Ek Pal Ki Daastan

by syednaami on July 27, 2008, 03:06:18 PM
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syednaami
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Ek pal men koi apna sa lagta hai,,
Ek pal men woh paraaya sa banta hai,,

Kyun hota hai pyar,,
Kyun hota hai dil beqraar..

Ek pal men aadmi banta hai deevana,,
Ek pal men koi ban jaata hai anjaana,,

Kyun chadhta hai ishq ka khumaar,,
Kyun hota jata hai dil beemaar..

Ek pal men milti hai khushi,,
Ek pal men milti hai udaasi,,

Kyun hoti hai itni chaahat,,
Kyun Chali jaati hai man ki raahat..

Ek pal men bhulaate hain rasm-o-rivaaj,,
Ek pal men toot jaate hain saare khwaab,,

Kyun saath nahin dete dil-o-dimaagh,,
Kyun bujh jaate hain aas ke charaagh..


                                      |syed Naami|
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Pooja
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«Reply #1 on: July 27, 2008, 03:27:33 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause

wah wah wah kaya baat hai.. bahoot khoob Sami.. bahoot he acha likha hai apne!!

kahin kismat ka kheil, kahin dil ka kheil
pyar ko ajj bana liya hai dil behlane ka kheil

banate hai apna deewana, shabdo ke jadu se
dil bhar jaane per, kathor shabdo ka kheil

kabhi yaha, kabhi wahan, na samjhe kaya hai dilo ka mail
chal de ek dil se doosre dil per, her insaani zajbe se kheil
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Roja
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«Reply #2 on: July 27, 2008, 04:22:36 PM »
Both Syed ji and Pooja di bahut khoob  Applause  Applause
mujhe ek pal main likhna nahi aaya .... otherwise i would ...like to..
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syednaami
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«Reply #3 on: July 27, 2008, 04:29:50 PM »
Jee thanks a lot Roja Saahiba... Aap ki haosla afzai ka buhat shukriya... Par Ek pal men to Duje pal men hi likhiye ga...
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Roja
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«Reply #4 on: July 27, 2008, 04:59:02 PM »
Quote from: syednaami on July 27, 2008, 04:29:50 PM
Jee thanks a lot Roja Saahiba... Aap ki haosla afzai ka buhat shukriya... Par Ek pal men to Duje pal men hi likhiye ga...

Koshish karungi janab
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syednaami
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«Reply #5 on: July 27, 2008, 05:31:04 PM »
Quote from: Pooja on July 27, 2008, 03:27:33 PM
wah wah wah kaya baat hai.. bahoot khoob Sami.. bahoot he acha likha hai apne!!

kahin kismat ka kheil, kahin dil ka kheil
pyar ko ajj bana liya hai dil behlane ka kheil

banate hai apna deewana, shabdo ke jadu se
dil bhar jaane per, kathor shabdo ka kheil

kabhi yaha, kabhi wahan, na samjhe kaya hai dilo ka mail
chal de ek dil se doosre dil per, her insaani zajbe se kheil

Aap ki har qataa men jo baat samaayi hai...
Bas javaab nahin dil ko bhayi hai...

Buhat sundar rachna... zabardast...



Ek pal men ishq hua,,
Qismat ka chakkar chala,,
Kisi ke liye bana khel,,
To kisi ko mazaaq laga,,

Shabd bhi jaadugar bane,,
Par priya ko kaisa laga,,
Achha laga ya bura laga,,
Par dil to hai sab janta,,

Ek pal ki to nahin muhabbat,,
Ahsaas hai umar bhar ka,,
Jazbaat bhi khel jaate hain,,
Khel aisa banake insan ko tamasha..

|Syed Naami|
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Muhammed
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«Reply #6 on: July 28, 2008, 04:27:34 AM »
Quote from: syednaami on July 27, 2008, 03:06:18 PM

Ek pal men bhulaate hain rasm-o-rivaaj,,
Ek pal men toot jaate hain saare khwaab,,

Kyun saath nahin dete dil-o-dimaagh,,
Kyun bujh jaate hain aas ke charaagh..
|syed Naami|
Bhai Syed..aapke Ye Do Ash'aar bahot Kuch Keh rahe Hai..
Bahot Hi Badhiya Hai..saaf saaf alfaaz Me..
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Muhammed
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«Reply #7 on: July 28, 2008, 04:35:56 AM »
Quote from: syednaami on July 27, 2008, 05:31:04 PM

