~~"EK BIKHRI HUI LADKI, TABAYAF"~~

by k.shael on August 06, 2008, 07:22:57 AM
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DEAR FRIENDS BAHUT DINO BAAD KUCH LIKHA HAI,UMEED HAI PASAND AAYEGA,

EK MASOOM SI LADKI KI KAHANI JISE HALAT BAHUT DOOR TAK KHEENCH KAR LE JAATE HAI, AUR AAKHIR MEIN USKE HISSE JO NAAM AATA HAI WO HAI "TABAYAF" KA, AAP ISE EK BIKHARI HUI LADKI KI KAHANI BHI KEH SAKTE HAI..

MAA TUNE JAB SE CHODA HAI ISS SANSAAR KO,
TARAS GAYI MEIN KISI APNE KE PYAR KO,
BABA JO APNI GODI ME BETHA KAR KHILAYA
KARTE THE,

AAJ MERI ANDEKHI KAR KISI AUR KE PYAR ME
BADAL GAYE HAI,AAJ JAISE HAM DONO KE RISHTE
BASS SIMAT GAYE HAI,

PYAR KI BHOOKH NE MUJHE DAR-2 KI THOKRE
DILWAI,PAR NA JANE KYUN KISI KO MUJH PE
MOHABBAT NA AAYI,

TANHA AKELI ZINDAGI ME KISI EK ANJAAN SHAKS
NE THAMA HAATH,JAISE ANDHERE ME USNE PYAR KI
JYOT JALAI,

PYAR KIYA PUCHKARA USNE DIL ME KAYI TAMAN.NAI
JAGAI,EK REET KI TARAHJ BIKHRI ZINDAGI JAISE
BAAG KI TARAH MUSKURAI,

JANE KYUN EK DIN SAWARI HUI ZINDAGI ME PHIR
EK TUFAAN AAYA,JO KHUDA BAN BETHA THA MERE
DIL ME JO,

USKA ASLI CHEHRA USS RAAT AANKHON KE SAMNE
AAYA,KHUSHIYO ARMANO KO HI NAHI MERE AANKHON
ME BHI EK TUFAAN AAYA,

KARKE KHUSH APNE DIL KO WO MUJHE EK BAAZAR ME
BECH AAYA,ROSHAN GALIYA MEHKTE AANGAN AUR
BIKHARTI SHAARAB KE AANCHAL ME WO MUJHE UDEEL
AAYA,

PAIRO ME GHUNGRO,AANKHON ME AANSOO DIL ME DARD
EK BECHAARI CHIDYA KO WO KAID KARA AAYA,
DUSRO KE LIYE NUMAISH AISH KI EK CHEEZ BANA KAR
CHOD AAYA,

KOTHE PE BETHA KE CHOD KAR MUJHE WO ANJAAN BAN
KAR CHALA GAYA,
BASS EK NAAM CHOD GAYA MERI ZINDAGI ME....

"TABAYAF"

BY. K.SHAEL



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«Reply #1 on: August 06, 2008, 08:51:57 AM »
WAH K.SHAEL JI AAPNE APNE JAZBAAT EK BIN MAA KE PYAAR KI LADKI KE LIYE BAHUT UNDAA PESH KIYA HAIN.SACHMUCH ITNA DARD BARDIYA HAIN KI LAFZ NAHI AA RAHE APKO KYA BAYAAN KARO.ITS AN EXCELLENT WRITTING.BAHUT KHOOB Applause Both Thumbs Up
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«Reply #2 on: August 06, 2008, 09:15:23 AM »
bahut hi umda lines likhi hai shael ji wah
sabd kam pad gaye hai aap ki ye rachna dekh ke




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«Reply #3 on: August 06, 2008, 09:57:52 AM »
 Applause Applause Applause
Excellent peice of work.....shally...
bahoot umda likha hai.....
keep it up...... Thumbs UP
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punam
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«Reply #4 on: August 06, 2008, 10:18:18 AM »
Bahut khoob shally...bahut acha likha aapne...
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Roja
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«Reply #5 on: August 06, 2008, 12:15:13 PM »
Bahut khoob shally  Applause  Applause
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Shikha12
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«Reply #6 on: August 06, 2008, 12:32:16 PM »
Very Nice..
Infact.. Very Very Nice.. Applause Applause Applause

Excellent Work Shally...


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Pooja
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«Reply #7 on: August 06, 2008, 06:24:44 PM »
wah wah wah!!

Kaya baat hai Shally!! bahoot hi achi rachna rachi hai apne!!


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k.shael
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«Reply #8 on: August 07, 2008, 08:35:42 AM »
THANX U SOO MUCH
DEAR FRIENDS KI AAP SAB NE
PHIR SE EK BAAR MUJHE LIKHNE KA
HOUSLA DIYA,
SHUKRIYA....
ANKIT RAO JI,
BAADAL JI,
BEKARAR BROTHER,
PUNAM DI,
ROZA DIDI,
MAHIYA JI,
POOJA JI,
THANX A LOTTTTT
BY. K.SHAEL
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Kanta
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«Reply #9 on: August 07, 2008, 07:00:30 PM »
han sunder he kshal tum bhi dard mein acha likhe ho.
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k.shael
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«Reply #10 on: August 09, 2008, 08:42:59 AM »
THANX KANTA JI
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #11 on: June 30, 2009, 08:26:48 AM »
Wah wah Shally.. Such me Lafz Nahi Hai mere paas is Rachna ki taareef ke liye.. Kyunki har Lafz kam Padega is rachna ki tareef ke liye.. Bahut hi umda likha hai dear.. Lajawab Alfaaz aur Dard Bhari yeh Soch aapki Dil ko Chhooo gai,., bahut bahut KHooooooob.. Applause Applause


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SURESH SANGWAN
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«Reply #12 on: March 12, 2010, 02:17:51 PM »
nice icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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