-----/// Ek pukaar /// ------ Hriday

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haan mujhe ehsaas hai ki maine vaadon ko toda hai,
karke vaadaa mohabbat ka tumse, maine muh moda hai,

ek khwaab tha khoobsurat sa
tumhe aankhon me basaane ka
tumhaare sang muskuraane ka
chhoot jaaye chaahe duniya saari
akele hi saath nibhaane ka
khushi ke geet gungunaane ka

par kismat ka khel dekho
kya se kya ho ke reh gaya
jo thaa mere dil ke kareeb
wo begaanaa ho ke reh gaya
kami na hone di wafaa ki maine
aur wo mujhe hi bewafaa keh gaya
wo saath jeewan bhar ka dekho
tukdo me bikhar ke reh gaya

maaloom hai mujhe ki haath maine tumhaaraa chhoda hai,
wo kasme, wo vaade pyaar ke, un sabko maine hi toda hai,

par kya tumhe yaad hai
ek vaadaa jo tumhaaraa thaa
wo vaadaa jo tumhe nibhaanaa thaa
bhool jaaun agar main vaade apne
to tumko hi mujhe samjhaanaa thaa
kya huwa jo ek bhool mujhse hui
'maafi', ye to tumhaaraa hi gehnaa thaa
"jaanu tum bhool rahe ho apne vaade"
ye mujhe aake yaad dilaanaa thaa

tum hi kaho main akele saath nibhaaun kaise
judaa ho ke tumse main koi geet gaaun kaise
tum hi to mere har geet ke shabd the jaanaa
bina shabd ke main ab koi geet banaaun kaise
main tanha hoon, main ab muskuraaun kaise

ruk jaate tum, maanaa galti meri thi, maine dil toda hai,
karke vaade wafaa ke bich raah pe maine saath chhoda hai,

aajaao na , jaanaa ab to aa jaao naa,
reh ke duur mujhse, mujhe sataao naa,
maantaa hoon kasoor mera tha sab, par
aake jaanaa mujhe maaf kar jaao naa

ab na kabhi main tumhe tadpaaungaa
vaade mohabbat ke main nibhaaungaa
aake lag jaao mere seene se ek baar
to main fir se khulke muskuraaungaa
jaanaa, main fir se gungunaaungaa
main fir se khushi ke geet gaaungaa...

*****HRIDAY*****
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«Reply #1 on: August 10, 2012, 12:21:33 PM »
Bahut khoob Hriday jee
wah..kya baat hai
ek saccha ehsaas.. badee khoobsurti se nibhaya hai aapne.
sach bhi..dil to vahee hai..dhadakne ka andaaj bhee vahee.
par roohe alag alag hain.
isiliye to bhata hai..sabko..har vo dil jisne ise mahsoos kiya hai..dhadkan kee aavaaj suni hai..roya hai..tadpa hai..


vaaaaah..kya likhun sab to aapne likh diya.. :Clap:
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soudagar
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«Reply #2 on: August 10, 2012, 04:21:27 PM »
bahut khub hriday ji bahut hi khoobsurat ehsas aur bahut hi zabardast pukar...

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ripan dev
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«Reply #3 on: August 10, 2012, 05:39:19 PM »
vadhiya ji vadhiy bahut hiiiiiii vadhiya
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«Reply #4 on: August 11, 2012, 01:27:45 AM »
wah wah, dhero taliyan
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«Reply #5 on: August 11, 2012, 03:44:23 AM »
BAhut Khub Hriday Ji
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«Reply #6 on: August 12, 2012, 09:18:32 PM »
Kapil Jee Aadaab!

