dosti-- betuke afsaane pe ~~~~ Saahil:Shayri-E-Dard

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sometimes when a person is near to us we don't realize her value untill .......we get apart...this poem is very near to my heart...
hope u all find it near to ur soul

jise main sochta raha ek dost barso se
jaane kyun aaj dil udaas hai uske jaane se
yoon toh kucch khaas baat nahin lagi kabhi oosme mujhe
phir kyun laga mehfile tabdeel huyi veeraane main

jab tak tha saath uske , bas hansta aur hansata raha
kabhi uske gaalon ko kheench kar main khikhilaata raha
na usne kabhi kuch kaha aise jisse mujhe kuch hua ho
phir bhi uska jaana oos roz aankhon mein pani laata raha

socha kii bad k rok loon , keh doon kii mat jao mujhe chhodkar
magar yeh dil mera, dosti k khayal se kasmasata raha
uski aankhon mein bhi aa gayi thi halki si nami
isliye aankhon k neeche dupatta lehraata raha

aaj woh nahin hai toh saare khat pad raha hoon
tohfe uske saare dekhe , kissii bahaane se
chalte huye diya tha jo tohfa usme lipta tha ek gulaab
muskuraa diya mein apni kismat k is betuke afsaane pe


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Re: dosti-- betuke afsaane pe ~~~~ Saahil

«Reply #1 on: April 27, 2009, 08:41:46 AM »

Quote from: salil2002 on April 27, 2009, 08:37:47 AM

Bahut Khoob Bahut Umda likha hai,

Aur jyada kuch nahi bass yahi kahoongi sach hai jab koi dost door ho jaaye to usse jyada bada gamm koi nahi...

Khuda sab dosto ek saath hi rakhe.

Shally.


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Re: dosti-- betuke afsaane pe ~~~~ Saahil

«Reply #2 on: April 27, 2009, 08:56:51 AM »

Wah wah Kya baat hai Salil.. Hamesha hi tarah too gud! Usual Smile


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Re: dosti-- betuke afsaane pe ~~~~ Saahil

«Reply #3 on: April 27, 2009, 09:03:00 AM »

Sabse pehle yeh confusion hain ke main tumhe Saahil kahu ya Salil.. Waise tumne bohat bohat masoom peshkash ki hain.... too good


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jannatjahan

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Re: dosti-- betuke afsaane pe ~~~~ Saahil

«Reply #4 on: April 27, 2009, 10:02:11 AM »

Bahut bahut khub Dear......tumhaare thread par mai bhi kuch share kar rahi hun........mujhe bhi kisi ki yaad aa gayee hai....Thanx salil itni pyaari peshkas ke liye....

Ek dost ki dosti ne
zindagi badal di thi
wo jo thi sath mere
meri indagi kali kanwal thi

wo saans mujhme leti thi
mai saans usme leti thi
mai uske mathe ki bindiyaa
wo mere aankhon ka kaajal thi

wo sair sapata
wo hansana wo khelna
mai pyasi dharti si thi
aur wo barasta hua baadal thi

mere askon ke moti ko wo
piro kar haar banati thi
mai thi ek bachhi si
aur wo mamta ka aanchal thi

bas ek wo mujhme thi
bas ek mai usme thi
wo karti thi naaj mujhpar
mai uske dosti ki kaayal thi

aaj juda hai wo mujhse
uski yaadon se dil ka
kamraa hai bhara bhara
ab bhi mann ke mandir me
bichi hai bankar sej makhmal ki


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Re: dosti-- betuke afsaane pe ~~~~ Saahil

«Reply #5 on: April 27, 2009, 10:34:19 AM »

Waah Ji Kya Khoob Likha Hai Salil Bhai, And Good One Ji, Shweta Ji,.


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Re: dosti-- betuke afsaane pe ~~~~ Saahil

«Reply #6 on: April 27, 2009, 02:46:34 PM »

Quote from: k.shael on April 27, 2009, 08:41:46 AM

Bahut Khoob Bahut Umda likha hai,

Aur jyada kuch nahi bass yahi kahoongi sach hai jab koi dost door ho jaaye to usse jyada bada gamm koi nahi...

Khuda sab dosto ek saath hi rakhe.

Shally.

thnks a lot shally .........


