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«Reply #45 on: April 14, 2006, 01:47:20 AM » |
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thanks Talat and Aryaan!! bahoot hi acha likha hai Talat apne!!!
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«Reply #46 on: April 14, 2006, 04:25:08 AM » |
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wonderfull Pooja sis...... Talat........ Aryan.....
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«Reply #47 on: April 14, 2006, 04:36:14 AM » |
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tera ek jkham bhar na payega
zindagi ka safar aise hi nikal jayega
jab ayegi teri yaad, ashaqo mai bah jayega
tera ek chehra aor naam, umar bhar sath nibhayega
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«Reply #48 on: April 14, 2006, 07:14:12 AM » |
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pooja ji wysy to aap kafi accha likhti ho but thodi jan daliy apny kalamon mien lika to thik hien kiska kalam likhti ho wysy yeh to bata do itny sary likh daly pahly konsa likha tha yad bhi ya bhool gai aap or kiska likha tha
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«Reply #49 on: April 14, 2006, 06:17:43 PM » |
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Thanks a lot Pooja & Waheed....
Nice One Pooja...
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«Reply #50 on: April 14, 2006, 07:22:59 PM » |
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cheer kar dil chain na mila lejao yeh khoon-e-jigar ab bhi baQi hai..
har lamha tadpaya toh kya.. safar-e-umar ab bhi baQi hai...
De mujhko kuch aur Zakhm ke dil mein kuch jagah baaaQi hai..
toot kar toh bas bikhri hu main.. mujhko Fanaah hona baaQi hai..
i had thought i would never ever write again in DARD.. but i hav lost it!! i m sorry for breaking my promise..  |
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«Reply #51 on: April 14, 2006, 08:21:05 PM » |
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Dard ke maaron ki duniya mein aapka swagat hai Mehek...
Bohat khoob... keep writing!
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«Reply #52 on: April 14, 2006, 08:36:33 PM » |
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Ya khuda.. cheen le Ummeed mujhse..mera daaman itna khali ho..
kismat ko ho reham ek din woh shayad maut ka tohfa de jaae
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«Reply #53 on: April 14, 2006, 08:47:01 PM » |
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girte ashkon ko sametu gar saagar mein nahi jitna paani hota hai...
khuda ki aazmaish dekho.. na aansu kam hote hain na pyar kam hota hai..
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«Reply #54 on: April 14, 2006, 09:00:50 PM » |
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apni pyar ki khusbu se duniya jeetne chali thi Mehek..
Nadaan mujhe khabar na thi..duniyawale Dil nahi rakhte..
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«Reply #55 on: April 14, 2006, 09:30:17 PM » |
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zakhm kardete dard bayan toh aah-e-taklief gehri na hoti..
hota ghum-e-dil ka ehsas gar humne chehre par jhooti tabassum na odhi hoti
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«Reply #56 on: April 15, 2006, 02:47:10 AM » |
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Xcellent One All Mehak, Wel cum 2 Shayari-e-dard and this is Quite unexpeted!!!!!  Shiddat-e-gum hai bekaraarii hain
Raat guzrii nahee kash-m-kash mein Guzaarii hain
Yaadon ke saath NaQsh kuch Obharein hain
Merii dedon se Lahoo Behna ZaaRi hain
Saaree duniyaa ko aazmaan dekhaa har baaR
Is martaba tumhare karam kii baaree hain
Likhne waale khafaa ho ke yoon "Nirbhay" jaate hain
Unke lout aane ka sapnaa saa mujh pe taaree hain!! |
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«Reply #57 on: April 15, 2006, 03:17:14 AM » |
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Very Nice Mehek & Nirbhay....
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«Reply #58 on: April 15, 2006, 05:01:25 AM » |
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wah kaya baat hai neer and Mehak
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«Reply #59 on: April 15, 2006, 08:45:10 AM » |
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dard aankhon mein na nazar aae.. kajal ki lakeerien kuch aur gehri kii...
aansu the daayron se bekhabar.. behgaye toh dil kya kare..neer life mein bohat kuch unexpected hota.. shyad expectations chod dein toh zindagi aasan lage..
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