duja nahi koi

by bekarar on September 22, 2008, 10:10:33 AM
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Tanha mujhe yun chod kar, rahbar gaya koi,
yun ashqon ke sailaab me, bah-kar gaya koi,

Har baar chipaya seene me, maathe ko choom kar,
meri har naadani ko yun sahta raha koi,

tadpa kiye jiske liye, ab door hai bahoot,
aansoo ki shakl me nazar se bahta raha koi,

beraham yun hua ki fir aaya na lout kar,
yadon me sahro-shaam chahe rota rahe koi,

marne ke liye jeena kitna dardnaak hai,
"moula mere" apno se na bichda kare koi,

jab talak tha saath, kabhi dekha na gour se,
jaane ke baad har shakhs, tera saya lage koi,

itna kisi aur ko aajmaaye na khuda,
"Bekarar" sa patthar yahan duja nahi koi
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«Reply #1 on: September 22, 2008, 10:38:46 AM »
BAHUT KHOOB BEKARAR JI
VERRY TOUCHING


Baadal
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«Reply #2 on: September 22, 2008, 11:12:47 AM »
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BAHUT KHOOB SANJEEV BROTHER,
UMDA AUR LAJAWAAB KALAM PESH
KIYA AAPNE,


AAJ DOOR JO HUA WO  MUJHSE TO
DIL ME JAISE EK TUFAAN AAYA,
AANKHON ME EK SAILAB UTAR AAYA,
AAJ KADAR PATA CHALI USS INSAAN
KI JO HAR BAAR INN AANSOO KO SAMBHALTA
AAYA...

BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #3 on: September 22, 2008, 11:22:18 AM »
Bohat khoob likha hai aapne Sanjeev ji ... Applause


Beraham duniya ne saath jeena na diya
Maut manga tha par humen naseeb  na hua
Laut jaate the magar tumne saath na diya
Aur kya lekar aaye the jab tumara pyaar na mila
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«Reply #4 on: September 22, 2008, 12:31:16 PM »
jab talak tha sath kabhi dekha na gaur se KYA KEH DALA YAR KALEJA CHEER KE RAKH DIYA ZALIM
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«Reply #5 on: September 22, 2008, 03:22:19 PM »
Bahut Khoob Sanjeevji. Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: September 23, 2008, 01:34:00 AM »
Bohat khoob Bekarar...
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«Reply #7 on: September 23, 2008, 02:30:03 AM »
bahoot bahoot shukriya doston
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«Reply #8 on: September 23, 2008, 05:55:05 AM »
beintehan khoobsoorat bekarar ji... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: October 17, 2008, 05:14:56 AM »
Quote from: bekarar on September 22, 2008, 10:10:33 AM
Tanha mujhe yun chod kar, rahbar gaya koi,
yun ashqon ke sailaab me, bah-kar gaya koi,

Har baar chipaya seene me, maathe ko choom kar,
meri har naadani ko yun sahta raha koi,

tadpa kiye jiske liye, ab door hai bahoot,
aansoo ki shakl me nazar se bahta raha koi,

beraham yun hua ki fir aaya na lout kar,
yadon me sahro-shaam chahe rota rahe koi,

marne ke liye jeena kitna dardnaak hai,
"moula mere" apno se na bichda kare koi,

jab talak tha saath, kabhi dekha na gour se,
jaane ke baad har shakhs, tera saya lage koi,

itna kisi aur ko aajmaaye na khuda,
"Bekarar" sa patthar yahan duja nahi koi


Bekarar ji...badhiya Likha Hai Ji...
Khaas kar k "Mere Moula" aise likhna Hi...achha laga.

aap ki Sifat e sang k kuch kuch asar muj pe ho raha hai ji...
aur hona bhi chaiye ki Nisbat Fir kehte kisko hai !!!
 
 
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«Reply #10 on: October 17, 2008, 07:08:04 PM »
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wah wah wah!!!

bahoot khoob Bekarar ji!! bahoot he achi rachna rachi hai apne!! her ek line kamal ki... magar yah char line bahoot he achi lagi

marne ke liye jeena kitna dardnaak hai,
"moula mere" apno se na bichda kare koi,

itna kisi aur ko aajmaaye na khuda,
"Bekarar" sa patthar yahan duja nahi koi


wah kaya line likhi hai apne: marne ke liye jeena kitna dardnaak hai,.. wah wah wah... dil chu gai yah line!!!
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«Reply #11 on: October 17, 2008, 07:25:48 PM »
Bohot hi Khoob Sanjeev bohot umdah likha hai  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #12 on: October 20, 2008, 01:12:53 PM »
Quote from: Tanha(Saurabh) on September 23, 2008, 05:55:05 AM
beintehan khoobsoorat bekarar ji... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

bahoot shukriya saurabh....aap bhale hi tanha hain...lekin aapne yahan saath dekar meri tanhaai ko kam kar diya hai
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«Reply #13 on: October 20, 2008, 01:16:51 PM »
Quote from: Muhammed on October 17, 2008, 05:14:56 AM
Bekarar ji...badhiya Likha Hai Ji...
Khaas kar k "Mere Moula" aise likhna Hi...achha laga.

aap ki Sifat e sang k kuch kuch asar muj pe ho raha hai ji...
aur hona bhi chaiye ki Nisbat Fir kehte kisko hai !!!
 
 

wah bhai raza
aapke comment ne ahsaas diya ki chalo jo likha wo samjhane me mai kamyaab raha
padhne ke liye shukriya
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«Reply #14 on: October 20, 2008, 01:20:10 PM »
Quote from: Pooja on October 17, 2008, 07:08:04 PM
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wah wah wah!!!

bahoot khoob Bekarar ji!! bahoot he achi rachna rachi hai apne!! her ek line kamal ki... magar yah char line bahoot he achi lagi

marne ke liye jeena kitna dardnaak hai,
"moula mere" apno se na bichda kare koi,

itna kisi aur ko aajmaaye na khuda,
"Bekarar" sa patthar yahan duja nahi koi


wah kaya line likhi hai apne: marne ke liye jeena kitna dardnaak hai,.. wah wah wah... dil chu gai yah line!!!

aapne apne busi shedule se time nikala padha....tahedil se shukriya aapka pooja ji
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