-----/// Ek Lamhaa ///----- Hriday

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bas ek baar tumne mud ke dekhaa hotaa
to shaayad aaj hum saath hote, shaayad...


abhi main tumhaari moujudgi ko
mehsoos bhi naa kar paayaa thaa
ki tumne jaane ki baat kar di
dur hameshaa hameshaa ke liye...

ek lamhe mein main toot gayaa
jaise kuch apnaa chhoot rahaa ho
kuch khaas, jiski mujhe zarurat hai
jiske binaa main bilkul akelaa hoon....

main tumhe jaate huye dekh rahaa thaa
dil se awaaz aa rahi thi tumhe rokun
magar jaane kyun hothon tak pahuchi nahi
kuch thaa jo mujhe rok rahaa thaa....

ek aawaaz kuch koshish mein thi
kuch samjhaa rahi thi, magar kyaa
shaayad kehnaa chaahti thi mujhse
ki tum khush nahi ho, saath mere....

mumkin nahi hai tumhe baandhe rakhnaa
tumhaare liye to khulaa aasmaan hai
kyaa milegaa is gareeb ke paas tumhe
pyaar ke siwaa kuch bhi de saktaa nahi....

bas ki baat nahi mere tumhe kuch doon
kuch khaas jo ho tumhaare jaisaa, anmol
tum chaand ho, aur main hoon kankad koi
zameen par padaa huwaa, jise kuchlaa sabne...

bas inhi khayaalon mein khud ko baandh ke
maine tumhe aawaaz nahi lagaayi, chup rahaa
rotaa rahaa dil meraa, cheekh cheekh ke
aur zubaan khaamosh rahi, main chup rahaa....

kasoor naa tumhaaraa naa meraa hi thaa kuch
kasoor to bas us lamhe kaa thaa jo guzar gayaa
naa maine rokaa tumhe, naa hi tum ruk paaye
woh lamhaa humein sadaa ke liye judaa kar gayaa.....




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«Reply #1 on: September 03, 2013, 10:14:06 PM »
bahut khoob......... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: September 03, 2013, 10:49:11 PM »
too sad...... bas dard aur tadap,,, is par waah waah bhi to nahi kah sakte na???
bas anmol alfaaz jo teer ki tarha dil may pewast ho jayen...
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«Reply #3 on: September 04, 2013, 12:34:40 AM »
Nice Sharing.
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«Reply #4 on: September 04, 2013, 07:05:37 AM »
Bahaut bahaut khoob dost..
Ek rhythm main parr gaya iss kalam ko main..
Pehli do lines toh bas dil main ghar kar gayi..
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Khush rahiye..
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«Reply #5 on: September 04, 2013, 08:45:16 AM »
achhee nazm hai
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«Reply #6 on: September 04, 2013, 09:01:01 AM »
bahut khoob Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: September 04, 2013, 03:01:04 PM »
आपका ये अन्दाज़ भी बहुत अच्छा लगा...ढेरों दाद और मुबारकबाद.....
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«Reply #8 on: September 04, 2013, 07:16:44 PM »
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Waaaaah hriday ji aapke jawab ka bhi koi jawab nahi.. bahut bahut bahut hi khoob... padhkar dil ko jaise sukoon sa mila.. aapko hazaron dili daad meri taraf se....
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«Reply #9 on: September 04, 2013, 09:48:13 PM »
 tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed tearyeyed


sayad lafz nahi mere paas bas ye hai..

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«Reply #10 on: September 11, 2013, 02:22:50 AM »
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«Reply #11 on: September 15, 2013, 01:52:46 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Miraj ji.....!!!

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«Reply #12 on: September 22, 2013, 03:16:48 AM »
bahut bahut shukriyaa Iqtedar ji padhne aur pasand karne ke liye....!!!

too sad...... bas dard aur tadap,,, is par waah waah bhi to nahi kah sakte na???
bas anmol alfaaz jo teer ki tarha dil may pewast ho jayen...
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«Reply #13 on: September 25, 2013, 09:21:38 PM »
thanks a lot Ravi ji...!!!

Nice Sharing.
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«Reply #14 on: September 25, 2013, 09:22:42 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaa Rahim bhaai...!!!

Bahaut bahaut khoob dost..
Ek rhythm main parr gaya iss kalam ko main..
Pehli do lines toh bas dil main ghar kar gayi..
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Khush rahiye..
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