ek khoobsoorat chehra...

by dead heart on October 16, 2008, 09:47:03 PM
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hmm frendz i rote this after i saw the most beautiful gal of my life...im posting it here coz i am showing parts of depression with parts of her beauty...dnt noe how gud i rote but i tried...







unko dekte hi yeh pathar dil pighal gaya mom ki tarha,
woh khoobsoorat hi itni thi bikul ek apsara ki tarha...

zindagi bikhar gayi hai ashkon ki tarha,
unko dekha toh toot gaye hum lehron ki tarha,
kash woh humare hojate yeh dua hai humari,
par woh bhi paraye nikl; humari saanson ki tarha...

unko dekte hi yeh pathar dil pighal gaya mom ki tarha,
woh khoobsoorat hi itni thi bikul ek apsara ki tarha...

pathar ka dil jaag gaya ek sapne ke bad,
dafan dil zinda hogaya ek arse ke bad,
kash hum unka haath tham sakte,
par yeh khwahish adhuri rehgayi; humari zindgi ki tarha...

unko dekte hi yeh pathar dil pighal gaya mom ki tarha,
woh khoobsoorat hi itni thi bikul ek apsara ki tarha...

unki nashili aankhon ne hume ankhon hi ankhon main pila diya,
unka shabnam baraste chehre ne hume hila diya,
kash woh humare zindagi main toofan laye nah hote,
toh zindagi shanti se guzar jati; humari pal do pal ki khushiyon ki tarha...

unko dekte hi yeh pathar dil pighal gaya mom ki tarha,
woh khoobsoorat hi itni thi bikul ek apsara ki tarha...

tanhayion main zindagi achi guzar rahi thi,
dafan dil hamesha ke liye so gaya tha,
unhone apni soorat dikha kar phir jeene ki wajah de di,
kash woh aisa naa karti; humare adhure pyar ki tarha...

unko dekte hi yeh pathar dil pighal gaya mom ki tarha,
woh khoobsoorat hi itni thi bikul ek apsara ki tarha...

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Talat
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«Reply #1 on: October 16, 2008, 10:19:51 PM »
Bohot Khoob Heart   Applause Applause Applause

Aapke shayari main hum bhi unse mil liye  icon_thumleft

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Pooja
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«Reply #2 on: October 16, 2008, 10:21:37 PM »
Bohot Khoob Dead Heart ji
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Prateek Mardia
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«Reply #3 on: October 17, 2008, 01:25:26 AM »
ek acchi kaushish dead hear ji.
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #4 on: October 17, 2008, 05:54:54 AM »
bilkul dil se nikle hain har shabd
aur dil se kaha hua ya likha hua hamesha hi acha hi hota hai dead heart ji  Applause
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Tanha(Saurabh)
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«Reply #5 on: October 17, 2008, 07:38:45 AM »
bohat khoob andaaz-e-bayaan hai mulakaat ka dead heart ji.............
Applause Applause Applause
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honeyrose
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«Reply #6 on: October 17, 2008, 10:29:53 AM »
Bohat khoob Heart ji kamaal ka likha hai aapne ... Applause
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #7 on: October 17, 2008, 12:34:52 PM »
Aap ne bahut umda likha hai
Dead heart ji , sukriya hai aap ko

Hua ayse tum unko nihaar kar
Ab dil betaab hai to pyaar kar
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dead heart
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«Reply #8 on: October 17, 2008, 06:56:39 PM »
aap shab ka bahaut shukriya...koshish ki humne likhne ki...


aur rajesh jee apke liye...

betaab tha dil unse dubara milne ke liye,
apne pyar ka izhaar karne ke liye,
unki khoobsoorati pe marna tha humko dubara,
par dil rota hi rehgaya humari yaadon ki tarha...
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Pooja
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«Reply #9 on: October 17, 2008, 06:57:38 PM »
Nice RH and DH ji!!
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #10 on: October 18, 2008, 12:00:31 AM »
aap shab ka bahaut shukriya...koshish ki humne likhne ki...


aur rajesh jee apke liye...

betaab tha dil unse dubara milne ke liye,
apne pyar ka izhaar karne ke liye,
unki khoobsoorati pe marna tha humko dubara,
par dil rota hi rehgaya humari yaadon ki tarha...

Kabhi kabhi ayesa hota hai is beraham duniya mein
Joh pasand ata hai woh hota nahi apne naseeb mein
Agar woh paraye hai to usko bhula hi achchaa hoga
Aap ko behtar koi aur milega takdeer mein agar hoga
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #11 on: July 09, 2009, 07:25:33 AM »
Wah Rahim ji very nice and beautiful creation,wonderful lines by Rajesh ji. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause
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dead heart
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«Reply #12 on: July 13, 2009, 06:49:56 PM »
Nice lines Rajesh jee..

Shukriya Madhu jee...
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«Reply #13 on: July 14, 2009, 06:07:29 AM »
Wah Kya Baat hai mere Dost.. Lajawab Likha hai Har Lafz.. Bahut Bahut khooooooooooob.. Applause Applause

Rajesh Bhai aapne Bhi Bahut Khoooooob Likha hai.. Applause


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«Reply #14 on: July 14, 2009, 04:22:39 PM »
Waah Kya Baat Hai Yaar,.
Bohat Achcha Kalaam Likha Hai,.
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