Ek gumnaam ka aakhri safar !

by shara63 on January 21, 2013, 07:35:04 AM
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   Kaun hooN kya meri pehchaan
   soch soch kar hotee hairaan
   bhooli bisree si ek kahaaani
   yaa phir ghazal koi anjaan ?

   Namee-baar ek pyaasi badlee
   baher se juda hui ek dhaara
   daali se bichhdi koi bulbul
   ya bhatki si kaakul aawara ?

   Ya phir voh chitthi gumnaam
   jis par pataa, na koi naam
   poochhti har raah guzar se
   kahaaN kho gaya uska gaam ?

   tarasti rahi zindagi bhar voh
   paane ko apni pehchaan
   zalaalat sahee har din,har lamha
   bachee rahe taake anaa ki shaan

   Aaj chali vo aakhree safar ko
   sab kuchh apna karke qurbaan
   is zindagi may toh mil na paayi
   shaayad vahaaN mil jaae pehchaan !!..........'ainy'
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prashad
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«Reply #1 on: January 21, 2013, 08:58:23 AM »
bahut khoob
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F.H.SIDDIQUI
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«Reply #2 on: January 21, 2013, 09:34:01 AM »
bahut khubsurat , heart touching kalaam . dheron daad.
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suman59
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«Reply #3 on: January 21, 2013, 09:35:03 AM »
very touching kahani. well written dero daad shara jee
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azad mishra
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«Reply #4 on: January 21, 2013, 10:38:19 AM »
very very nice congrats..
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shara63
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«Reply #5 on: January 21, 2013, 11:11:10 AM »
Thankyou suman ji...its true, hum kabhi kabhi kisi insaan ko pehchaanne me itni der kar dete hain ke voh zindagi bhar apni us pehchaan jiska voh sachmuch haqddaar hota hai ke liye tarasta rahta hai lekin usko paaye baghair hi is duniya se rukhsat ho jaata hai..jo ki waaqai bahut hi afsos aur humare liye sharm ki bhi baat hai !!
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shara63
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«Reply #6 on: January 21, 2013, 11:14:46 AM »
Bahut shukria prashad ji!
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shara63
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«Reply #7 on: January 21, 2013, 11:45:20 AM »
Hasan sb, kalaam ki taareef ke liye aapka bahut bahut shukria !
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shara63
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«Reply #8 on: January 21, 2013, 11:46:29 AM »
Thanks a lot Azad Mishra ji !
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«Reply #9 on: January 21, 2013, 11:47:41 AM »
Quote from: shara63 on January 21, 2013, 07:35:04 AM
   Kaun hooN kya meri pehchaan
   soch soch kar hotee hairaan
   bhooli bisree si ek kahaaani
   yaa phir ghazal koi anjaan ?

   Namee-baar ek pyaasi badlee
   baher se juda hui ek dhaara
   daali se bichhdi koi bulbul
   ya bhatki si kaakul aawara ?

   Ya phir voh chitthi gumnaam
   jis par pataa, na koi naam
   poochhti har raah guzar se
   kahaaN kho gaya uska gaam ?

   tarasti rahi zindagi bhar voh
   paane ko apni pehchaan
   zalaalat sahee har din,har lamha
   bachee rahe taake anaa ki shaan

   Aaj chali vo aakhree safar ko
   sab kuchh apna karke qurbaan
   is zindagi may toh mil na paayi
   shaayad vahaaN mil jaae pehchaan !!..........'ainy'



achhi nazm hai.............!
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«Reply #10 on: January 21, 2013, 02:09:36 PM »
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«Reply #11 on: January 21, 2013, 02:23:43 PM »
bohat khoob ,..............
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shara63
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«Reply #12 on: January 22, 2013, 03:25:36 AM »
bahut shukria sheba ji !
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«Reply #13 on: January 22, 2013, 03:26:41 AM »
laaiba ji, aapka bahut shukria !
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«Reply #14 on: January 22, 2013, 03:52:31 AM »
wah wah bohut khoob shara jee daaad qubool kareN
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