ek akela badnaseeb

by vikas_chandra on November 18, 2004, 11:19:11 AM
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DARD KI SIYAHI SE LIKHA MERA NASEEB THA,
 BUJH GAYI MERI MOHABBAT KYONKI MEIN BADNASEEB THA,

 PAL BHAR KO HUM BHI SAMBHAL NA PAAYE THEY,
GUZRA HI HUM PER HAADSA AJEEB THA

 TAMAM UMR ZINDAGI SAMAJH KAR JISE CHAHA THA,
 WOH AAKHRI SAFAR MEIN BHI NA MERE KAREEB THA,

 KHUSHIYAAN BAANT TA RAHA MEIN SABSE ZINDAGI KI,
 AB GUM KE ANDHERON MEIN NA KOI SHAREEK THA,

 DIL, DUNIYA, DEWTA SAB PATTHAR KE HAIN,
SUNA HAI HAMNE KEHTA EK FAKEER THA
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neha17
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«Reply #1 on: November 18, 2004, 04:32:39 PM »
hi
good one nice keep it up
i am neha
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nishita
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«Reply #2 on: November 18, 2004, 04:33:54 PM »
nice
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vikas_chandra
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«Reply #3 on: November 18, 2004, 04:37:12 PM »
neha ji reply to kai aaenge is sher ke lekin aapka reply padh ke bahut khsuhi hui...aur jaanti hain kyon...kyonki jiske liye main sher likhta hoon na uska naam bhi NEHA hi hai , kai dinon se baat nahin hui hai usse, jaane anjaane aapne uski yaad dila di hamen,,,,,,
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sandeepparker
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«Reply #4 on: November 19, 2004, 05:30:09 AM »
good vikas.. lekin neha iski bato mai na aana :lol:
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vikas_chandra
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«Reply #5 on: November 19, 2004, 06:59:11 AM »
yaar sandeep ek taraf tareef bhi kar rahe ho, aur doosri taraf masti bhi le rahe ho, lekin Ms NEHA sahi kah raha hoon ye sher jiske liye likha gaya hai uska naam bhi NEHA hi hai ,, ye sandeep ki baaton me na aaiyega
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #6 on: November 19, 2004, 08:39:06 AM »
nice vikash................
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mnfardeen
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«Reply #7 on: November 19, 2004, 09:47:35 AM »
Quote from: "vikas_chandra"
yaar sandeep ek taraf tareef bhi kar rahe ho, aur doosri taraf masti bhi le rahe ho, lekin Ms NEHA sahi kah raha hoon ye sher jiske liye likha gaya hai uska naam bhi NEHA hi hai ,, ye sandeep ki baaton me na aaiyega


 dil keraroun ko choker nikla hai ap ye shayr bouhat qoob hai ap ka
 qayaal  
 
 >>>>>>>>>>fardeen<<<<<<<<<<< m:ail
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Pooja
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«Reply #8 on: November 19, 2004, 05:20:38 PM »
wah!!!! bahoot khoob!!!! VIKAS JI!!!!
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