Ek Bhul ki Thi

by thegrimreaper on September 29, 2010, 03:03:35 PM
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Dil ko dhokha dene ki bhul ki thi
Dil se naata tod bithe...

Dil ko gumrah karne ki bhul ki thi
Khud raaste bhul baithe...

Dil ki shikayat na sunne ki bhul ki thi
Ek dard par pacchta baithe...

Dil ko nazar andaaz karne ki bhul ki thi
Khwahishon ko kho baithe...

Dil ko gair karne ki bhul ki thi
Apnon ke liye gair ho baithe...

Pathhar banne ki bhul ki thi
Mom ki tarah pighal baithe...


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«Reply #1 on: September 29, 2010, 03:06:25 PM »

Dil ko dhokha dene ki bhul ki thi
Dil se naata tod bithe...

Dil ko gumrah karne ki bhul ki thi
Khud raaste bhul baithe...

Dil ki shikayat na sunne ki bhul ki thi
Ek dard par pacchta baithe...

Dil ko nazar andaaz karne ki bhul ki thi
Khwahishon ko kho baithe...

Dil ko gair karne ki bhul ki thi
Apnon ke liye gair ho baithe...

Pathhar banne ki bhul ki thi
Mom ki tarah pighal baithe...


The Grim Reaper

Waah Waah waah!!!!

bahut bahut Khoob Thegrimreaper..

Bahut Ache  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: September 29, 2010, 03:51:28 PM »
bahut hi khoob thegrimreapar ji.....isliye kehte hai jo aap nahi hai wo banne ki bhul nahi karni chahiye....bahut accha likha
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«Reply #3 on: September 29, 2010, 08:26:17 PM »
Gud 1.......
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«Reply #4 on: September 30, 2010, 02:28:26 AM »
WAH KYA BAAT HAI         THEGRIMREAPER JI......


DIL KO JUTHEE TASALI DENE KI BHUL KI THI
APNE ARMAANO SE HAATH DO BAITHE...
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«Reply #5 on: September 30, 2010, 11:30:47 AM »
Waah Waah waah!!!!

bahut bahut Khoob Thegrimreaper..

Bahut Ache  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


shukriya aapki hausal afzaai ka
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«Reply #6 on: September 30, 2010, 11:32:06 AM »
bahut hi khoob thegrimreapar ji.....isliye kehte hai jo aap nahi hai wo banne ki bhul nahi karni chahiye....bahut accha likha

shukriya
aur bahut sahi kaha aapne... Applause
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«Reply #7 on: September 30, 2010, 11:32:41 AM »
Gud 1.......

shukriya neelgold ji
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«Reply #8 on: September 30, 2010, 11:33:33 AM »
WAH KYA BAAT HAI         THEGRIMREAPER JI......


DIL KO JUTHEE TASALI DENE KI BHUL KI THI
APNE ARMAANO SE HAATH DO BAITHE...

shukriya
aur bahut hi khub panktiyan likhi hain aapne

Applause  Applause Applause  Applause
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AbhiTamrakar
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«Reply #9 on: September 30, 2010, 11:33:54 AM »
badhiya he grimreaper ji likhte rahiyeee
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«Reply #10 on: September 30, 2010, 11:48:10 AM »
badhiya he grimreaper ji likhte rahiyeee

shukriya aapki hausla afzai ka
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Kaushal Sharma
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«Reply #11 on: September 21, 2012, 12:37:11 PM »
Bahut khoob ,,,,,,,zabadarst cration Girm ji .
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thegrimreaper
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«Reply #12 on: September 21, 2012, 07:00:18 PM »
shukkriya kaushal ji
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