Ek Baadal Hoon Main...

by Aryaan on August 13, 2005, 01:16:06 PM
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Aryaan
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Aawara Hawaaon Mein Urtaa Ek Aawara Baadal Hoon Main
Khud Chain Hoon Apne Dil Ka, Aur Khud Hi Dil Ki Halchal Hoon Main

Main Ne Hi Hasaaya Hai Dil Ko, Jab Jab Tha Udaasi Ka Aalam
Roya Hoon Lipat Kar Khud Se Hi, Ek Bheega Sa Aanchal Hoon Main

Kal, Aaj Aur Kal Ko, Yun Main Ne Seeney Se Lagaa Kar Rakha Hai
Khud Aaney Waala Waqt Hoon, Aur Khud Guzraa Huwa Harr Pal Hoon Main

Aa Mujh Ko Sajaa Le Honton Par, Naghmaa Hoon Teri Harr Dhadkan Ka
Aa Phir Se Basaa Le Aankhon Mein Teri Aankhon Ka Kaajal Hoon Main

Tu Laakh Sitam Dhaata Hai Aur Shikwaa Bhi Nahi Hai Kyun Mujhko
Haan Tera Hoon Deewaana Aur, Haan Tere Liye Paagal Hoon Main

Aaya Hoon Jahaan Se, Jaana Hai Phir Laut Wahin Ek Din Aryaan
Bas Naam Ko Aawara Hoon, Aur Bas Naam Ka Ek Baadal Hoon Main
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nikki
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«Reply #1 on: August 13, 2005, 01:34:57 PM »
wow.....bahut bahut bahut hi acha likha hai aapne Aryaan...........

khud ko itna gumgeen na karo
ke dil ka dhadakna mushkil ho gaye

khushiyan bhi door se guzrein
gumon ko khud par behadd yaqeen ho jaye

sawan ki ghataon ko khushi ka paigaam samjho
na khud ke dard ko jinda karo inhein dekhkar
ke har shaye..tumhare gum mein leen ho jaye

gumon ka kya hai saathi hain yeh zindagi ke
khushiyan bhi agar chand mil jayein
to zindagi rangeen ho jaye

dua hai meri tumhein koi gum na sehna pade
meri dua kabool ho, aur mujhe bhi apni duaon pe yaqeen ho jaye
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Aryaan
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«Reply #2 on: August 13, 2005, 01:52:23 PM »
Quote from: "nikki"
wow.....bahut bahut bahut hi acha likha hai aapne Aryaan...........

khud ko itna gumgeen na karo
ke dil ka dhadakna mushkil ho gaye

khushiyan bhi door se guzrein
gumon ko khud par behadd yaqeen ho jaye

sawan ki ghataon ko khushi ka paigaam samjho
na khud ke dard ko jinda karo inhein dekhkar
ke har shaye..tumhare gum mein leen ho jaye

gumon ka kya hai saathi hain yeh zindagi ke
khushiyan bhi agar chand mil jayein
to zindagi rangeen ho jaye

dua hai meri tumhein koi gum na sehna pade
meri dua kabool ho, aur mujhe bhi apni duaon pe yaqeen ho jaye

Thank you so much Nikki... aur itna khubsoorat reply kiya aap ne keh parh kar dil khush ho gaya....Usual Smile
Bohat acha likha hai aap ne bhi Nikki....
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nikki
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«Reply #3 on: August 13, 2005, 01:59:14 PM »
thank u soo much for appriciation ....Par aapne likha hi itna acha hai ki reply to dena hi tha....waise aap hi se sikha hai...kuch thoda bahut likhna
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Aryaan
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«Reply #4 on: August 13, 2005, 02:04:11 PM »
Quote from: "nikki"
thank you soo much for appriciation ....Par aapne likha hi itna acha hai ki reply to dena hi tha....waise aap hi se sikha hai...kuch thoda bahut likhna

Arey chalo hatto... mujh se hi seekha hai.. Usual Smile
 yeh tau aapki apni mehnat hai Nikki...
Keep writing...
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isha_verma7
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«Reply #5 on: August 13, 2005, 06:25:46 PM »
wah wah wah bahut achaa Aryaan ji as usual

And nikki ji aap bhi kam nahi " dua hai meri tumhein koi gum na sehna pade
meri dua kabool ho, aur mujhe bhi apni duaon pe yaqeen ho jaye"
.....bahut vadiya kudiya.......just great!!!
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nikki
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«Reply #6 on: August 13, 2005, 11:32:45 PM »
thanx a lot Isha ji.....Aapka bhi bahut shukriya Aryaan.
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Aryaan
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«Reply #7 on: August 13, 2005, 11:37:39 PM »
Quote from: "isha_verma7"
wah wah wah bahut achaa Aryaan ji as usual

And nikki ji aap bhi kam nahi " dua hai meri tumhein koi gum na sehna pade
meri dua kabool ho, aur mujhe bhi apni duaon pe yaqeen ho jaye"
.....bahut vadiya kudiya.......just great!!!

Bohat shukriya Isha....
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Talat
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«Reply #8 on: August 14, 2005, 02:20:06 PM »
Bohot bohot bohot bohot achcha likha hai Aryaan aur Nikki ......... !!!!!! Usual Smile
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nikki
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«Reply #9 on: August 14, 2005, 02:53:42 PM »
thanx a lot Talat sis............................................
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #10 on: August 14, 2005, 04:01:08 PM »
wonderfulllllll   Aryan.............Nikki................too  good  Nikki...........tongue3
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nikki
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«Reply #11 on: August 14, 2005, 04:15:23 PM »
thanx Waheed ...aapne kuch nahi likha.Huh?................................................. .......
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Aryaan
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«Reply #12 on: August 14, 2005, 04:22:18 PM »
Bohat bohat shukriya Talat & Waheed.........
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #13 on: August 14, 2005, 05:20:38 PM »
Quote from: "nikki"
thanx Waheed ...aapne kuch nahi likha.Huh?................................................. .......


ur  Welcome  Nikki  .............   Aryan,..........    tongue3  areee   Nikki  aisi kya  baat  hai  mujhe  padhkar  hi  bahot  accha   laga utna  accha nahi  likh  sakta  tha  isliye  nahi  likha   :oops:  :oops:   lekin  chalo  main try  karta  hoon......

uski aankhon se bhi gahra tha meri rooh ka jakham
woh samajh  na saka  meri  tanhayee  ko  kabhi  
hawa  bhi  jakham  ko taaza  kar  jaate  hain
woh  shaks  aaya  nahi  marham  lagaane  kabhi...........................
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Aryaan
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«Reply #14 on: August 14, 2005, 08:31:25 PM »
Bohat khoob Waheed....... Nice One...............
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