Ek nishani rah jayegi............

by Pooja on February 20, 2006, 09:49:10 AM
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #30 on: March 03, 2006, 10:42:10 AM »
very  nice  Pooja sis.........Neeraj...... Harshit...

bahot chaaha  tha  tumhara  saath paane ke liye
tumne saath chord  diya jamane ko hansane ke liye
hum  kismat  ka gila kya karen,tum khud nikle begane
umar  bhar  ka jakham  de  diya  rulaane ke liye..
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Pooja
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«Reply #31 on: March 03, 2006, 03:27:16 PM »
Ok, Niraj...here is my Try:

Her wada jhootha nikala
her irada baimaan nikla
payar ki arr mai jane kaya khail khalty gai duniya
Jisko bhi chaha, wo matlab-prasat nikla!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #32 on: March 03, 2006, 03:30:09 PM »
wah kay abaat hai..bahoot khoob Waheed ji!!

Gum hai, magar rona nahi atta
dard hai, ankhon ko sona nahi atta
Intzaar nahi, phir bhi najre Rah takati hai
us per ilzaam, hume payaar nibhana nahi atta
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #33 on: March 03, 2006, 08:08:02 PM »
Tum toh chali gayi saath chor k.........
Ek dinn yeh yaadein bhi chali jayengi.......

Yakeen hai mujhe tod k saare rishte naate......
Tum mere paas hamesha k liye chali aaogi......

Par bahut der ho jayegi jab talak......
Meri maut mujhe gale laga jayegi......

Khoob yaad karenge Pyar karne waale......
Har Mahobbat kahani hamari dohrayegi.......

Kuch na bacha sab lutt gaya mera.....
Bas logon ke Dilon mein hamari Mahobbat......
Ki ek Nishani reh jayegi...........
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Aryaan
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«Reply #34 on: March 03, 2006, 09:45:49 PM »
Wah wah..Bohat khoob BS... & Good Ones All...
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niraj_191
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«Reply #35 on: March 04, 2006, 06:06:36 AM »
Quote from: "Pooja"
Ok, Niraj...here is my Try:

Her wada jhootha nikala
her irada baimaan nikla
payar ki arr mai jane kaya khail khalty gai duniya
Jisko bhi chaha, wo matlab-prasat nikla!!


it's okay but i think u can write better than this...

vado pe kisike ab main is dil ko bekarar nahi karta
intzar me kisike ab jeena main dushvar nahi karta
tum bhi tadpo ge char din mere pyar me
sari umar guzaro ye bat pe main etbar nahi karta
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«Reply #36 on: March 04, 2006, 03:59:05 PM »
ek kahani reh gai ......
meri aadhi zindgani reh gai .....
tanha raha mai in tanha raho per......
bhikhar gaya zami per meri manzile bhi adhuri reh gai...
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«Reply #37 on: March 04, 2006, 06:54:47 PM »
Wah Pooja ji,hamesha ki tarah is baar bhi bohat acha likha hai aapne,saath me gaurav,niraj,sabhi ne bohat acha likha hai Usual Smile .
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #38 on: March 04, 2006, 07:24:34 PM »
nice  work  all..........:lol:   sabhi logon ne bahot accha likha..........
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Pooja
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«Reply #39 on: March 04, 2006, 09:44:25 PM »
Shukariyan dosto...

khud mai simati kuch aise, zarra zarra bikhar gai
Jakham kuch aise mille, roj apne lahu se sanwar gai
bahoot roki tune meri rahein magar phir bhi rah nikal gai
tere jakhamo ki sougaat se, pal pal nikhar gai!!!
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«Reply #40 on: March 04, 2006, 10:11:48 PM »
Good One Pooja...
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«Reply #41 on: March 05, 2006, 05:01:11 PM »
Nice one POoja ji.
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Pooja
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«Reply #42 on: March 06, 2006, 03:33:28 AM »
Thanks Nidhi...

hamari bebasi per, wo jo hans diye
jakhamo per jaise, Namak se masal diye
chup rahi juban, Tanhai mai ro diye
kaise kaise rahgujar se, hum bhi nikal liye
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«Reply #43 on: March 07, 2006, 11:59:39 AM »
Nice one Pooja ji !!

mukaam asieey bhi aaye the ishq mein
ke jab yeh dil khoon ke ansuu roya tha
yaad hai aaj bhi woh lamhe woh pal
jab dard ko apne ashqo mein piroya tha !!
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«Reply #44 on: March 07, 2006, 01:11:41 PM »
Bahut khoob doston !

Sab ne ek se badh kar ek likha hai...

Rajbir
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