Ek "Cigarette" ki KAHAANI....!

by DhavalRami on March 26, 2010, 12:56:33 PM
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Mere Pyaare dostoN:

Namaskaar aur Aadaab..!

bazm meiN aik baar fir se aik alag se mudde ko lekar haazir huaa huuN..."Cigarette" dheemaa zehar... peene waaleN ko dheeme dheeme se Khatam kartaa haii.. bahot se log ees ki aadat ki waj'h se ziNdagee gaNvaate hai.n.. Cancer jaisi baDii bimaarii hotee haii.. usii "cigerette" ke ehsaas ko peSh karne kii aik ChhoTii si koShiSh kar rahaa huuN.. ummid kartaa huuN aapka saath aur pyaar mujhe Zaruur mileNgaa..!

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maiN "Cigarette"
jalti hu'ii , bujhti hu'ii
dhooeN ko ugalti hu'ii
hai ziNdagee meri chaNd pal ki
aur kar jati huuN auroN ki ziNdagee
bhee chaNd pal ki..
kyuuN peeta hai mujhe
ko'ii shauKh meiN koi roz meN
koi apni ziNdagee ke har soz meiN
na samjh aaya mujhe aaj tak kabhee bhii
ziNdagee ko kam karnaa meraa kaam hai
iNsaan samjhta hai bas ek baar pee leN isey
fir chaiN ,sukooN aur bas aaraam hi aaraam hai
maiN kyaa chaiN duNgi, kya sukooN aur kyaa aaraam
maiN Khud jal rahiiN huuN.. aur dheere dheere
uNke jism ko KhoKhla kar rahiN huuN
kyuuN koi rutbe meN peeta hai mujhe
to koi diKhaave meN aa kar pee letaa hai
jitne kas lagaata hai wo mere
apni ziNdagee ko utnaa hi kam kar letaa hai
merii aadat lagaane se pehle har iNsaan
soch le Khud ke baare meN sau baar
soch le apne Ghar-Parivaar
aur apne uN maasoom bachchoN ke baare meN
ziNdagee baDii hi anmol haii,
baDe kismat waaloN ko hi milti haii
"Cigarette " wo hai jo ees anmol tohfe ko
peene waaloN se dheere-dheere Chheen letee haii
to sudhar jao abhee se warnaa'h baad meN
fir bahot paChhtaavaa hogaa
merii aadat jo lagaaoge to bahot hi booraa aNt
tuMhaara hogaa
maiN to jal rahiiN huuN par..
har peene waale ko jalaauNgee
dheere dheere se uNki ziNdagee ko
maiN raaKh banaauNgee

haaN maiN raaKh banaauNgee

fir bhee aapki marzii..

yeh sab jaanne ke baad bhee jo aap merii aadat lagaaoge
aaj nahiiN to kal hi saHeeH
"CANCER" ka tohfaa mujh se Zaruur paaoge

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SURESH SANGWAN
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«Reply #1 on: March 26, 2010, 02:34:25 PM »
very nice dhavalji. Applause Applause Applause icon_flower
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #2 on: March 27, 2010, 09:23:26 PM »
Bahut khoob Dhaval Ji
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«Reply #3 on: March 27, 2010, 10:43:14 PM »
waah dhaval ji bahut hi acha msg diya hai apne apne kavita mein...
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«Reply #4 on: March 28, 2010, 05:48:56 AM »
very nice frnd
great job
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Kanta
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«Reply #5 on: March 28, 2010, 09:34:39 AM »
bahot acha subject pe lesson dia he wawa
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«Reply #6 on: March 30, 2010, 02:46:27 PM »
Dhavalllllll Bhai Aapki Yeh Khooooobi Hai Ki Aap Jab Bhi Mehfil Me aate Hain Kuch Na Kuch Naya Hi Le Kar Aate Hain.. Aur Is Baar bhi Ek Behad Hi Lajawab aur Ek messege dene wali Rachna Le kar aaye Hain...  icon_thumleft

