ek phati jeb ne

by pritam tripathi on January 01, 2013, 08:46:53 PM
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bhookh se bilakhta hua
raah me chalta hua
apne armaano ki dhuri par
khud ko parakhta hua
vipattiyaan hazaar thi
phir bhi sehta hua
saath uska kisne diya
ek phati jeb ne!!!!

apna paraya hua
itar chot khaya hua
sab ka sataya hua
ghar se bhagaya hua
gardishon me kya kaha
ek phati jeb ne !!!

dhool se bhara hua
paseene se lathpath hua
dhoop me baitha hua
sadak par padi hui
ek roti takta hua
zameer se ladta hua
roka kisne use
ek phati jeb ne!!!!!




 
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«Reply #6 on: January 02, 2013, 12:08:26 PM »
Quote from: pritam tripathi on January 01, 2013, 08:46:53 PM
bhookh se bilakhta hua
raah me chalta hua
apne armaano ki dhuri par
khud ko parakhta hua
vipattiyaan hazaar thi
phir bhi sehta hua
saath uska kisne diya
ek phati jeb ne!!!!

apna paraya hua
itar chot khaya hua
sab ka sataya hua
ghar se bhagaya hua
gardishon me kya kaha
ek phati jeb ne !!!

dhool se bhara hua
paseene se lathpath hua
dhoop me baitha hua
sadak par padi hui
ek roti takta hua
zameer se ladta hua
roka kisne use
ek phati jeb ne!!!!!




 



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aap sabhi ka shukriya
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