EK GHAR KI KAHANI.....

by khwaish on September 26, 2008, 04:25:22 PM
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«Reply #15 on: January 05, 2009, 06:36:32 PM »
WAH khwaish kya kamaaal ka likha hai aap ney.bahut hi badiya.

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«Reply #16 on: January 24, 2009, 04:28:28 AM »
Quote from: jasbirsingh on January 05, 2009, 06:36:32 PM
WAH khwaish kya kamaaal ka likha hai aap ney.bahut hi badiya.

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«Reply #17 on: January 24, 2009, 04:05:37 PM »
Waah Waah Waah,.
Kya Khoob Kaha Hai,.
Very True Very True,.

Yunhi LIkhte Rahiye,.
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«Reply #18 on: January 25, 2009, 03:35:17 AM »
Quote from: khwaish on September 26, 2008, 04:25:22 PM
yeh jo main poetry likh raha hoon, ek  aise insaan ki kahani hai jisne apni zindagi ek Mehal jaisa Ghar banae mein Beeta di.. Uski Kaamyaabi aur Nakaamyabi par kuch Roshni Daal raha hoon..Main Jaanta hoon yeh poetry Bahut Lambhi Hai par Ek Request hai..isse zaroor padhiyega..
Kyon Ki Yeh EK GHAR KI KAHAANI HAI....

Puch mat sapno mein kis tarah milte hai Ghar
Dekh Le Aankhon mein Aasha Ki tarah Palte hai Ghar
Begharo se Kabhi Puch to Ghar ke sukoon ki Tishnagi
Janam se Marne tak jinhe nahi milte hai Ghar....

Tinka-Tinka Jodkar woh Khwaabo Ko apne buunta Raha,
Khwaab kabhi to haqeeqat ka rang lenge,
Yehi sochkar Dar-badar Ghoomta raha,
Phir bhi uske dil mein ek sawaal sa khatakta raha,
Kya Ek sadharan Insaan ko bhi Mehal Jaise milte hai ghar??

Jitni Chadar hai utne hi pair failaana
COMPETTION ke Daur mein Kabhi khud ko na Aazmana
HOME-LOAN  ke zariye Aaj Take-take ke bhaau Bikhte hai Ghar....

Usne unche khwaab dekhe aur Ghar sajata gaya
Apne kamai ka har hissa ghar ki sajawat par lagata gaya
Aaj Baarisho mein bhi usse jalta hua milta hai Ghar....

Yeh Mehangai aur Phir Karzo mein Doobta hua Insaan,
Dard ke tufaan mein yahan Jab-Tab hilta hai Ghar....

Jo Paas hai ussi mein Khushi Manana
Paraye Ghar ko dekh kar Apne man ko Na Dagmagana

"KHWAISH" GHAR TO WOH HAI JAHAN SAB MILKAR KHUSHIYAN MANA SAKE
VARNA YAHA APNO KI CHOTI-CHOTI LADAIYON MEIN,
SABSE PEHLE...
HUME BIKHRA HUA MILTA HAI GHAR.....


Bahut hii Khoob, Khwaish Ji Applause Applause

Very well written!
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«Reply #19 on: January 25, 2009, 12:11:19 PM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on January 24, 2009, 04:05:37 PM
Waah Waah Waah,.
Kya Khoob Kaha Hai,.
Very True Very True,.

Yunhi LIkhte Rahiye,.


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