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salil2002

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Re: dosti-- betuke afsaane pe ~~~~ Saahil

«Reply #7 on: April 27, 2009, 02:47:39 PM »

Quote from: Shihab on April 27, 2009, 08:46:55 AM

Good Job Salil Sahab
Hume Aapki Ye Koshish
Aue Dil Se Nikli Baat
Bohat Achhi Lagi..
ALLAH Pak Aapko Khush Rakhe...

shukriya shihab bhai........aapne meri thread par aakar jo izzat badaayi uske liye bahut bahut shukriya


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Re: dosti-- betuke afsaane pe ~~~~ Saahil

«Reply #8 on: April 27, 2009, 02:49:39 PM »

Quote from: Sophi on April 27, 2009, 08:56:51 AM

Wah wah Kya baat hai Salil.. Hamesha hi tarah too gud! Usual Smile

Quote from: sajid_ghayel on April 27, 2009, 09:03:00 AM

Sabse pehle yeh confusion hain ke main tumhe Saahil kahu ya Salil.. Waise tumne bohat bohat masoom peshkash ki hain.... too good

Quote from: Azeem on April 27, 2009, 10:34:19 AM

Waah Ji Kya Khoob Likha Hai Salil Bhai, And Good One Ji, Shweta Ji,.

thanks a lot sajid bhai , sophi, and azeem ......sajid bhai salil kahiye ya saahil , jo bhi pyaar se kahenge qabool hai


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salil2002

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Re: dosti-- betuke afsaane pe ~~~~ Saahil

«Reply #9 on: April 27, 2009, 02:56:20 PM »

Quote from: jannatjahan on April 27, 2009, 10:02:11 AM

thanks a lot jannat pasand karne k liye.......... a nice poem from u pad kar lagta hai kii sach main woh shakhs kitni ahmiyat rakhta hoga tumhaari life main...

mohabbat ka jashn ho raha hai
mujhe bulate toh main jaroor aata
itna baigairat nahin kii bin bulaaye chala aaun
tera aashiq hoon , main faqeeron main nahin aata


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jannatjahan

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Re: dosti-- betuke afsaane pe ~~~~ Saahil

«Reply #10 on: April 28, 2009, 03:30:40 PM »

Quote from: salil2002 on April 27, 2009, 02:56:20 PM

thanks a lot jannat pasand karne k liye.......... a nice poem from u pad kar lagta hai kii sach main woh shakhs kitni ahmiyat rakhta hoga tumhaari life main...

mohabbat ka jashn ho raha hai
mujhe bulate toh main jaroor aata
itna baigairat nahin kii bin bulaaye chala aaun
tera aashiq hoon , main faqeeron main nahin aata

Thanks salil...sach me wo mere liye bahut aham thi...

for u.....

Baatein mohabbat ki..usool takajon ka rakhte hain
mohabbat karne wale to choo lete hain shohrat ki bulandi
wo kahan faqeeron me geene jate hain
chhahte hain jise dil ki gehraaiyon se
uske liye hatheli par jaan liye ghumte hain
jo hai mohabbat aa jao phir mehfil me
dilwale kahan bulawe ka intezzar karte hain.


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Re: dosti-- betuke afsaane pe ~~~~ Saahil

«Reply #11 on: April 29, 2009, 07:42:15 AM »

Nice One Salil Bhai, And Shweta Ji,.


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Re: dosti-- betuke afsaane pe ~~~~ Saahil

«Reply #12 on: April 30, 2009, 06:53:47 AM »

Quote from: jannatjahan on April 28, 2009, 03:30:40 PM

nice reply shwetha dear

aa gaya teri mehfil main
dekh kaahin tamasha na ban jaaye mera
tohfa nahin laaya hoon main is dil k siwa
ise qabool kar , kii AASHIQ hai yeh tera


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Re: dosti-- betuke afsaane pe ~~~~ Saahil

«Reply #13 on: April 30, 2009, 07:08:09 AM »

Quote from: salil2002 on April 27, 2009, 08:37:47 AM

Bahut hi khoobsurat likha hia aapne salil...
padhke aankhein nam ho gayi aur ek purana dost bhi yaad aa gaya.

dosti ka wo dilkash mausam aaj bhi yaad hai mujhe,
chhedta tha har chhoti chiz mein chidhata tha mujhe,
meri pathrili raahpe hamesha bichhai tunee makhmali chadar,
laparwahi apne hi saath karti thi to khoob daantta tha mujhe,
meri har galti ko nazarandaaz karke mere sath tha hamesha,
kabhi raah bhatki aur thokar mili,pyaarse sambhalta tha mujhe,
jeena sikhaya shaan se bhulke apni saari majboor bebasiyon ko,
aaj tanha hoon to kyon nahi aake pehchaan deta hai mujhe...


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Re: dosti-- betuke afsaane pe ~~~~ Saahil

«Reply #14 on: April 30, 2009, 07:38:27 AM »

Quote from: {Angel} on April 30, 2009, 07:08:09 AM

thnks a lot huzena ji...aapko pasand aaya aur ise pad kar aap ko koi yaad aaya isse bad kar kya hoga mere litye.........aapne bhi bahut ummda kalaam pesh kiya hai daad qabool kare

mere dost yoon toh tujhe kabhi chaha nahin maine
par tu ho jaaye juda yeh bhi meri khwahish na thi


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