ek din aaungi....... manjum

by manjum on March 28, 2011, 10:05:54 AM
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Aaj main tumhari zindgi main na sahi
par dekhna......

Ek din main chidiya bankar aaungi
aur tumhare ghar ke jharokhe main
ghausla banaungi.......

Ek din main champa bankar aaungi
aur tumhare ghar ke aangan main
khushbu udanung............

jab tum meri yad main tadap kar
aangan main baith kar chand ko niharoge...

tab main ek taara bankar aaungi...
aur tootkar tumhari har aas
puri kar jaungi.........

dekhna ek din main aaungi.......

manju :mann:


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«Reply #1 on: March 28, 2011, 10:18:31 AM »
TUM DIL MEIN AAYE HO DADHKAN BAN BAS GAYE HO ,

SANSON SE JO NIKALTI HO WOH KHUSHBOO BAN GAYE HO .

RAUSHNI HAI JO ANGAN MEIN TUM CHANDANI BAN GAYE HO ,

TAARON KE TOOTNE KA KYUN KARUN INTZAR TUM HI MERI AAKHRI KHAWAISH BAN GAYE HO
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«Reply #2 on: March 28, 2011, 10:21:31 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya saahilji........ aapne pada aur itna khubsurat reply diya..... shukriya.......

ye aap k lie......

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«Reply #3 on: March 28, 2011, 10:34:23 AM »
yun bolkar hume shukrya ap praaya na kijiye ,

ehsas hai jo sath ka use dil mein bhar lijiye
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«Reply #4 on: March 28, 2011, 10:39:56 AM »
 Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: March 28, 2011, 10:46:40 AM »
DIL MEIN CHAHTON KA KHUMAAR GHOL DIYA .

HOTHON KO BANDH RAKH KE DIL KA HAAL BOL DIYA
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«Reply #6 on: March 28, 2011, 10:57:06 AM »
wah........
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«Reply #7 on: March 28, 2011, 11:18:46 AM »
bahot gazab ki soch manju ji.
aisi soch sirf tab aa sakti h jab koi kisi se beinteha mohabat kare or apni mohabt se hi thukraya jaye.
uske baad bhi uski mohabt me apne mehbub ke lie koi kami nhi aati.
khubsurat ehsaas ji.
daad bahot saari.
khus rahiye.
kuch reply karunga baad me.
kosis jarur kaqunga me bhi.
sahil ji good reply
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«Reply #8 on: March 28, 2011, 11:25:32 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya kbji.........

aapne time nikal ke pada aur samjha..... kbji.. mhobbt to hoti hi esi hai ki jism main bahte lahoo se bhi aage jakar rooh main bas jati hai aur jo rooh tak hai use koi rok hi kaise sakta hai... kuch na bhi ban sake to hawa bankar sans ke sath aate jate rahenge.....
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«Reply #9 on: March 28, 2011, 01:00:32 PM »
bht khoob manjum ji...
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«Reply #10 on: March 28, 2011, 01:57:42 PM »
Nice poem Manju-ji.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Ek din mein baadal ban kar aaungi
Jam k tere ghar-aangan me barsungi
Teri janm-janm ki pyaas bujhaaungi....

Ek raat chupke se mein tere sapno me aaungi
Naa mein tujh ko jagaaungi naa he sone dungi
Lipat k teri har adhuri aas puri kar jaaungi


Aaj main tumhari zindgi main na sahi
par dekhna......

Ek din main chidiya bankar aaungi
aur tumhare ghar ke jharokhe main
ghausla banaungi.......

Ek din main champa bankar aaungi
aur tumhare ghar ke aangan main
khushbu udanungi............

jab tum meri yad main tadap kar
aangan main baith kar chand ko niharoge...

tab main ek taara bankar aaungi...
aur tootkar tumhari har aas
puri kar jaungi.........

dekhna ek din main aaungi.......

manju :mann:



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«Reply #11 on: March 29, 2011, 02:07:47 AM »
Aaj main tumhari zindgi main na sahi
par dekhna......

Ek din main chidiya bankar aaungi
aur tumhare ghar ke jharokhe main
ghausla banaungi.......


Very Impressive Lines ... Very Touching ...... Manjum Ji !

dil se daad ........ 
Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: March 29, 2011, 02:56:45 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya....... manzilji...... yun hi sath rahie....
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«Reply #13 on: March 29, 2011, 03:03:46 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya koyalji..... aapne pasand kiya aur aage bhi likha ye tabhi ho sakta hai jab ham kisi rachna ko padkar use sochte hain aur use mehsus karen....

aapne bahut sundar line likhi hain....

sath rahie....

aapke lie.... Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: March 29, 2011, 03:06:32 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya anshuji..... mere ehsas aapke dil tak pahunche iske lie main aapki shukraguzar rahungi.........

yun hi sath rahie........
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