-----/// Duwaa kiski thi ///----- Hriday

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bejaan  aur  berang si  zindagi hamaare  siwaa kiski thi
kisne thaa khoyaa  sab  kuch, kahaani  bhalaa  kiski thi

dil thaa tootaa hamaaraa, bhalaa dosh hum kis ko den
ilzaam bewafaai kaa  humpar aayaa, to wafaa kiski thi

ghar huwaa neelaam hamaaraa kisi ki khushi ki khaatir
kyaa  bataayein  hum  kisi  se ki aakhir khataa kiski thi

bas  dard  hi dard rahaa har pal zindagi mein hamaare
haath they humne  uthaaye, hui  poori duwaa kiski thi

hum deewaane the jo dil  lagaa  baithe hasi chehre se
qatl kisne kiyaa  hamaaraa, humein  mili sazaa kiski thi

mil  nahi  paayaa  sukoon  dil  ko  kabhi, kisi bhi tarhaa
kiski  thi zameen, kiskaa aasmaan  aur hawaa  kiski thi






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«Reply #1 on: May 14, 2016, 07:04:59 PM »


Kapil jee Aadaab ... !

WaaH janab kya kahne ... haal e dil bayaaN karti badi khoob kalaam pesh ki hai aapne ...

Achchi kalaam huyi hai... khoob ahsaas bayaaN kiye hai ...
Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad o mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhte rahiye...
Bazm ko roshan o aabaad karte rahiye....

Shaad o aabaad rahiye ...
Khuda Hafez ....
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«Reply #2 on: May 15, 2016, 10:14:38 PM »
bahut hee umdah waah waah waah Hriday Jee.
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«Reply #3 on: May 16, 2016, 06:52:35 AM »
Quote from: ~Hriday~ on May 14, 2016, 06:34:54 PM




bejaan  aur  berang si  zindagi hamaare  siwaa kiski thi
kisne thaa khoyaa  sab  kuch, kahaani  bhalaa  kiski thi

dil thaa tootaa hamaaraa, bhalaa dosh hum kis ko den
ilzaam bewafaai kaa  humpar aayaa, to wafaa kiski thi

ghar huwaa neelaam hamaaraa kisi ki khushi ki khaatir
kyaa  bataayein  hum  kisi  se ki aakhir khataa kiski thi

bas  dard  hi dard rahaa har pal zindagi mein hamaare
haath they humne  uthaaye, hui  poori duwaa kiski thi

hum deewaane the jo dil  lagaa  baithe hasi chehre se
qatl kisne kiyaa  hamaaraa, humein  mili sazaa kiski thi

mil  nahi  paayaa  sukoon  dil  ko  kabhi, kisi bhi tarhaa
kiski  thi zameen, kiskaa aasmaan  aur hawaa  kiski thi



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«Reply #4 on: May 29, 2016, 07:00:02 AM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Parwaaz ji.....!!!

Quote from: ParwaaZ on May 14, 2016, 07:04:59 PM

Kapil jee Aadaab ... !

WaaH janab kya kahne ... haal e dil bayaaN karti badi khoob kalaam pesh ki hai aapne ...

Achchi kalaam huyi hai... khoob ahsaas bayaaN kiye hai ...
Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad o mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhte rahiye...
Bazm ko roshan o aabaad karte rahiye....

Shaad o aabaad rahiye ...
Khuda Hafez ....
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«Reply #5 on: June 03, 2016, 06:03:53 AM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Surindar ji....!!!

Quote from: surindarn on May 15, 2016, 10:14:38 PM
bahut hee umdah waah waah waah Hriday Jee.
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«Reply #6 on: June 03, 2016, 06:04:57 AM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Rustum ji.....!!!

Quote from: Rustum Rangila on May 16, 2016, 06:52:35 AM
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«Reply #7 on: June 03, 2016, 06:07:10 AM »
Mastammmmm mast kp.... dil ko chhoo gai poem yaar...
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«Reply #8 on: June 03, 2016, 06:09:51 AM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa ji.... apne padh liyaa iski khoobsoorti aur bhi zyaadaa badh gayi....!!! Par jawaab mein aap kuch likhte to aur achchaa lagtaa...!!!

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on June 03, 2016, 06:07:10 AM
Mastammmmm mast kp.... dil ko chhoo gai poem yaar...
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«Reply #9 on: June 03, 2016, 11:09:13 AM »
awesome writing and a nice read....aap apne naam ko bakhoobi nibhate hai...dilse dil ki rachnaye likhte hai...
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«Reply #10 on: June 05, 2016, 01:33:44 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Sps ji...!!!

Quote from: Sps on June 03, 2016, 11:09:13 AM
awesome writing and a nice read....aap apne naam ko bakhoobi nibhate hai...dilse dil ki rachnaye likhte hai...
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