ek ghazal likhne ki koshish mein.........

by ranjana on July 18, 2006, 02:07:31 PM

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vikas2210

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«Reply #15 on: July 19, 2006, 08:39:57 AM »

nice going ranju, gaurav, rwg, manu.........

very well said...........


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ranjana

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ek ghazal likhne ki koshish mein.........

«Reply #16 on: July 20, 2006, 01:34:54 AM »

shukriya vikas ......


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badnaam_shayar

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ek ghazal likhne ki koshish mein.........

«Reply #17 on: July 20, 2006, 03:50:37 PM »

Brilliant Job Ranju

Jab Dil ho Tanhai mein....
Toh aksar hum apne Gum AshQon se seencha karte hai.....

Dunia de Chahe laakh Baduain hume......
Par hum bas teri Dua sunne ko taraste hai......

Kar Badnaam khud ko humne lahoo se Diye jalaye hai......
Tu kya jaane aye Musafir humne Safar me kitne Zakhm khaye hai....!!!!!!!


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Pooja

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ek ghazal likhne ki koshish mein.........

«Reply #18 on: July 20, 2006, 04:11:42 PM »

bahoot khoob Ranju and Badnaam Shayar ji


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ranjana

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ek ghazal likhne ki koshish mein.........

«Reply #19 on: July 20, 2006, 06:17:37 PM »

shukriya pooja .......bahut lkhub gaurav ..........

dard de ke chhor de woh dost kaise hote hain
jo hans hans ke har gum ko ke chhaale fod de
woh dost kaise hote hain ..........

kabhi chalte hain ek raha per mil ke saath saath
fir aate hi gum ki raat jo fer le nighaae.n humse
woh insaan kasie hote hain..........


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manu1979

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«Reply #20 on: July 21, 2006, 08:51:55 AM »

dear ranju

tumne bahut hi achhi koshish ki hai ,bahut hi khoob likha hai,aise hi likhti raho.
manu


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harshit101

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«Reply #21 on: July 22, 2006, 12:26:48 PM »

brilliant


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harshit101

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«Reply #22 on: July 22, 2006, 12:27:05 PM »

brilliant


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vikas2210

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ek ghazal likhne ki koshish mein.........

«Reply #23 on: July 22, 2006, 12:32:29 PM »

likhne ki koshsih mai kalam uthai thi haath mai
zehan mai aaya era khayal aur aansu sihayi ban gai

likh gaya kuch aisi gazal mai bekhudi mai aise
jiska aagaz tujhse hua aur khatam tere naa hui


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ranjana

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ek ghazal likhne ki koshish mein.........

«Reply #24 on: July 22, 2006, 12:39:01 PM »

Quote from: "vikas2210"

likhne ki koshsih mai kalam uthai thi haath mai
zehan mai aaya era khayal aur aansu sihayi ban gai

likh gaya kuch aisi gazal mai bekhudi mai aise
jiska aagaz tujhse hua aur khatam tere naa hui

wah !!!!! bahut khoob vikas.....

tera likha hua sab mera pass raha
woh bhi jo tune kabi likha nahi

ek khawab jo tere naam se shru hua
woh fir sehar hone ke baad bhi tuta nahi!!!!


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vikas2210

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ek ghazal likhne ki koshish mein.........

«Reply #25 on: July 22, 2006, 12:42:41 PM »

shukriya ranju. aaaaaapne bahut accha likha hai....

tere khat to kabhi tune likhe nahi
mere ko jo kabhi tune bheje nahi

padh chuka hun un main likha tera haal
majboor hun duniya se gaya hun haar.....


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ranjana

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ek ghazal likhne ki koshish mein.........

«Reply #26 on: July 22, 2006, 12:45:35 PM »

Quote from: "gum"

Lovely RANJU ji. Bhayut Khob

yeh tum mujhe JI hatwate hatwate khud JI per aa gaye....... Puzzled !

shuklriya JIIIIIIIIIIIII Usual Smile


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ranjana

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ek ghazal likhne ki koshish mein.........

«Reply #27 on: July 22, 2006, 12:50:18 PM »

Quote from: "vikas2210"

SHUKRIYA JI AAAAAAAAPNE BHI BAHUT ACCHA LIKHA JI......

duniaya se yun dar ke khat mera na jalana thaa
woh hi khat toh meri mohabbat ka afasana thaa

bas gaya hai jab tera hi nur meri aankho mein
toh yeh raaz ab duniya se na chhipanaa thaa.......


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vikas2210

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ek ghazal likhne ki koshish mein.........

«Reply #28 on: July 22, 2006, 01:00:19 PM »

oooye yeh JI kaub hai...........

na jala saka tera ek bhi khat
kaya teri yaad bhi kabhi bhula saka

gaya that phekne paani mai tera har khat
paani bhi jhana mila sukha mila...


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ranjana

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ek ghazal likhne ki koshish mein.........

«Reply #29 on: July 22, 2006, 01:07:22 PM »

bahut khoob vikas .......

hame bhi teri yaad ke siva ab kuch na yaad raha
jaagati aankho ne bhi dekha bas ek khawab tera

badle na jaane kitne mosaum aur yeh jahan badala
mero nazar ko toh bas ek intazaar tera hi raha .......