DUA-E-GARIB (Nazam)... "MohaN":Shayri-E-Dard

surindarn

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DUA-E-GARIB

Fizaaoon mein harash kaa pehraa thaa
   Har su mohabbat kaa rang gehraa thaa

Har taraf bahaar-e-ishq hee chhaai thee
   Gulon pe rangat-e-laal hee barmaai thee

Nazar bhi paigaam-e-ishrat de rahi thee
   Har khwaahish bhi karvaten le rahi thee

Dilon mein kuchh jawaani sii aayi thee
   Fizaa khushboo khushboo chhaai thee

Zamin pe thee mendakon kee tar.trahat
   Asman pe thee taaron kee tam.tamahat

Papiharaa koi nagmein gaa rahaa thaa
   Kahin chashmaa raag sunaa rahaa thaa

Sakoot-e-shab tilsam rang-o-boo thaa
   Taranam hee taranam harsu hee thaa

Dil.ko machaltii sadaa aarahii thee
   Musalsal ruhon ko tarhpaa rahin thee

Umeedon pe chhaai thee ek rawaangi
   Umangon mein samaai thee dewaangi

Auzaanon kee sadaaein aa.rahin thinh
   Duaaein dil se maangi jaa rahin thinh

Ibaadat mein koi khalal naa ho yaa rab
   Qayaamat tak hee banni rahe yeh shab

Khuda yeh sadaaein kahan suntaa hai
   MohaN dua-e-garib kahan suntaa hai

Surindar. N "MohaN"


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Re: DUA-E-GARIB (Ghazal)... "MohaN"

«Reply #1 on: October 09, 2016, 05:09:26 AM »

waah bohut khub likha hai sir bohut umdha


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Re: DUA-E-GARIB (Ghazal)... "MohaN"

«Reply #2 on: October 09, 2016, 06:13:28 AM »

Quote from: surindarn on October 09, 2016, 01:20:30 AM

janaab qafiye aur radeef kaa ehtamaam hota hai ghazal mein jo ki yahaan nahin hai


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Re: DUA-E-GARIB... "MohaN"

«Reply #3 on: October 10, 2016, 03:47:42 AM »

Quote from: saahill on October 09, 2016, 05:09:26 AM

waah bohut khub likha hai sir bohut umdha

bahut shukria Saahill Sahib.
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Re: DUA-E-GARIB (Nazam)... "MohaN"

«Reply #4 on: October 11, 2016, 04:57:23 AM »

Quote from: adil bechain on October 09, 2016, 06:13:28 AM

janaab qafiye aur radeef kaa ehtamaam hota hai ghazal mein jo ki yahaan nahin hai

Adil Sahib bahut shukria for correcting me, I hope you like it as a nazam.
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surindarn

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Re: DUA-E-GARIB (Nazam)... "MohaN"

«Reply #5 on: October 13, 2016, 03:15:37 AM »

Quote from: surindarn on October 09, 2016, 01:20:30 AM

DUA-E-GARIB

Fizaaoon mein harash kaa pehraa thaa
Har su mohabbat kaa rang gehraa thaa

Har taraf bahaar-e-ishq hee chhaai thee
Gulon pe rangat-e-laal hee barmaai thee

Nazar bhi paigaam-e-ishrat de rahi thee
Har khwaahish bhi karvaten le rahi thee

Dilon mein kuchh jawaani sii aayi thee
Fizaa khushboo khushboo chhaai thee

Zamin pe thee mendakon kee tar.trahat
Asman pe thee taaron kee tam.tamahat

Papiharaa koi nagmein gaa rahaa thaa
Kahin chashmaa raag sunaa rahaa thaa

Sakoot-e-shab tilsam rang-o-boo thaa
Taranam hee taranam harsu hee thaa

Dil.ko machaltii sadaa aarahii thee
Musalsal ruhon ko tarhpaa rahin thee

Umeedon pe chhaai thee ek rawaangi
Umangon mein samaai thee dewaangi

Auzaanon kee sadaaein aa.rahin thinh
Duaaein dil se maangi jaa rahin thinh

Ibaadat mein koi khalal naa ho yaa rab
Qayaamat tak hee banni rahe yeh shab

Khuda yeh sadaaein kahan suntaa hai
MohaN dua-e-garib kahan suntaa hai

Surindar. N "MohaN"


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Re: DUA-E-GARIB (Nazam)... "MohaN"

«Reply #6 on: October 13, 2016, 09:21:02 AM »

Waaaaaah waaah waah Applause


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surindarn

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Re: DUA-E-GARIB (Nazam)... "MohaN"

«Reply #7 on: October 14, 2016, 03:34:08 AM »

Quote from: Rustum Rangila on October 13, 2016, 09:21:02 AM

Waaaaaah waaah waah Applause

bahut shukria Rangila Jee.
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