~~~Ek khwaish hai...~~~

by vitasta on May 23, 2009, 02:58:55 PM
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Meri tumhaare kareeb aane ki bas ek khwaaish hai

Tumhe kuch hadh tak apna banaane ki ek khwaaish hai



Mujhe nahi maalum aye Noor hai tumhe pata ya nahi

Tumhari aankhnon mein doob jaane ki ek khwaaish hai



Tum na jaano zara bhi apni hi kashish ka asar, kya Karun

Rootho to zindagi bhar tumhe manaane ki ek khwaaish hai



Is shamaa mein jalkar jo zakhm mujhe milte hain har roz

Unko sabse chhipaakar khud hi sehlaane ki ek khwaaish hai



Dillagi se hoti hai shuru baat humesha aur badhti hai aage

Humein umr bhar isi tarah dil behlaane ki ek khwaaish hai



Chupa to nahi hai aye Noor tumse bhi ajab deewangi ka aalam

Yun samajh lo jo kabhi bhi na poori hone ki, ek khwaaish hai…

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Roja
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«Reply #1 on: May 23, 2009, 03:01:26 PM »
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Meri tumhaare kareeb aane ki bas ek khwaaish hai
Tumhe kuch hadh tak apna banaane ki ek khwaaish hai

Mujhe nahi maalum aye Noor hai tumhe pata ya nahi
Tumhari aankhnon mein doob jaane ki ek khwaaish hai

Lovely creation Viti dear.. Applause

(hmm Noor sb... jaldi aajao ) Winking
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #2 on: May 23, 2009, 03:04:18 PM »
Bahoot bahoot Khoob Viti
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vitasta
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«Reply #3 on: May 23, 2009, 03:08:45 PM »
Lovely creation Viti dear.. Applause

(hmm Noor sb... jaldi aajao ) Winking


shukriya roja ji Grin
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vitasta
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«Reply #4 on: May 23, 2009, 03:09:16 PM »
Bahoot bahoot Khoob Viti

bahut bahut shukriya sophi ji Usual Smile
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #5 on: May 24, 2009, 06:22:00 AM »
very very nice vitasta ji,hmm,kiya baat hai.
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vitasta
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«Reply #6 on: May 24, 2009, 06:24:03 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya madhuwesh ji Usual Smile
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asma zehra
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«Reply #7 on: May 24, 2009, 11:43:35 AM »
Beautiful lines and very beautifully said.

Khuda kare tum par "Noor" ki baarish ho
Is kadar bheego ke phir na koi khwahish ho

Ameen.
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salil2002
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«Reply #8 on: May 24, 2009, 12:25:44 PM »
welcome to yoindia Vitasta...welcome isliye kyunki bahut dino baad dekha aapko....qaafi achcha likha hai aapne.......aage bhi aapki kavitaaye padne ko milti rahengi ummeed hai


kuch hosla dikhata main oos roz toh achcha tha
mera kal tere saath tha toh achcha tha
aaj karwatein badal rahi hai zindgi is tarah
kii lag raha tera saath kitna achcha tha
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vitasta
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«Reply #9 on: May 26, 2009, 07:44:07 AM »
Beautiful lines and very beautifully said.

Khuda kare tum par "Noor" ki baarish ho
Is kadar bheego ke phir na koi khwahish ho

Ameen.

wah wah asma ji kya dua di hai!  bahut bahut shukriya! Usual Smile
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vitasta
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«Reply #10 on: May 26, 2009, 07:47:34 AM »
welcome to yoindia Vitasta...welcome isliye kyunki bahut dino baad dekha aapko....qaafi achcha likha hai aapne.......aage bhi aapki kavitaaye padne ko milti rahengi ummeed hai


kuch hosla dikhata main oos roz toh achcha tha
mera kal tere saath tha toh achcha tha
aaj karwatein badal rahi hai zindgi is tarah
kii lag raha tera saath kitna achcha tha

thank you so much salil ji!  ummeed hai aapko mera baki kaam bhi pasand aayega...
and good lines too!

meri galiyan bhooli hain kadmon ki aahat
dil mera ab bhi har nabz, har saans se wakif hai...
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