dosti-- betuke afsaane pe ~~~~ Saahil

by salil2002 on April 27, 2009, 08:37:47 AM
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angel4u
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«Reply #15 on: April 30, 2009, 07:55:27 AM »
Nice once again salil...

Teri atkheliyon se kabhi pareshan ho jaati thi main,
par na jaane kyon aaj wohi shararat karne ko dil karta hai...
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salil2002
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«Reply #16 on: April 30, 2009, 08:22:24 AM »
Quote from: {Angel} on April 30, 2009, 07:55:27 AM
Nice once again salil...

Teri atkheliyon se kabhi pareshan ho jaati thi main,
par na jaane kyon aaj wohi shararat karne ko dil karta hai...
good one.huzena ji

yeh toh ittefaaq hai kii tum mere dost ho
zindgi bhar humsafar nahin dhooda jaata
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jannatjahan
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«Reply #17 on: April 30, 2009, 08:37:36 AM »
Quote from: salil2002 on April 30, 2009, 06:53:47 AM


nice reply shwetha dear


aa gaya teri mehfil main
dekh kaahin tamasha na ban jaaye mera
tohfa nahin laaya hoon main is dil k siwa
ise qabool kar , kii AASHIQ hai yeh tera
Thanks Dear......

unki pyaar bahri najar mil jaye
phir kisi tohfe ki jarurat kya hai
unhe yaad kiya wo aaye hamari mehfil me
is se badi hum par unki Inayat kya hai
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salil2002
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«Reply #18 on: April 30, 2009, 08:53:56 AM »
Quote from: jannatjahan on April 30, 2009, 08:37:36 AM
Thanks Dear......

unki pyaar bahri najar mil jaye
phir kisi tohfe ki jarurat kya hai
unhe yaad kiya wo aaye hamari mehfil me
is se badi hum par unki Inayat kya hai
bahut achche jannat ji mehfil main bulaane ka andaaz bhi khoob hai


ek noor hai ajab sa teri palkon k saaye main
isliye tere mukhde se nazrein nahin hata paata
mil jaun tujhse jaise samandar mein gir k lehrein
par kya karoon mujhe dil ka haal kehna nahin aata
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jannatjahan
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«Reply #19 on: April 30, 2009, 09:36:09 AM »
Quote from: salil2002 on April 30, 2009, 08:53:56 AM
bahut achche jannat ji mehfil main bulaane ka andaaz bhi khoob hai


ek noor hai ajab sa teri palkon k saaye main
isliye tere mukhde se nazrein nahin hata paata
mil jaun tujhse jaise samandar mein gir k lehrein
par kya karoon mujhe dil ka haal kehna nahin aata
Very nice salil......

shamo sehar unki yaadon me khoya rahta hai
aankhen kehti hain kuch aur mann kuch kehta hai
jage jage sota hai soye soye jaagta hai
ajeeb hai na ye ishq....
chhah kar bhi dil par jor nahi chalta hai
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Pooja
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«Reply #20 on: April 30, 2009, 07:48:03 PM »
wah wah wah kay abaat hai ek se bar kar ek... Good work Salil, Jannatjahan and Angel!!!
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salil2002
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«Reply #21 on: May 01, 2009, 04:44:18 AM »
Quote from: jannatjahan on April 30, 2009, 09:36:09 AM
Very nice salil......

shamo sehar unki yaadon me khoya rahta hai
aankhen kehti hain kuch aur mann kuch kehta hai
jage jage sota hai soye soye jaagta hai
ajeeb hai na ye ishq....
chhah kar bhi dil par jor nahi chalta hai
bahut achche jannat dil ko chhu liya aapne

yoon na chhedo taar dil k
toote toh phir dard hoga
mohabbat hai tumse par
kismat pe na bharosa hoga
jab bhi chaha kissii ko dil se maine
duniya ne kaha tere sath dhokha hoga
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salil2002
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«Reply #22 on: May 01, 2009, 04:45:49 AM »
Quote from: Pooja on April 30, 2009, 07:48:03 PM
wah wah wah kay abaat hai ek se bar kar ek... Good work Salil, Jannatjahan and Angel!!!


thanks a lot sis.........
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Pooja
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«Reply #23 on: May 01, 2009, 04:50:49 AM »
nice lines salil
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salil2002
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«Reply #24 on: May 01, 2009, 07:48:44 AM »
Quote from: Pooja on May 01, 2009, 04:50:49 AM
nice lines salil
thanks u again sis
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angel4u
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«Reply #25 on: May 01, 2009, 07:51:43 AM »
Quote from: salil2002 on April 30, 2009, 08:22:24 AM
good one.huzena ji

yeh toh ittefaaq hai kii tum mere dost ho
zindgi bhar humsafar nahin dhooda jaata

bahut khoob salil...

zindagi bhar ka saath maanga tha maine us Khuda se,
ke pal bhar me zindagi mukammal ho jayegi socha na tha...
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jannatjahan
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«Reply #26 on: May 02, 2009, 11:32:25 AM »
Quote from: salil2002 on May 01, 2009, 04:44:18 AM
bahut achche jannat dil ko chhu liya aapne

yoon na chhedo taar dil k
toote toh phir dard hoga
mohabbat hai tumse par
kismat pe na bharosa hoga
jab bhi chaha kissii ko dil se maine
duniya ne kaha tere sath dhokha hoga
Bahut achhe Dear...pata hai tumhe reply karne se pehle mujhe hazaron baar sochna padta hai...Itna achha likhte ho....yun hi likha karo...mujhe bhi kuch kuch likhna aa jaega......

 Jane kyun Dil ka dard bhi bada sukun deta hai
jinhe dhundh aati hai najarein saare jahan me
wo shaks dil ke kareeb hota hai
ye mana mohabbat ka dusra naam hi Dhokha hai
par mohabbat me dhokha bhi kahan sabke naseeb me hota hai
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salil2002
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«Reply #27 on: May 05, 2009, 01:39:15 PM »
Quote from: {Angel} on May 01, 2009, 07:51:43 AM
bahut khoob salil...

zindagi bhar ka saath maanga tha maine us Khuda se,
ke pal bhar me zindagi mukammal ho jayegi socha na tha...


is haseen raat main jab chand k aagosh mein chandni aati hai
sach kehta hoon sanam teri yaad bahut aati hai
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salil2002
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«Reply #28 on: May 05, 2009, 01:41:46 PM »
Quote from: jannatjahan on May 02, 2009, 11:32:25 AM
Bahut achhe Dear...pata hai tumhe reply karne se pehle mujhe hazaron baar sochna padta hai...Itna achha likhte ho....yun hi likha karo...mujhe bhi kuch kuch likhna aa jaega......

 Jane kyun Dil ka dard bhi bada sukun deta hai
jinhe dhundh aati hai najarein saare jahan me
wo shaks dil ke kareeb hota hai
ye mana mohabbat ka dusra naam hi Dhokha hai
par mohabbat me dhokha bhi kahan sabke naseeb me hota hai
bahut achche jannat aapse kuch aise hi andaaz kii ummeed thi

lagta hai chot kha kar dil bhi tumhe sukoon aaya hai
chalo mohabbat kar k dekhi, kya hua jo khali haath aaya hai
ye daur chalta rahega dilon k tootne aur judne ka
humein yakeen hai tu apni takdeer , haseen likhwa k laaya hai
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