Behad Hi Geharaai se Likhi Hui aur Ek Such Ko Bayan karti Aapki Yeh Rachna Dil Ko Chhoo Gai.. Behad Hi Umda Peshkash hai Dost.. Bahut Khoooooooooob.. Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: March 31, 2010, 09:35:13 PM »
Wah bahut hi khoob Dhaval ji bahut hi sachai aur khoobsurti se aapne likha hai.bahut achi siccha di aapne.great creation. Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: March 31, 2010, 10:06:00 PM »
Dhaval ji, bahut ki khoobsurti se aapne apne kavita k maadhyam se sabko ek bahut hi mahatwapoorn sandesh diya hai. Jis tarah sulagti cigarette jal jal k khatam ho jaati hai waise hi wo hamari zindagi ko jalake khatam kar deti hai.  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

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«Reply #9 on: December 15, 2011, 10:15:09 AM »
Quote from: Dhaval on March 26, 2010, 12:56:33 PM
Mere Pyaare dostoN:

Namaskaar aur Aadaab..!

bazm meiN aik baar fir se aik alag se mudde ko lekar haazir huaa huuN..."Cigarette" dheemaa zehar... peene waaleN ko dheeme dheeme se Khatam kartaa haii.. bahot se log ees ki aadat ki waj'h se ziNdagee gaNvaate hai.n.. Cancer jaisi baDii bimaarii hotee haii.. usii "cigerette" ke ehsaas ko peSh karne kii aik ChhoTii si koShiSh kar rahaa huuN.. ummid kartaa huuN aapka saath aur pyaar mujhe Zaruur mileNgaa..!

*****************************************

maiN "Cigarette"
jalti hu'ii , bujhti hu'ii
dhooeN ko ugalti hu'ii
hai ziNdagee meri chaNd pal ki
aur kar jati huuN auroN ki ziNdagee
bhee chaNd pal ki..
kyuuN peeta hai mujhe
ko'ii shauKh meiN koi roz meN
koi apni ziNdagee ke har soz meiN
na samjh aaya mujhe aaj tak kabhee bhii
ziNdagee ko kam karnaa meraa kaam hai
iNsaan samjhta hai bas ek baar pee leN isey
fir chaiN ,sukooN aur bas aaraam hi aaraam hai
maiN kyaa chaiN duNgi, kya sukooN aur kyaa aaraam
maiN Khud jal rahiiN huuN.. aur dheere dheere
uNke jism ko KhoKhla kar rahiN huuN
kyuuN koi rutbe meN peeta hai mujhe
to koi diKhaave meN aa kar pee letaa hai
jitne kas lagaata hai wo mere
apni ziNdagee ko utnaa hi kam kar letaa hai
merii aadat lagaane se pehle har iNsaan
soch le Khud ke baare meN sau baar
soch le apne Ghar-Parivaar
aur apne uN maasoom bachchoN ke baare meN
ziNdagee baDii hi anmol haii,
baDe kismat waaloN ko hi milti haii
"Cigarette " wo hai jo ees anmol tohfe ko
peene waaloN se dheere-dheere Chheen letee haii
to sudhar jao abhee se warnaa'h baad meN
fir bahot paChhtaavaa hogaa
merii aadat jo lagaaoge to bahot hi booraa aNt
tuMhaara hogaa
maiN to jal rahiiN huuN par..
har peene waale ko jalaauNgee
dheere dheere se uNki ziNdagee ko
maiN raaKh banaauNgee

haaN maiN raaKh banaauNgee

fir bhee aapki marzii..

yeh sab jaanne ke baad bhee jo aap merii aadat lagaaoge
aaj nahiiN to kal hi saHeeH
"CANCER" ka tohfaa mujh se Zaruur paaoge

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achi nazm hai.........sharaab,tobacco etc saare bhai-bhai hain
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«Reply #10 on: December 15, 2011, 10:44:33 AM »
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