- Ek Daaga Tum Kar Do -

by Meena is back on June 07, 2006, 04:22:52 PM
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ek koshish...

Chal diya apni raha yeh haq hai tumara,
Par hume bhi na ane ka aise wada tum kar do,

Kuch na manga kabhi apni mohabbat ke badle tumse,
Par aaj hume ek bar yaad karke pyar ka karz ada tum kar do,

Bhul na paye tume kabhi, tukdo me pyar abhi baki hai,
Toot jaye hum bilkul, aisi aur ek daaga tum kar do,

Chale gaye ho humari zindagi se meri rooh sath leke,
Meri saansen bhi saath le jao, aab rah-e-guzar se hume juda tum kar do!
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Rajbir
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«Reply #1 on: June 07, 2006, 04:26:57 PM »
Meena

Very emotional feelings expressed !

Rajbir
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«Reply #2 on: June 07, 2006, 04:30:54 PM »
shukriya!
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ranjana
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«Reply #3 on: June 07, 2006, 04:34:33 PM »
Meena its really very beautiful

woh aaye they jindagi mein bahhar ban ke
le gaye ek pal mein sab mere qraraar dil ke

hadasa yeh gujare ek jamana hua
hum aaj bhi wahi hain unki raha takate
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«Reply #4 on: June 07, 2006, 04:40:47 PM »
shukriya sis!! and as very nice one as well!!  :D

woh raha bih wohi hai, woh maud bhi wohi hai,
koi parivartan na aya, bas waqt badalta raha,
hum to aab bhi intezaar me unki raha ko dekhte hai,
pata nachala ke ankh me ashkon ka caravan pigalta raha!
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ranjana
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«Reply #5 on: June 07, 2006, 04:48:57 PM »
bahut khub .........

ashak unki yaad mein aankho se bas behte rahe
hum apni taqdeer se ba yuh  hi ladte  rahe............
badalega ek din waqt mera bhi ,yeh soch kar
hum unse bepanaah mohabbat karte rahe..........
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«Reply #6 on: June 07, 2006, 04:52:12 PM »
niceee!!!

ladte te hum bhi kabhi zamane se,
jab humare sath unki mohabbat ti,
jab bichad gaye woh to jana humne,
ke kismat ki ankhon me bhi bagawat ti!
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nikki
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«Reply #7 on: June 07, 2006, 05:02:04 PM »
haye aaj to sadakna padega..Meena sis n Ranjana ji...

woh saja bhi dete hain to iss tarah se
kissi ki masoom si adaa ho jaise
karke dokha mohabbat mein..
woh ja rahein hain aise..
mere liye pyar ka inaam daga hi socha ho jaise
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ranjana
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«Reply #8 on: June 07, 2006, 05:05:28 PM »
bahut khub..........

woh mile mujhe ek umar ke baad
dekha unki aankho mein bhi nami thee
thee woh ghari bhi kaise na jaane
lab they hamre  khamosh par
nazaro ne nazaro ki bhasa padi thee
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nikki
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«Reply #9 on: June 07, 2006, 05:17:06 PM »
very nice ji....

chahat ka waqt abb chala gaya
woh har mausam suhana apne saath le gaya
abb to na din guzarta hai mera..na hi guzarti hai raat
na jaane kya soch kar mujhse daga kar gaya hai woh
jo seh nahi paata tha mujhse doori ka bhi ehsaas
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ranjana
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«Reply #10 on: June 08, 2006, 04:10:32 AM »
yeh duri ka ehesaas ab mitya nahi jata
unke saath beete hue palo  ko yeh dil bhula nahi paata
na jaane kyu aur kis baat per woh hum se ruswa hue
dil mein unke diye daag hai abhi tak riste hue
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«Reply #11 on: June 08, 2006, 04:04:53 PM »
thanks nikki...nikki aur ranjana sis...aap dono ne to mehefil jamayi hui hai bohot ache!!!

zakhm unke seene se lagaye baithe hai,
jabse wada-e-wafa ke woh bhulaye baithe hai,
kabhi pyar ka deepak jalaya tha mere man me,
aaj wohi diya apne hathon hum bujaye baithe hai!
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nikki
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«Reply #12 on: June 08, 2006, 04:09:31 PM »
thanx n wonderfull again sis

yeh maana ke unko humse mohabbat nahi hai
magar yeh kaise keh dein hum..unke dil par hamara haq nahi hai
jo dhadakta hai mere seene mein..kya yeh unka dil nahi hai

woh kissi aur ko apna maante hain to kya hua
hum bhi unke liye paraye to nahi hain
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BEGANA
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«Reply #13 on: June 08, 2006, 04:18:15 PM »
Kya khuda sab ke sath aisa hi karta hai,
mujhse kabhi begana to kabhi anjana rehta hai,
Bahut ibadad ki hai maine iski........
par na jaane ye kyun itna MASHROOF rehta hai??
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«Reply #14 on: June 08, 2006, 04:49:13 PM »
Quote from: "nikki"
thanx n wonderfull again sis

yeh maana ke unko humse mohabbat nahi hai
magar yeh kaise keh dein hum..unke dil par hamara haq nahi hai
jo dhadakta hai mere seene mein..kya yeh unka dil nahi hai

woh kissi aur ko apna maante hain to kya hua
hum bhi unke liye paraye to nahi hain


shukriya kuddiye and nice one!!

jab mohabbat hi mith gayi to haq kaise jatlaye,
jo hogaya hai paraya usse aab hum kaise apnaye,
badal gayi unki mazil to badal gaye raste bhi,
hum to kade rahe us maud pe unhe hum waha kaise rukwaye?
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