Ek kalam...Geet...

by brokenbyluv on May 28, 2011, 12:52:56 PM
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Agar merre paas ek aesi kalam hoti jisse main apna nasib likh sakti,
tou main apne nasib mein tumhara naam likh deti,

jo aksar tumhe mujhse shiqayat rehti thi main tumhe yad nhi karti,
din k har guzarte lamhe mein tumhe dhero paigham likh deti,

tum tou rukh mod kar chal diye dusri taraf,
warna khushnuma sa main apni mhbt ka anjam likh deti,

ek khubsurat subah jo tumhari mhbt se shuru hoti,
aur phir kabhi na dhalti aesi shaam likh deti,

apne dil ki kitab pe tou tumhara naam likha maine,
use zamane mein bhi sar-e-aam likh deti,

kaas merre paas ek aesi kalam hoti..
tou main apne nasib mein tumhara naam likh deti.........
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manzil-e-ishq
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«Reply #1 on: May 28, 2011, 01:18:33 PM »
very nice thoughts geet ji...
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #2 on: May 28, 2011, 01:19:28 PM »
Quote from: manzil-e-ishq on May 28, 2011, 01:18:33 PM
very nice thoughts geet ji...

Thnx priya ji..
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Imdad
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«Reply #3 on: May 28, 2011, 02:21:03 PM »
wah. Bahut khoob.
Bahut khoobsurat khayal hai.
Behtareen peshkas.
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nirala
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«Reply #4 on: May 28, 2011, 02:25:57 PM »
bahot khub geet……
mohbt ki hadd darsa jati ho aap Usual Smile

god bless u ji
sada khus rahiye
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dead heart
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«Reply #5 on: May 28, 2011, 10:24:25 PM »
Dil se likha hai apne toh dil ne parra..
 Applause Applause
Khush rahiye.!
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khamosh_aawaaz
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«Reply #6 on: May 29, 2011, 09:57:35 AM »
Quote from: brokenbyluv on May 28, 2011, 12:52:56 PM



Agar merre paas ek aesi kalam hoti jisse main apna nasib likh sakti,
tou main apne nasib mein tumhara naam likh deti,

jo aksar tumhe mujhse shiqayat rehti thi main tumhe yad nhi karti,
din k har guzarte lamhe mein tumhe dhero paigham likh deti,

tum tou rukh mod kar chal diye dusri taraf,
warna khushnuma sa main apni mhbt ka anjam likh deti,

ek khubsurat subah jo tumhari mhbt se shuru hoti,
aur phir kabhi na dhalti aesi shaam likh deti,

apne dil ki kitab pe tou tumhara naam likha maine,
use zamane mein bhi sar-e-aam likh deti,

kaas merre paas ek aesi kalam hoti..
tou main apne nasib mein tumhara naam likh deti.........

 bahut khoob BBL


  na hota agar zamanaa dushman hamaraa,
  dil to hai ye tera,hota aashiyana bhi tumharaa,




 
 
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #7 on: May 29, 2011, 03:36:36 PM »
Quote from: Imdad on May 28, 2011, 02:21:03 PM
wah. Bahut khoob.
Bahut khoobsurat khayal hai.
Behtareen peshkas.

Bahut shukriya imdad ji..
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #8 on: May 29, 2011, 03:37:12 PM »
Quote from: nirala on May 28, 2011, 02:25:57 PM
bahot khub geet……
mohbt ki hadd darsa jati ho aap Usual Smile

god bless u ji
sada khus rahiye

Bahut shukriya nirala ji...
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #9 on: May 29, 2011, 03:37:53 PM »
Quote from: -Rahim- on May 28, 2011, 10:24:25 PM
Dil se likha hai apne toh dil ne parra..
 Applause Applause
Khush rahiye.!

Bahut shukriya rahim..
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #10 on: May 29, 2011, 03:38:36 PM »
Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on May 29, 2011, 09:57:35 AM
bahut khoob BBL


  na hota agar zamanaa dushman hamaraa,
  dil to hai ye tera,hota aashiyana bhi tumharaa,




 
 

Bahut khoob aur bahut shukriya khamosh ji...
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #11 on: May 29, 2011, 06:49:23 PM »
mast poem..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Kaash mere paas bhi ek tere jaesi kalam hoti
Geet-di mein bhee tujh jaise geet likh sakti


Quote from: brokenbyluv on May 28, 2011, 12:52:56 PM



Agar merre paas ek aesi kalam hoti jisse main apna nasib likh sakti,
tou main apne nasib mein tumhara naam likh deti,

jo aksar tumhe mujhse shiqayat rehti thi main tumhe yad nhi karti,
din k har guzarte lamhe mein tumhe dhero paigham likh deti,

tum tou rukh mod kar chal diye dusri taraf,
warna khushnuma sa main apni mhbt ka anjam likh deti,

ek khubsurat subah jo tumhari mhbt se shuru hoti,
aur phir kabhi na dhalti aesi shaam likh deti,

apne dil ki kitab pe tou tumhara naam likha maine,
use zamane mein bhi sar-e-aam likh deti,

kaas merre paas ek aesi kalam hoti..
tou main apne nasib mein tumhara naam likh deti.........
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #12 on: May 30, 2011, 04:14:18 PM »
Quote from: Shihab on May 29, 2011, 06:31:33 PM
Bahut Khub Brokenbyluv Ji...


Shad o Aabad Rahiye...

~Shihab~
Bahut shukriya shihab ji..
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #13 on: May 30, 2011, 04:14:57 PM »
Quote from: KOYAL46 on May 29, 2011, 06:49:23 PM
mast poem..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Kaash mere paas bhi ek tere jaesi kalam hoti
Geet-di mein bhee tujh jaise geet likh sakti


Thnx alot koyal..
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #14 on: June 06, 2011, 07:38:04 AM »
Wah Kya Baat hai Geet Ji.. Ek Khayal Ko Bakhoobi Lafzon me Dhaala Hai aapne..!! Yeh Qalaam Mohabbat Ke Sath Sath wo Dard Bayan kar raha Hai.. Jisme Ek Pyaar karne Wala Har Lamha Bassss yehi Sochta Rahata Hai Ki aakhir Unhe Kaise Paaya jaye.. Kaise Unhe apna Banaaya Jaye...!!!

Kuch Guzre Lamhaat Yaad Dila diye aapke is Qalaam Ne... Behad Khubsoorat Peshkash Hai Geet Ji.. daad Hi Daad..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


**~** Mann **~**
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