Ek Kahani Ghayel ki zubani........(Ghayel)

by sajid_ghayel on March 21, 2009, 02:27:49 PM
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #15 on: March 23, 2009, 11:50:17 AM »
Bahut Bahut Khoob...Jahan Par Jazbaat Itne Khoobsurat ho Waha Par Koi Poetry Lambi Hai Yaa Nahi,Koi Nahi sochega..Sajid bhai ,aapne yakeenan Bahut Khoobsurti se aur dil ko chune wali baatein kahi hai..bahut ache.. Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bohat bohat shukriyaan Khwaish hausla afzaiee ke liye, bas jab tak tumhara yaqeen kayem hain Ghayel shayer hain...
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #16 on: March 24, 2009, 08:47:33 PM »
akhir ke rula diya ye sach likh kar.bahoot dukh hua ye shayari padh kar
sajid,very sad n i believe its true.ye kahani nahi hai mujhe toh lagta ye ek sachai hai.
madhuwesh.

I am sorry sweetheart jo tumhe rula diya, bas kabhi kabhi kuch achcha likh leta hu thanks for giving time to my work.
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Talat
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«Reply #17 on: March 24, 2009, 08:50:51 PM »
This is definitely your masterpiece Sajid Ji.... Kitna anookha kitna payara...kitna dard bhara ye kalaam tha...Uff Bohot bohot bohot Khoob  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #18 on: March 27, 2009, 05:16:04 PM »
Bahut Khoob Ghayel Ji
Wah! mere dost ghayel kar diya aap ne hume
Ab to sabd nahi milta aap ki kalaam ki tarif mein


Bohat bohat shukriyaan mere dost.....Thanks for giving your time to my work.
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #19 on: March 28, 2009, 07:19:51 AM »
Wah Bahoot hi Umda likha hai Sajid Ji.. Main tho imagine karne lagi thi sara vaakya. Really Hats of to u!

Bohat bohat shukriyaan Sophie.....
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #20 on: March 28, 2009, 07:21:56 AM »
wah yaar sajid majaa aa gaya kasam se............itane kareene se sajaye hain saare alfaaz aur ek ke baad ek saari ghatna....har line ke baad dusari line padhne ki tamnanna aur badh jaati hai...........bahoot khoobsurati se tumne is lambi kahani ke asali jajbaat ko bhi kayam rakha..aur padhne wale ko poori tarah bandh-kar rakhne me bhi bakhoobi kamyaab rahe.....
daad kabool karen huzur Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bas yaar mere dost ko mera kalam pasand aaya isse badi khushi ki baat aur kya ho sakti hain mere liye. Is khoobsurat dad ke liye bohat bohat shukriyaa yara....
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #21 on: March 29, 2009, 12:25:16 PM »
Great work sajid ji!
Its truly amazing... m happy that m a part of YO Thumbs UP

Thank You Salma....and i am happy that you are part of Yo
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honeyrose
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«Reply #22 on: March 29, 2009, 01:25:23 PM »
Bohat khoob sajid ji..lafzon mein dard dikhaye de rahi hai
good creation made from you sajid ji
... Applause Applause
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Roja
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«Reply #23 on: March 29, 2009, 02:49:44 PM »
Thank You Roja.....tumne waqt diya uske liya shukriyaaaaaaaaaa........

Welcome Sajid ji.. Kaise nahi padthi. Aap jaison se hi toh seekte hai hum.. Usual Smile
(toda lengthy tha  tongue3, magar interesting and very touching  Thumbs UP
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #24 on: March 30, 2009, 03:40:05 AM »
This is definitely your masterpiece Sajid Ji.... Kitna anookha kitna payara...kitna dard bhara ye kalaam tha...Uff Bohot bohot bohot Khoob  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bohat bohat shukriyaan Talat jo tumne mere is mamuli kam ko waqt diya aur meri hausla afzaiee ki....
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #25 on: March 31, 2009, 07:44:04 AM »
Bohat khoob sajid ji..lafzon mein dard dikhaye de rahi hai
good creation made from you sajid ji
... Applause Applause

Thank You very much Honey...
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chitralsony
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«Reply #26 on: April 09, 2009, 08:31:50 AM »
i am just speachless ghayel ji kuch bhi kehna ya likhna is baray may yay is khobsorat kalam ki bayadbi hogi ,app nahi jantay yay ek aysa kalam hay jis nay akhir tak mujay jakray rakha and bayekhtiyar rula diya ,GOD BLESS U
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #27 on: April 23, 2009, 04:27:51 AM »
i am just speachless ghayel ji kuch bhi kehna ya likhna is baray may yay is khobsorat kalam ki bayadbi hogi ,app nahi jantay yay ek aysa kalam hay jis nay akhir tak mujay jakray rakha and bayekhtiyar rula diya ,GOD BLESS U

Tumhe apna waqt diya uske liye bohat shukriyaan Taiba, tumhe meri kahani pasand aayee yeh meri kahani ki kismat hain...
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Pooja
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«Reply #28 on: September 21, 2010, 05:51:44 AM »
Jab kabhi Sajid apke is kalaam ko parra
ek zakham sa ubhara aor ek ashaq chalak parra..
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Sajid_Ghayel
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«Reply #29 on: September 21, 2010, 06:05:48 AM »
Jab kabhi Sajid apke is kalaam ko parra
ek zakham sa ubhara aor ek ashaq chalak parra..

Allah na kare kabhi tumhari aakho me kabhi aasoo aaye, tum bohat aala aur behtareen soch ki malik ho. Tumhare jaisa dost paana mere liye khushnasibi ki baat hai.

Allah se dua hai hamari dosti hamesha kayem rahe.....AAMEEN.

 
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