-----/// Ek afsaanaa baaki reh gayaa ///----- Hriday

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kitni   mohabbat  hai   unse,  bataanaa   baaki   reh  gaya
kitaab ke  panno   mein ek   afsaanaaa  baaki  reh  gayaa

sajaa  to   liyaa   thaa  saaraa  ghar   roshani  ki  khaatir
bas  un  saje   chiraagon  ko  jalaanaa  baaki  reh  gayaa

aisaa pehli  baar  nahi  huwaa  mohabbat  ke  kisso  mein
bujh  gayi  shamaa aur  bas  parwaanaa baaki reh gayaa

udnaa to  seekh hi gaye  they hum  bhi  aasmaanon mein
bas  upar   apne  pankhon  ko  failaanaa baaki reh gayaa

jaante to   hum  bhi  they  ki  lakeerein  saath nahi dengi
bas haathon  se lakeeron ko  mitaanaa  baaki  reh gayaa

badi  der  tak  unhe  jaate  huwe dekhte rahe hum us din
jaate huwe unkaa  mudke muskuraanaa baaki reh gayaa

duur  bahut  duur  nikal  gayi  hain  judaa  ho  ke hum se
jaate jaate unhe  seene  se  lagaanaa  baaki  reh  gayaa

sab  to  khatam  ho  gayaa  ek  unke duur chale jaane se
aansuon ke saath bas unkaa deewaanaa baaki reh gayaa



कितनी  मोहब्बत  है  उनसे , बताना  बाकी  रह गया
किताब के पन्नो में फिर एक अफ़साना बाकी रह गया

सजा  तो   लिया  था  सारा  घर  रौशनी  की  खातिर
बस  उन  सजे  चिरागों  को  जलाना  बाकी रह  गया

ऐसा  पहली  बार  नहीं  हुवा  मोहब्बत के किस्सो में
बुझ गयी  शमा  और  बस  परवाना  बाकी  रह गया

उड़ना  तो  सीख  ही गए  थे  हमभी   आसमानो  में
बस  ऊपर  अपने पंखों  को  फैलाना बाकी  रह  गया

जानते   तो  हम  भी  थे  की लकीरें  साथ  नहीं देंगी
बस  हाथों  से  लकीरों  को  मिटाना  बाकी   रह गया

बड़ी देर तक उन्हें जाते हुये देखते रहे  हम  उस दिन
जाते  हुए  उनका  मुड़के  मुस्कुराना  बाकी  रह गया

दूर  बहुत   दूर  निकल  गयी  हैं  जुदा  हो के हमसे
जाते  जाते  उन्हें  सीने  से  लगाना  बाकी  रह गया

सब तो  खत्म हो गया एक  उनके दूर चले जाने से
आंसुओं  के साथ बस उनका दीवाना  बाकी रह गया




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«Reply #1 on: May 12, 2015, 11:25:41 PM »
Very nice. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: May 13, 2015, 04:35:30 AM »
bahoot khoooob haiday ji
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«Reply #3 on: May 13, 2015, 05:37:40 AM »
Wah wah
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«Reply #4 on: May 13, 2015, 11:44:43 AM »
 Applause Applause Applause

bahut bahut khub hridayji..... ek rau aapke lie....
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«Reply #5 on: May 13, 2015, 11:45:42 AM »


maaf kijiye rau kal de payenge.....
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«Reply #6 on: May 13, 2015, 05:54:08 PM »
Quote from: ~Hriday~ on May 12, 2015, 07:38:33 PM

 
kitni   mohabbat  hai   unse,  bataanaa   baaki   reh  gaya
kitaab ke  panno   mein ek   afsaanaaa  baaki  reh  gayaa

sajaa  to   liyaa   thaa  saaraa  ghar   roshani  ki  khaatir
bas  un  saje   chiraagon  ko  jalaanaa  baaki  reh  gayaa

aisaa pehli  baar  nahi  huwaa  mohabbat  ke  kisso  mein
bujh  gayi  shamaa aur  bas  parwaanaa baaki reh gayaa

udnaa to  seekh hi gaye  they hum  bhi  aasmaanon mein
bas  upar   apne  pankhon  ko  failaanaa baaki reh gayaa

jaante to   hum  bhi  they  ki  lakeerein  saath nahi dengi
bas haathon  se lakeeron ko  mitaanaa  baaki  reh gayaa

badi  der  tak  unhe  jaate  huwe dekhte rahe hum us din
jaate huwe unkaa  mudke muskuraanaa baaki reh gayaa

duur  bahut  duur  nikal  gayi  hain  judaa  ho  ke hum se
jaate jaate unhe  seene  se  lagaanaa  baaki  reh  gayaa

sab  to  khatam  ho  gayaa  ek  unke duur chale jaane se
aansuon ke saath bas unkaa deewaanaa baaki reh gayaa



कितनी  मोहब्बत  है  उनसे , बताना  बाकी  रह गया
किताब के पन्नो में फिर एक अफ़साना बाकी रह गया

सजा  तो   लिया  था  सारा  घर  रौशनी  की  खातिर
बस  उन  सजे  चिरागों  को  जलाना  बाकी रह  गया

ऐसा  पहली  बार  नहीं  हुवा  मोहब्बत के किस्सो में
बुझ गयी  शमा  और  बस  परवाना  बाकी  रह गया

उड़ना  तो  सीख  ही गए  थे  हमभी   आसमानो  में
बस  ऊपर  अपने पंखों  को  फैलाना बाकी  रह  गया

जानते   तो  हम  भी  थे  की लकीरें  साथ  नहीं देंगी
बस  हाथों  से  लकीरों  को  मिटाना  बाकी   रह गया

बड़ी देर तक उन्हें जाते हुये देखते रहे  हम  उस दिन
जाते  हुए  उनका  मुड़के  मुस्कुराना  बाकी  रह गया

दूर  बहुत   दूर  निकल  गयी  हैं  जुदा  हो के हमसे
जाते  जाते  उन्हें  सीने  से  लगाना  बाकी  रह गया

सब तो  खत्म हो गया एक  उनके दूर चले जाने से
आंसुओं  के साथ बस उनका दीवाना  बाकी रह गया





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«Reply #7 on: May 13, 2015, 07:13:23 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut 2 khoob Hriday ji
dheron daaad kubool karein
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«Reply #8 on: May 13, 2015, 08:13:53 PM »
Bahut Khoob.
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«Reply #9 on: May 15, 2015, 01:36:06 PM »
Quote from: adil bechain on May 13, 2015, 05:54:08 PM

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaah janaab iss khoob kalaam per RAU aainda pesh-e-khidmat hogaa Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


rau pesh-e-khidnmat hai janaab
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«Reply #10 on: May 16, 2015, 04:08:51 PM »
waah bahut umda....
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«Reply #11 on: May 16, 2015, 07:23:58 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Pooja ji....!!!


Quote from: vinery on May 12, 2015, 11:25:41 PM
Very nice. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: May 17, 2015, 10:05:48 AM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Rajan ji....!!!


Quote from: RAJAN KONDAL on May 13, 2015, 04:35:30 AM
bahoot khoooob haiday ji
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«Reply #13 on: May 17, 2015, 04:35:23 PM »

Hriday Ji ...Kya khoob likha hai ... Aisa laga maano apka ye Kalaam ....tasveer ke jaise saamne aa gaya

Dhero Daad! ...Apki iss peshkash ke liye
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«Reply #14 on: May 20, 2015, 08:24:43 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Raji ji....!!!


Quote from: Rajigujral on May 13, 2015, 05:37:40 AM
Wah wah
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