Ek Roti "Khwaish"

by khwaish on March 04, 2012, 02:05:58 PM
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«Reply #15 on: March 05, 2012, 12:28:00 PM »
Quote from: bekarar on March 04, 2012, 04:45:54 PM
Applause bahoot achche khayaalat hain khwaish bro  Thumbs UP


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«Reply #16 on: March 05, 2012, 12:30:33 PM »
Quote from: mkv on March 04, 2012, 04:57:02 PM
Bahut bahut khoob Khwaish ji
Applause Applause Applause

Bache ke Har Maasom Sawal Par Jawab Dhoondhntee...!!!
Jhooti Tasaliyon Ke Dam Par zindagi Ki Uljhane Sulja Rahi thi
vaaah..Applause


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«Reply #17 on: March 05, 2012, 12:49:38 PM »
Khawahish Jee Aadaab!


Badi der se soNch raheN the ke aapki is kalaam
par kaheN to kia kaheN... kahne ko lafz nahi mil
raheN the... so aik wargi aaye padheN aur chal diye..

Par aapne jis haqkheekhat ki maNzar kashi ki hai woH
waqai aik haqkhekhat hai... jis ahsaas ko lafz diye
haiN yeH bhi koi hum jaisa aam insaan nahi kar sakta
jaise Shihaab Bhai ne kaha...

Aik umdaa aur dilfareb maNzarkashi par hazaaroN dili daad
kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #18 on: March 05, 2012, 08:14:42 PM »
bahut hi marmik ....awsome khwahish ji!!
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«Reply #19 on: March 06, 2012, 11:48:48 AM »
Quote from: ~Aatish~ on March 04, 2012, 06:53:00 PM
Applause Applause


Ji Shukriya!!!!
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«Reply #20 on: March 06, 2012, 11:51:59 AM »
Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on March 04, 2012, 07:27:34 PM
sachhi bayani khwaish bhai.. Usual Smile

bahut khoob.. Usual Smile

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«Reply #21 on: March 11, 2012, 11:35:36 AM »
Quote from: sarfira on March 05, 2012, 05:00:24 AM
bahott bahott aur bahott khoob Khwaish ji--
ehsaas to baht hi kamaal ke aur dil ko 6une wale hain--

daad kubul karen janaab

khus rahen


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«Reply #22 on: April 07, 2012, 10:59:26 AM »
Quote from: Shihab on March 05, 2012, 05:24:10 AM
wah kya kehne bahut bahut khub khwaish bhai
Is qadar dusron ka dard mahsoos to koi aap jaisa
Dil wala yan nek dil insan hi kar sakta hai, mujh jaison ka kaam nahi, bahut khub likha hai aapne
waise to puri kalaam lajawab hai bhai, par jo upar
Aapne shair likha hai, kya kehne jitni tareef ki jaye bas kam hai, apne aap mein ek ghazal ya nazm hai jitna socho bas utna hi doobte jaaoge, bahut khub,

Shad o aabaad rahiye.

Shihab
Quote from: khwaish on March 04, 2012, 02:05:58 PM
Ek Roti Koi Nahi De Saka Uss Masoom Ko Lekin,

Woh Tasveer Laakhon mein Bhik Gayi,

Jisme Roti Ke Begair Woh Bacha Baitha Tha....!!!!!



Kadi Dhoop mein Aankhon Mein Dard Liye
Ek Maa Apne Bete Ko Bhooka Sula rahi Thi

Paas Naa Koi Bichona Naa Hi Koi Khilona..!!!
Jhooti Kahaniyon Se Bache Ka Mann Behla Rahi Thi

Bache ke Har Maasom Sawal Par Jawab Dhoondhntee...!!!
Jhooti Tasaliyon Ke Dam Par zindagi Ki Uljhane Sulja Rahi thi

Maa Keh rahi Thi  "Beta Aaj Soja Kal pet Bhar Khaa lenge"
UmeedoN Ki Kachi Dor Par  Zindagi ke Din Guzaar Rahi Thi

Papa Jab Aayenge "Roti"  "Khilone" Sab Saath Laayenge..!!!
Wahi Toote Hue Khwaab Aankhon Mein Phir Saja Rahi Thi..

Maa Khamosh Thi Par Uski NazreiN Sab Kuch Keh Gayee..!!!!!
Zindagi To Jeeni Hi Hai!!!Isliye Bas Woh  Jiye Jaa Rahi Thi...

"Khwaish" Shukar Hai Insaan Ke Dard Ki Koi Zubaan Nahi.!!
Varna AankheiN To Sirf Yahan Aansuu Hi Bahaa Rahi Thi....

             
                 ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


Majid Bhai, Aapne Apna Waqt Diya Wahee Bahut Hai..