WaaH jee waaH kia baat hai bahut khoob janab... kia kahne..
Shuru se aakhir tak behad khoob kalaam kahi hai.. Usual Smile

Sabhi khayaal aik se badhkar aik rahe..
Humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rhaiye.. aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   

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«Reply #7 on: August 13, 2012, 01:11:40 AM »
haan mujhe ehsaas hai ki maine vaadon ko toda hai,
karke vaadaa mohabbat ka tumse, maine muh moda hai,

ek khwaab tha khoobsurat sa
tumhe aankhon me basaane ka
tumhaare sang muskuraane ka
chhoot jaaye chaahe duniya saari
akele hi saath nibhaane ka
khushi ke geet gungunaane ka

par kismat ka khel dekho
kya se kya ho ke reh gaya
jo thaa mere dil ke kareeb
wo begaanaa ho ke reh gaya
kami na hone di wafaa ki maine
aur wo mujhe hi bewafaa keh gaya
wo saath jeewan bhar ka dekho
tukdo me bikhar ke reh gaya

maaloom hai mujhe ki haath maine tumhaaraa chhoda hai,
wo kasme, wo vaade pyaar ke, un sabko maine hi toda hai,

par kya tumhe yaad hai
ek vaadaa jo tumhaaraa thaa
wo vaadaa jo tumhe nibhaanaa thaa
bhool jaaun agar main vaade apne
to tumko hi mujhe samjhaanaa thaa
kya huwa jo ek bhool mujhse hui
'maafi', ye to tumhaaraa hi gehnaa thaa
"jaanu tum bhool rahe ho apne vaade"
ye mujhe aake yaad dilaanaa thaa

tum hi kaho main akele saath nibhaaun kaise
judaa ho ke tumse main koi geet gaaun kaise
tum hi to mere har geet ke shabd the jaanaa
bina shabd ke main ab koi geet banaaun kaise
main tanha hoon, main ab muskuraaun kaise

ruk jaate tum, maanaa galti meri thi, maine dil toda hai,
karke vaade wafaa ke bich raah pe maine saath chhoda hai,

aajaao na , jaanaa ab to aa jaao naa,
reh ke duur mujhse, mujhe sataao naa,
maantaa hoon kasoor mera tha sab, par
aake jaanaa mujhe maaf kar jaao naa

ab na kabhi main tumhe tadpaaungaa
vaade mohabbat ke main nibhaaungaa
aake lag jaao mere seene se ek baar
to main fir se khulke muskuraaungaa
jaanaa, main fir se gungunaaungaa
main fir se khushi ke geet gaaungaa...

*****HRIDAY*****
badhai badhai badhai.bahut khob jinab.
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«Reply #8 on: August 27, 2012, 03:16:28 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaa Mukesh ji... aapne itni khoobsurti se taarif kiya hai ki thanks kehne ke liye mere paas shabd nahi hain... main aapka tahe dil se shukriyaa adaa karta hoon... bahut bahut shukriyaa Mukesh ji....!!!

Bahut khoob Hriday jee
wah..kya baat hai
ek saccha ehsaas.. badee khoobsurti se nibhaya hai aapne.
sach bhi..dil to vahee hai..dhadakne ka andaaj bhee vahee.
par roohe alag alag hain.
isiliye to bhata hai..sabko..har vo dil jisne ise mahsoos kiya hai..dhadkan kee aavaaj suni hai..roya hai..tadpa hai..


vaaaaah..kya likhun sab to aapne likh diya.. :Clap:
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«Reply #9 on: August 29, 2012, 03:34:18 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Soudagar ji....!!!

bahut khub hriday ji bahut hi khoobsurat ehsas aur bahut hi zabardast pukar...

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«Reply #10 on: August 30, 2012, 05:23:47 AM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Ripan ji....!!!

vadhiya ji vadhiy bahut hiiiiiii vadhiya
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«Reply #11 on: September 01, 2012, 06:36:55 AM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Nandbahu ji...!!!

wah wah, dhero taliyan
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«Reply #12 on: September 02, 2012, 01:06:01 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Sanjeev ji....!!!

BAhut Khub Hriday Ji
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«Reply #13 on: September 02, 2012, 03:49:32 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Parwaaz ji....!!!

Kapil Jee Aadaab!

WaaH jee waaH kia baat hai bahut khoob janab... kia kahne..
Shuru se aakhir tak behad khoob kalaam kahi hai.. Usual Smile

Sabhi khayaal aik se badhkar aik rahe..
Humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rhaiye.. aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   


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«Reply #14 on: September 02, 2012, 03:50:31 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Sushil ji....!!!

badhai badhai badhai.bahut khob jinab.
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