**** Ek Naya Jakham*****

by waheed_rose2004 on July 26, 2005, 06:59:58 PM
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jab woh aate hain  to  ek  naya jakham  de  jaate hain
mere har  saans  mein  dard  bhar jaate hain

khyal  usko  bhi  na  raha  hum  kaise  jiyenge
woh  mere dil ke  jazbaat  dafna ke chale  jaate hain

kitne badnaam  hue hum mohabbat  mein
kyon  log  tere paas  aakar  hanske  chale  jaate hain

jinko  hum  apna samajhte the wahi humko  "Waheed"
dekh lete hain to  katra ke chale   jaate hain
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Aryaan
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«Reply #1 on: July 27, 2005, 12:54:52 AM »
Wah! Waheed Bohat khoob..........................
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Bharat
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«Reply #2 on: July 27, 2005, 01:33:30 AM »
Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
jab woh aate hain  to  ek  naya jakham  de  jaate hain
mere har  saans  mein  dard  bhar jaate hain

khyal  usko  bhi  na  raha  hum  kaise  jiyenge
woh  mere dil ke  jazbaat  dafna ke chale  jaate hain

kitne badnaam  hue hum mohabbat  mein
kyon  log  tere paas  aakar  hanske  chale  jaate hain

jinko  hum  apna samajhte the wahi humko  "Waheed"
dekh lete hain to  katra ke chale   jaate hain


Hi Waheed,
Aapne bahut badhia likha hai
Please allow me to add few

jab woh aate hain  to  ek  naya jakham  de  jaate hain
mere har  saans  mein  dard  bhar jaate hain

seene me dahakti hui aag buzti nahi
har bar is dil me naya shola jagate hain
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isha_verma7
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«Reply #3 on: July 27, 2005, 05:38:48 AM »
Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
jab woh aate hain  to  ek  naya jakham  de  jaate hain
mere har  saans  mein  dard  bhar jaate hain

khyal  usko  bhi  na  raha  hum  kaise  jiyenge
woh  mere dil ke  jazbaat  dafna ke chale  jaate hain

kitne badnaam  hue hum mohabbat  mein
kyon  log  tere paas  aakar  hanske  chale  jaate hain

jinko  hum  apna samajhte the wahi humko  "Waheed"
dekh lete hain to  katra ke chale   jaate hain


Bahut achaa......cant describe in words!!!
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Aman_rahi
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«Reply #4 on: July 27, 2005, 08:59:33 AM »
kitne badnaam hue hum mohabbat mein
kyon log tere paas aakar hanske chale jaate hain

jinko hum apna samajhte the wahi humko "Waheed"
dekh lete hain to katra ke chale jaate hain


Waheed Sahab.....

bahut khoob....kya baat kahi hai......
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«Reply #5 on: July 27, 2005, 09:33:19 AM »
wah waheed,bohat khoob likha hai Usual Smile .Nice work aman ji and bharat ji.
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Talat
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«Reply #6 on: July 27, 2005, 10:38:33 AM »
Bohot khoob.. Waheed....Bharat and Aman...... !!!!!
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Bharat
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«Reply #7 on: July 27, 2005, 04:14:42 PM »
Hello Nidhi & Talat

Thank you very much..............
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Meena
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«Reply #8 on: July 27, 2005, 04:29:22 PM »
wah wah waheed tooooooooo gud mundeya and bharat ji also gud!!

unke laut an ka intezaar to hurdum rehta hai hume,
woh zakh bhi de jaye to kya?
humne to dil diya hai unke, unki amanat hai woh,
woh tood kar use hume tukde de jaye to kya?
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«Reply #9 on: July 27, 2005, 06:47:56 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
wah wah waheed tooooooooo gud mundeya and bharat ji also gud!!

unke laut an ka intezaar to hurdum rehta hai hume,
woh zakh bhi de jaye to kya?
humne to dil diya hai unke, unki amanat hai woh,
woh tood kar use hume tukde de jaye to kya?


Thanxxxxxxxxxx  Aryan...........Bharat...........Talat..........N idhi..........Aman...........Isha.,.......Meena........... aap  logon ka  bahot shukriya..........

nice  reply  bharat.........Meena.............bahot  khoob.........
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