Achhi hai aapki ye kavita.... Applause Applause Applause

Dosh tou hamaara hai, ki hame hosh he nahi raha
Do saal pehle likhi,aur hum ab tak khamosh hain

Aaj bhale he tu nahi mere saath hai
Par aaj bhi tujh se milne ki aas hai
Zinda wahi tadap aur wahi pyaas hai
Tu aaj bhi mere liye utni he khaas hai



wah wah sam ji

jasbir singh
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