duja nahi koi

by bekarar on September 22, 2008, 10:10:33 AM
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«Reply #15 on: October 20, 2008, 01:29:01 PM »
Bohot hi Khoob Sanjeev bohot umdah likha hai  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
humesha ki tarah aapne housala afzai ki shukrguzar hun talat
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«Reply #16 on: October 20, 2008, 01:42:55 PM »
Tanha mujhe yun chod kar, rahbar gaya koi,
yun ashqon ke sailaab me, bah-kar gaya koi,

Har baar chipaya seene me, maathe ko choom kar,
meri har naadani ko yun sahta raha koi,

tadpa kiye jiske liye, ab door hai bahoot,
aansoo ki shakl me nazar se bahta raha koi,

beraham yun hua ki fir aaya na lout kar,
yadon me sahro-shaam chahe rota rahe koi,

marne ke liye jeena kitna dardnaak hai,
"moula mere" apno se na bichda kare koi,

jab talak tha saath, kabhi dekha na gour se,
jaane ke baad har shakhs, tera saya lage koi,

itna kisi aur ko aajmaaye na khuda,
"Bekarar" sa patthar yahan duja nahi koi




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bohat khoob likha hai Sanjeev ji aapne... Thumbs UP
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«Reply #17 on: October 20, 2008, 01:52:30 PM »

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bohat khoob likha hai Sanjeev ji aapne... Thumbs UP


shukriya honey ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #18 on: October 29, 2008, 09:36:21 AM »
bohut khoob sanjeev ji
very heart touching lines

mila fir milkar bichad gaya
ek aur ghaav fir dil par kar gaya
jaate jaate ek aawaj bhi na di
aur ta-umra intzaar naseeb wo mere kar gaya
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«Reply #19 on: October 29, 2008, 09:43:40 AM »
Bahut Khoob Bekarar Ji
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