...~~doulat-e-ghum~~...

by HumTum on July 04, 2005, 09:10:52 AM
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pehle ye zindagi itni khaas na thi
daulat-e-ghum jab ye mere paas na thi

neenv par rasmon ki bane jo rishtay
aise rishton mein kuch mithaas na thi

aa gaye saaye yaadon ke bhi qabr tak
lautnay kii jahaan se aas na thi

har manzar badla palak jhapaktay hi
phir bhii aankhon ki bujhi pyaas na thi

kaash ruk jaata 'HumTum' samaan kahi par
justzoo vaqt ko magar ye raas na thi !!
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sanya310
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«Reply #1 on: July 04, 2005, 09:20:11 AM »
bohot achhe humtum!!!!!! very true!!...good work!!!

aisa na tha pehle ye man, na koi shikayat thi
har waqt daulat ko soongti hui ye saans na thi!
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HumTum
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«Reply #2 on: July 04, 2005, 09:25:12 AM »
Shukriya Sanya aur kya khoob likha hai !!!

na tha yun barbaadi ka alaam pehley
ankhoon se ashqoN ki barsaat hoti na thi !!
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sanya310
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«Reply #3 on: July 04, 2005, 09:30:29 AM »
bohot achhe humtum!!! n thanx!

aankhon mein doulat e gham ki pyaas na thi
har waqt labon se nikalti hui 'kaash' na thi!
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HumTum
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«Reply #4 on: July 04, 2005, 09:36:40 AM »
bahoot achey sanya !!!

ghum to pehley bhi they zindgi mein meri
par iss kadar zindgi veeraan na thi !!!
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«Reply #5 on: July 04, 2005, 09:37:14 AM »
Quote from: "HumTum"
pehle ye zindagi itni khaas na thi
daulat-e-ghum jab ye mere paas na thi

neenv par rasmon ki bane jo rishtay
aise rishton mein kuch mithaas na thi

aa gaye saaye yaadon ke bhi qabr tak
lautnay kii jahaan se aas na thi

har manzar badla palak jhapaktay hi
phir bhii aankhon ki bujhi pyaas na thi

kaash ruk jaata 'HumTum' samaan kahi par
justzoo vaqt ko magar ye raas na thi !!


khas banata hai iss zindigi ko ye dard,...
sahi galat ki pehchan dilata hai ye dard,....
dard aagar na mile zindigi me,......
to ban jata hai insaan bedard,...
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HumTum
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«Reply #6 on: July 04, 2005, 09:42:33 AM »
bahut achey tushaar !!!

dard hi reh gya hai ab to faqt zindgi mein
kissi bhi khushi ki ab mujhey koi aas nhi
julsi hai rooh judai ki aag mein kuch iss kadar
ab kissi bhi aag ka mujhey koi ehsaas nhi !!
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Meena
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«Reply #7 on: July 04, 2005, 04:01:37 PM »
wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh humtum ji ....bohot achi lagi apki poem!!!!! sanya and tushar ...gud work guys!!!!


mayusi ke diye kuch is tara jalaye hai,
aag to jal rahi hai par andhere chaye hai,
par yeh aag bhi kaha jala sakhti hai hume,
jo pehle se hi jal kar haathon me chale paye hai!!!
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HumTum
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«Reply #8 on: July 04, 2005, 04:05:30 PM »
Shukriya Meena jiiii aur kya khob likha hai buddy !!

yeh ghum kaise Hai,tume bataye bhi nehi jate
na dikha sake inhe, aur Chupaye bhi nehi jate
aa hi jati hai chehre pe, udasi Kabi na kabi
khawaab apne dil ke, bhulaye bhi nehi jate !!
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Meena
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«Reply #9 on: July 04, 2005, 04:16:12 PM »
wah wah humtum ji and thanx!!

udasi ki adat is kadar pad gayi ke,
chehre pe aab uska koi nishan nahin,
muskurate hai zaroor auron ke katir,
warna hasne ka aba hume koi arman nahin!!
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HumTum
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«Reply #10 on: July 04, 2005, 04:24:24 PM »
waah ....

ret ke the mahal saare baarishon me dhah gaye
Ham kisi kaabil na the ham gardishon me rah gaye
qaaydon ne is jahaaN kii qaid rakkhiin chaahte
hasraton ke barg saare waqt ke sang bah gaye !!
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Meena
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«Reply #11 on: July 04, 2005, 04:28:10 PM »
baghon ke na rehne ka afsos na karo,
phool to hote hi hai murja jane ke liye!!
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«Reply #12 on: July 04, 2005, 04:29:59 PM »
meri kismat mein phool kha Meena ji
mein to kantooN ke saye mein jiya karta hoon !!
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«Reply #13 on: July 04, 2005, 04:35:02 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
wah wah humtum ji and thanx!!

udasi ki adat is kadar pad gayi ke,
chehre pe aab uska koi nishan nahin,
muskurate hai zaroor auron ke katir,
warna hasne ka aba hume koi arman nahin!!
Very nice humtum,meena,sanya and tushar.
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«Reply #14 on: July 04, 2005, 04:36:46 PM »
hmm....

kaanton ke saaye me jeena mushkil,
girte hue ashkon ko hai peena muskhil,
zakhmi dil ke takleef kab tak sahe hum,
aah to niklegi hi ke labon ko hai seena muskhil!!
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