Aapka Teh Dil Se Shukarguzaar Hoon Bhai..Aur Bhai Kaash Apni Neki Kisi Ki madad karne Mein Kaam Aaye..Aur Aap Kitne Nek Aur Sache Dil insaan Ho main Achi Jaanta Hoon..bas Humesha Aise Hi rahe..

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«Reply #23 on: April 08, 2012, 07:33:11 AM »
Khwaish Bhai Jawab nahi aapka.. Avval Tarze ki Post hai aapki yeh.. dil ke ehasaaon Ko chhoo gaye aapke likhe Yeh alfaaz.. Bahut Bahut Bahut Umda peshkash Hai.. Applause Applause

Daad hi Daad..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley




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«Reply #24 on: April 25, 2012, 03:13:51 PM »
Quote from: pawan16 on March 05, 2012, 05:33:49 AM
awesome writing sir.....bhut bhut khoob sir...


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«Reply #25 on: June 09, 2012, 03:46:38 PM »
Quote from: adil bechain on March 05, 2012, 05:46:43 AM
bahut khoob Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


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«Reply #26 on: September 13, 2012, 06:56:53 PM »
Very Emotional!!! Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #27 on: September 13, 2012, 07:01:43 PM »
Quote from: khwaish on March 04, 2012, 02:05:58 PM
Ek Roti Koi Nahi De Saka Uss Masoom Ko Lekin,

Woh Tasveer Laakhon mein Bhik Gayi,

Jisme Roti Ke Begair Woh Bacha Baitha Tha....!!!!!



Kadi Dhoop mein Aankhon Mein Dard Liye
Ek Maa Apne Bete Ko Bhooka Sula rahi Thi

Paas Naa Koi Bichona Naa Hi Koi Khilona..!!!
Jhooti Kahaniyon Se Bache Ka Mann Behla Rahi Thi

Bache ke Har Maasom Sawal Par Jawab Dhoondhntee...!!!
Jhooti Tasaliyon Ke Dam Par zindagi Ki Uljhane Sulja Rahi thi

Maa Keh rahi Thi  "Beta Aaj Soja Kal pet Bhar Khaa lenge"
UmeedoN Ki Kachi Dor Par  Zindagi ke Din Guzaar Rahi Thi

Papa Jab Aayenge "Roti"  "Khilone" Sab Saath Laayenge..!!!
Wahi Toote Hue Khwaab Aankhon Mein Phir Saja Rahi Thi..

Maa Khamosh Thi Par Uski NazreiN Sab Kuch Keh Gayee..!!!!!
Zindagi To Jeeni Hi Hai!!!Isliye Bas Woh  Jiye Jaa Rahi Thi...

"Khwaish" Shukar Hai Insaan Ke Dard Ki Koi Zubaan Nahi.!!
Varna AankheiN To Sirf Yahan Aansuu Hi Bahaa Rahi Thi....

             
                 ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
vry impressive thoughts......aakhri sheir dil ko choo gaya khwaish ji....bohat kam log hote hain jo 2sron ke dard ko yun dil kee gehrayon se feel krte hain ,,,aap bhi un mein se hain ....
yoo hi likhte rahen
shaad rahen........
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«Reply #28 on: October 01, 2012, 03:33:01 PM »
Quote from: khwaish on March 04, 2012, 02:05:58 PM
Ek Roti Koi Nahi De Saka Uss Masoom Ko Lekin,

Woh Tasveer Laakhon mein Bhik Gayi,

Jisme Roti Ke Begair Woh Bacha Baitha Tha....!!!!!



Kadi Dhoop mein Aankhon Mein Dard Liye
Ek Maa Apne Bete Ko Bhooka Sula rahi Thi

Paas Naa Koi Bichona Naa Hi Koi Khilona..!!!
Jhooti Kahaniyon Se Bache Ka Mann Behla Rahi Thi

Bache ke Har Maasom Sawal Par Jawab Dhoondhntee...!!!
Jhooti Tasaliyon Ke Dam Par zindagi Ki Uljhane Sulja Rahi thi

Maa Keh rahi Thi  "Beta Aaj Soja Kal pet Bhar Khaa lenge"
UmeedoN Ki Kachi Dor Par  Zindagi ke Din Guzaar Rahi Thi

Papa Jab Aayenge "Roti"  "Khilone" Sab Saath Laayenge..!!!
Wahi Toote Hue Khwaab Aankhon Mein Phir Saja Rahi Thi..

Maa Khamosh Thi Par Uski NazreiN Sab Kuch Keh Gayee..!!!!!
Zindagi To Jeeni Hi Hai!!!Isliye Bas Woh  Jiye Jaa Rahi Thi...

"Khwaish" Shukar Hai Insaan Ke Dard Ki Koi Zubaan Nahi.!!
Varna AankheiN To Sirf Yahan Aansuu Hi Bahaa Rahi Thi....

             
                 ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

 Applause Applause Applause Applause
wonderful heart touching creation woooow  Thumbs UP
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