EK GHAR KI KAHANI.....

by khwaish on September 26, 2008, 04:25:22 PM
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yeh jo main poetry likh raha hoon, ek  aise insaan ki kahani hai jisne apni zindagi ek Mehal jaisa Ghar banae mein Beeta di.. Uski Kaamyaabi aur Nakaamyabi par kuch Roshni Daal raha hoon..Main Jaanta hoon yeh poetry Bahut Lambhi Hai par Ek Request hai..isse zaroor padhiyega..
Kyon Ki Yeh EK GHAR KI KAHAANI HAI....

Puch mat sapno mein kis tarah milte hai Ghar
Dekh Le Aankhon mein Aasha Ki tarah Palte hai Ghar
Begharo se Kabhi Puch to Ghar ke sukoon ki Tishnagi
Janam se Marne tak jinhe nahi milte hai Ghar....

Tinka-Tinka Jodkar woh Khwaabo Ko apne buunta Raha,
Khwaab kabhi to haqeeqat ka rang lenge,
Yehi sochkar Dar-badar Ghoomta raha,
Phir bhi uske dil mein ek sawaal sa khatakta raha,
Kya Ek sadharan Insaan ko bhi Mehal Jaise milte hai ghar??

Jitni Chadar hai utne hi pair failaana
COMPETTION ke Daur mein Kabhi khud ko na Aazmana
HOME-LOAN  ke zariye Aaj Take-take ke bhaau Bikhte hai Ghar....

Usne unche khwaab dekhe aur Ghar sajata gaya
Apne kamai ka har hissa ghar ki sajawat par lagata gaya
Aaj Baarisho mein bhi usse jalta hua milta hai Ghar....

Yeh Mehangai aur Phir Karzo mein Doobta hua Insaan,
Dard ke tufaan mein yahan Jab-Tab hilta hai Ghar....

Jo Paas hai ussi mein Khushi Manana
Paraye Ghar ko dekh kar Apne man ko Na Dagmagana

"KHWAISH" GHAR TO WOH HAI JAHAN SAB MILKAR KHUSHIYAN MANA SAKE
VARNA YAHA APNO KI CHOTI-CHOTI LADAIYON MEIN,
SABSE PEHLE...
HUME BIKHRA HUA MILTA HAI GHAR.....
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«Reply #1 on: September 26, 2008, 04:27:20 PM »
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bahoot khoob khwaish ji!!! bahoot he achi kavita likhi hai apne!!!!
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«Reply #2 on: September 26, 2008, 04:29:23 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: September 26, 2008, 04:44:53 PM »
Applause Applause Bohat khoob likha hai aapne khwaish ji...
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«Reply #4 on: September 26, 2008, 07:33:29 PM »
Quote from: Pooja on September 26, 2008, 04:27:20 PM
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bahoot khoob khwaish ji!!! bahoot he achi kavita likhi hai apne!!!!

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Pooja..
aapne waqt nikala aur padha..shukriya
par aap ne kuch na likha??
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«Reply #5 on: September 26, 2008, 07:36:29 PM »
Quote from: bekarar on September 26, 2008, 04:29:23 PM
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Thankyou so much Bekararji..
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«Reply #6 on: September 26, 2008, 07:38:32 PM »
Humesha ki tarah iss baar bhi aapki Kavita ne ek gehri chaap chorhi hai Khwaish....Bohot Khoob Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: September 27, 2008, 05:37:27 AM »
Quote from: honeyrose on September 26, 2008, 04:44:53 PM
Applause Applause Bohat khoob likha hai aapne khwaish ji...

thankyou Honey!!!
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«Reply #8 on: September 27, 2008, 05:38:46 AM »
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BAHUT KHOOB LIKHA HAI AAPNE,
UMDA AUR LAJAWAAB KALAM,
KHAWAISH JI...
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«Reply #9 on: September 27, 2008, 02:43:33 PM »
Quote from: Celmira on September 26, 2008, 07:38:32 PM
Humesha ki tarah iss baar bhi aapki Kavita ne ek gehri chaap chorhi hai Khwaish....Bohot Khoob Applause Applause

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Celmira..humesha ki tarah aapke comments ka muje intezaar tha.. happy3
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«Reply #10 on: September 28, 2008, 06:52:12 AM »
Quote from: k.shael on September 27, 2008, 05:38:46 AM
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BAHUT KHOOB LIKHA HAI AAPNE,
UMDA AUR LAJAWAAB KALAM,
KHAWAISH JI...
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thankyou so much k.shaelji..
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«Reply #11 on: September 28, 2008, 07:30:10 AM »
Bahut umda likha hai aapne Khwaish ji.. Applause  Applause
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«Reply #12 on: September 28, 2008, 07:36:33 AM »
Crying icon_geek WAH WAH GOOD LUCK  ENVY SHARMA
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«Reply #13 on: October 05, 2008, 10:01:17 AM »
Quote from: envysharma on September 28, 2008, 07:36:33 AM
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Thankyou Sharmaji..
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«Reply #14 on: January 05, 2009, 06:33:04 PM »
Quote from: Roja on September 28, 2008, 07:30:10 AM
Bahut umda likha hai aapne Khwaish ji.. Applause  Applause

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Roja...
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