Ek pal ki to nahin muhabbat,,
Ahsaas hai umar bhar ka,,
Jazbaat bhi khel jaate hain,,
Khel aisa banake insan ko tamasha..
|Syed Naami|

Fir se..Bahot Khoob..saaf alfazo Me Bhai Syed aapne Badhiya Likha Hai..
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honeyrose
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«Reply #8 on: July 28, 2008, 07:16:11 AM »
Buhat khoob Syed acha likha hai aapne Clapping Smiley
Khoob likha hai Pooja ,,Muhammed

 
Ek pal ka waqt haath se chale jaaye
Ek pal ki mulaqat koh jaati jaaye

Koi pyar me.n khel ban jaaye
Koi aapni taqdeer koh sajate jaaye

Ek pal ki haseen chehara dil ko churaye
Ek pal me.n duniya se hum hue paraye
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punam
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«Reply #9 on: July 28, 2008, 07:54:46 AM »
Bahut khoob syed ji...pooja di..Honey di...
sab ne bahut acha likha...syed ji bas ek choti si koshish kar rahi..
galti maaf karna,....

ek pal me kyun apne dur ho jaate hain
ek pal me kyun badal jaate hain...

karte hai pyar kehte hain
par kyun dard de jaate hain...

ek pal me kaise sab kuch bhula dete hain
ek pal mein kyun begana kar jaate hain..

kya aisa hi hota hai pyar
kya mohabbat me sirf dard hi milta hai...

ek pal me kyun na-samajh bante hain
ek pal me kyun dil dukha dete hain...

kya yehi chahat ki pehchan hai
kya aansoo hi pyar ka inaam hai...

ek pal ke liye hi kya hota hai pyar
ek pal me kya yeh khatam ho jaata hai...
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Roja
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«Reply #10 on: July 28, 2008, 03:03:54 PM »
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kya yehi chahat ki pehchan hai
kya aansoo hi pyar ka inaam hai...

ek pal ke liye hi kya hota hai pyar
ek pal me kya yeh khatam ho jaata hai

Wah wah..kya baat hai punam...

Ek pal main jo hua wohi pyar hai punam
Ek pal ka pyar zindagi ban jata hai  tongue3  tongue3
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Roja
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«Reply #11 on: July 28, 2008, 03:05:22 PM »
Quote from: honeyrose on July 28, 2008, 07:16:11 AM
Buhat khoob Syed acha likha hai aapne Clapping Smiley
Khoob likha hai Pooja ,,Muhammed

 
Ek pal ka waqt haath se chale jaaye
Ek pal ki mulaqat koh jaati jaaye

Koi pyar me.n khel ban jaaye
Koi aapni taqdeer koh sajate jaaye

Ek pal ki haseen chehara dil ko churaye
Ek pal me.n duniya se hum hue paraye

Wah wah Honey dear bahut khoob ....
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syednaami
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«Reply #12 on: July 28, 2008, 03:29:48 PM »
Quote from: honeyrose on July 28, 2008, 07:16:11 AM

Ek pal ka waqt haath se chale jaaye
.............
Ek pal me.n duniya se hum hue paraye

buhat Shukriya HoneyRose Saahiba aapne buhat badhiya kalaam paish kia...
Pasand karne ka dil se shukriya...
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Pooja
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«Reply #13 on: July 28, 2008, 03:39:36 PM »
Thanks and good Job Sami, Honey and Punam!!

ek pal mai jee li jo zindagi
wo zindagi bhar ke liye pal ban gaya

na le ja saka jo kabhi bhi, wo mujhse
aisa ek ahsaas ban gaya

karte hai jab wafa ki baatein, dilo se kheilne wale
Pooja ke dil ne kaha, kyun tu is mehfil ka sath ban gaya!!!
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syednaami
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«Reply #14 on: July 28, 2008, 03:44:45 PM »
Quote from: punam on July 28, 2008, 07:54:46 AM
ek pal me kyun apne dur ho jaate hain
ek pal me kyun badal jaate hain...

karte hai pyar kehte hain
par kyun dard de jaate hain...

ek pal me kaise sab kuch bhula dete hain
ek pal mein kyun begana kar jaate hain..

kya aisa hi hota hai pyar
kya mohabbat me sirf dard hi milta hai...

Punam Saahiba,,, khoob dard aur shurooat ke ashaar to bahut hi umda aur sach se labrez lagte hain...
Dad-o-tahseen ho...
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