Ek andheraa hun.....Premdeep

by premdeep on November 05, 2013, 08:36:09 PM
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Mat jalao hasraton ke chiraag
Ek andhera hun mein mit jaunga

alfaazon ki zarurat nahi mujhko
Bin kahe hi sab kah kaunga

Mat rooya kar meri yaad mein
aanshu hun tera beh jaunga

Sath to ab bhi hun tere yahi
aankhe band kar nazar aunga

Ek ret ka gharaunda sa hun ab
kabhi ban jaunga kabhi deh jaunga

Mar bhi jaun to mat rona tum
Dekhna ek baar palatkar phir aunga
 





 



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«Reply #1 on: November 05, 2013, 08:52:35 PM »
waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: November 05, 2013, 09:02:04 PM »
nicee onee..
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«Reply #3 on: November 05, 2013, 10:13:36 PM »
Mat jalao hasraton ke chiraag
Ek andhera hun mein mit jaunga

alfaazon ki zarurat nahi mujhko
Bin kahe hi sab kah kaunga

Mat rooya kar meri yaad mein
aanshu hun tera beh jaunga

Sath to ab bhi hun tere yahi
aankhe band kar nazar aunga

Ek ret ka gharaunda sa hun ab
kabhi ban jaunga kabhi deh jaunga

Mar bhi jaun to mat rona tum
Dekhna ek baar palatkar phir aunga
 





 






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«Reply #4 on: November 05, 2013, 11:41:19 PM »
alfaazon ki zarurat nahi mujhko
Bin kahe hi sab kah kaunga

Mat rooya kar meri yaad mein
aanshu hun tera beh jaunga

Sath to ab bhi hun tere yahi
aankhe band kar nazar aunga


Waah kya bat hai.
So Nice Prem Jee.
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ambalika sharma
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«Reply #5 on: November 06, 2013, 03:26:18 AM »
beautiful writing
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Iftakhar Ahmad
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«Reply #6 on: November 06, 2013, 04:37:00 AM »
bahut khoob.
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aqsh
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«Reply #7 on: November 06, 2013, 09:31:31 PM »
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Achchci peshkash Premdeep ji... par har baar ke muqable is baar aapki kalaam thodi kamjor lagi mujhe... but keep writing... dheron daaaaaad..
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