*Dushwariyan Reh Gayi*

by Roja on April 12, 2008, 07:53:34 PM
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Dhoop dal gayi aur julsi kaaya reh gayi
Dhur jab se tum huye saat perchayiyan reh gayi

Khile darkaton per kijaa.n ke nishaa.n saaf dekh lo
Phool-patte jhad gaye khali daliyan reh gayi

Zindagi main milke tumse aakhir hume kya mila?
Hamara wajood tha alag ab ruswayiyan reh gayi

Ek tufan-sa uta pal main chala bhi gaya
Ab ye manzar ki bas dhool ki aandhiyan reh gayi

Jane kaisi aag hai ye dil ki bhujthi hi nahi
Raakh hokar bhi is me chingariyan reh gayi

Khile chaman ko jane kiski lagi hai nazar
Bas viraan hokar "Roja" ki dunia reh gayi
 
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SAM ANDREWS
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«Reply #1 on: April 12, 2008, 11:02:27 PM »
nicely written ..keep it up roja
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honeyrose
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«Reply #2 on: April 13, 2008, 06:44:10 AM »
Bohat khoob Roja..acha likha hai dear
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harashmahajan
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«Reply #3 on: April 13, 2008, 06:48:43 AM »
Bahoot achha likha Roja.....its great to se you with this post.........Harash
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #4 on: April 13, 2008, 07:31:02 AM »
Hey Roja its awesome ...
I always love reading ur posts ...
Keep it up ...
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baadal102
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«Reply #5 on: April 13, 2008, 03:32:47 PM »
khoob bahoot khoob roja




Baadal
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Prateek Mardia
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«Reply #6 on: April 13, 2008, 03:46:30 PM »
roja ji,

behad khoobsurat likha he aapne.ek ek pankti taaref ki haqdaar he.bohut khoob.
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mistufer
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«Reply #7 on: April 13, 2008, 08:08:06 PM »
rojaaaaaaaaa dear
bahut acha likha hai.
sare sher khubsoorat hain
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diya786
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«Reply #8 on: April 14, 2008, 07:10:45 AM »
bhut khoob rajaji
yeh lines kuch khaas lagi...

Zindagi main milke tumse aakhir hume kya mila?
Hamara wajood tha alag ab ruswayiyan reh gayi

Ek tufan-sa uta pal main chala bhi gaya
Ab ye manzar ki bas dhool ki aandhiyan reh gayi

i have no words to write more in it
simply great!!!

Jane kaisi aag hai ye dil ki bhujthi hi nahi
Raakh hokar bhi is me chingariyan reh gayi
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Prateek Mardia
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«Reply #9 on: April 14, 2008, 02:07:30 PM »
aaj fir se padha, aaj fir se accha laga,aaj fir se mubarakbaad.
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #10 on: April 22, 2008, 11:50:48 AM »
Wah Wah ROJA Sis Kya Baat Hai.. bahut bahut Khoooooob.. !!
Ek ek Lafz Shayarana Andaaz me likha hai.. Really Great.. !! Usual Smile Usual Smile

Vicky
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #11 on: January 22, 2009, 06:36:12 PM »
Dhoop dal gayi aur julsi kaaya reh gayi
Dhur jab se tum huye saat perchayiyan reh gayi

Khile darkaton per kijaa.n ke nishaa.n saaf dekh lo
Phool-patte jhad gaye khali daliyan reh gayi

Zindagi main milke tumse aakhir hume kya mila?
Hamara wajood tha alag ab ruswayiyan reh gayi

Ek tufan-sa uta pal main chala bhi gaya
Ab ye manzar ki bas dhool ki aandhiyan reh gayi

Jane kaisi aag hai ye dil ki bhujthi hi nahi
Raakh hokar bhi is me chingariyan reh gayi

Khile chaman ko jane kiski lagi hai nazar
Bas viraan hokar "Roja" ki dunia reh gayi
 






very very very beautifully written ROJA ... great piece of poem.. keep it up

Jasbir Singh
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #12 on: January 22, 2009, 06:54:33 PM »
Wah! bahut khoob Roja Ji
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